书面表达之概要写作公开课
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高中英语说明文概要写作省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件
Various as people’s names are, they have developed gradually in some common ways.
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Paraphrase supporting points 1, 2 &3 on your own and then share them with your desk mate.
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04 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Read for the style, topic sentence and structure
Step 2. Find the key information of each paragraph
Step 3. Paraphrase(改写) Step 4. Write the draft(初稿) and better it
what they mean?
• Some people give their children names that means good things. Clara means
“bright” Leonard
; Beatrice means means “as brave
a“sonaeliwonh”oe. gxivaems hpalpepsiness”;
As to people’s names, various origins and meanings are involved.
Faced with a variety of names, people may be curiou整s合ab、o提ut炼how they come into being.
Donald
means
第13页
Paraphrase supporting points 1, 2 &3 on your own and then share them with your desk mate.
第5页
04 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Read for the style, topic sentence and structure
Step 2. Find the key information of each paragraph
Step 3. Paraphrase(改写) Step 4. Write the draft(初稿) and better it
what they mean?
• Some people give their children names that means good things. Clara means
“bright” Leonard
; Beatrice means means “as brave
a“sonaeliwonh”oe. gxivaems hpalpepsiness”;
As to people’s names, various origins and meanings are involved.
Faced with a variety of names, people may be curiou整s合ab、o提ut炼how they come into being.
Donald
means
2024版省级公开课课件高中概要写作公开课课件
目录•课程介绍与目标•概要写作基础知识•文本分析与概括技巧•语言表达与写作技巧•实例分析与讨论•课程总结与展望课程介绍与目标0102 03提高学生概要写作能力通过本课程的学习，使学生能够熟练掌握概要写作的基本技巧和方法，提高写作效率和质量。
培养学生批判性思维概要写作要求学生能够深入理解文本内容，并对其进行客观、理性的分析和评价，有助于培养学生的批判性思维。
促进学生学术素养提升概要写作是学术写作的重要组成部分，通过本课程的学习，可以帮助学生提升学术素养，为未来的学术研究和论文写作打下基础。
概要写作课程的目的掌握概要写作的基本概念、原则和方法，了解不同文体的概要写作特点。
知识目标能力目标情感目标能够独立完成不同文体的概要写作任务，做到内容准确、语言简练、结构清晰。
培养学生对概要写作的兴趣和热情，提高学生的写作自信心和成就感。
030201教学目标与要求上课时间每周一次，每次2小时，共16周。
课程安排本课程共分为四个部分，包括概要写作基础知识、不同文体的概要写作、概要写作技巧和方法、实践训练与作品展示。
课程形式采用线上和线下相结合的方式，包括课堂讲授、小组讨论、个人练习和作品展示等环节。
课程安排与时间概要写作基础知识概要写作的定义与特点定义概要写作是一种对原文进行简洁、准确、全面概括的写作形式，它要求作者在理解原文的基础上，用简洁的语言表达出原文的主要内容和中心思想。
特点概要写作具有简洁性、准确性、全面性和客观性。
它要求作者在保持原文意思不变的前提下，尽可能简化语言，突出重点，同时避免主观色彩和个人观点。
ABDC理解原文在进行概要写作之前，首先要仔细阅读原文，确保充分理解原文的主要内容和中心思想。
突出重点概要写作应该突出原文的重点内容，包括主要观点、重要事实、关键细节等。
简化语言概要写作要求使用简洁的语言表达原文的意思，避免冗长和复杂的句子结构。
保持客观概要写作应该保持客观中立的立场，避免添加个人主观色彩和观点。
高考英语复习课件：书面表达之如何写文章概要 (共74张PPT)
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写作步骤
读写任务型作文从审题到成文可采用以下七个步骤： 第一步：仔细审题，明确题目要求 通过审题明确文章主题、写作文体、写作内容、主 要时态和主体人称。主体人称需要特别注意。
007-2021届高中英语书面表达之如何写文章概要
近年来英语高考作文出现了读写任务型作文形 式。为让考生掌握这种文体的写作技巧和结构范式， 本部分从谋篇布局等写作技巧入手，通过感悟范文 和案例仿写，让考生在动手动脑中感悟满分作文的 组织架构和写作技巧，把作文写得规范合体、像模 像样。
读写任务型作文主要以记叙文和议论文为主， 议论性居多，其写作内容分为两个部分：
Still,don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and,as a result,may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
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第二节 概要写作(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman,author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids,says,“We've gone to the
高中英语：概要写作公开课
Tip2: If the topic sentence includes all the key information, it serves as the main point.
Para2
Arnold Glass, a professor in Rutgers University in New Jersey4, and a student researcher investigated the issue of divided student attention. The study involved 118 Rutgers students who were taking the same level college class. The students were permitted to use any electronic device during half of their daily class periods. During the other half, no one was allowed to use any technology.
概 要 写 作指导课 Summary writing
Read for Writing Style
Writing Style
Function
Narration 记叙文
to give an account of an event or series
of events
√ Exposition 说明文
to state the facts
In fact, a special software program has been created. Students can use the program, which engages students more with the class material on their personal devices during a given class. It can also be used to observe student activity and prevent them from opening unrelated pages and programs.
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Arnold Glass, a professor in Rutgers University in New Jersey4, and a student researcher investigated the issue of divided student attention. The study involved 118 Rutgers students who were taking the same level college class. The students were permitted to use any electronic device during half of their daily class periods. During the other half, no one was allowed to use any technology.
概 要 写 作指导课 Summary writing
Read for Writing Style
Writing Style
Function
Narration 记叙文
to give an account of an event or series
of events
√ Exposition 说明文
to state the facts
In fact, a special software program has been created. Students can use the program, which engages students more with the class material on their personal devices during a given class. It can also be used to observe student activity and prevent them from opening unrelated pages and programs.
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关注时事热点，积累素材
阅读权威媒体
定期阅读人民日报、新华社等权 威媒体的新闻报道，了解国内外
时事热点和政策动态。
分类整理素材
将收集到的素材按照主题进行分 类整理，如教育、科技、文化等，
方便写作时快速查找。
学会运用素材
在写作过程中，尝试将积累的素 材与论点相结合，增强文章的说
服力和可读性。
挖掘深层含义，确定立意
在理解题意的基础上，深入挖掘题目 背后的深层含义，从而确定文章的中 心思想和立意。
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篇章布局规划技巧
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合理分段，保持连贯
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根据文章内容和结构，合理划分段落，保持段落之间的连贯性
和逻辑性。
突出重点，详略得当
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在篇章布局中，要突出重点内容，对重要部分进行详细阐述，
合理安排段落结构 每个段落应有一个明确的主题句，支持句应紧扣主题句展 开。
使用逻辑清晰的连接方式 使用合适的转折词、因果词等，使文章逻辑更加严密。
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实战演练与案例分析
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历年真题回顾及解析
高考概要写作历年真题梳理
整理近年来高考概要写作的真题，分析命题趋势和要点。
真题解析与答题技巧
调整语序，突出重点
根据需要调整句子语序，将重要信息放在突出位置，使句子更加有 力。
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常见错误类型及避免方法
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信息遗漏或误解
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仔细阅读题目和要求 确保完全理解写作任务，不遗漏任何关键信息。
提取关键信息 从所给材料中提炼出主要信息点，确保全面覆盖。
浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
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Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
高中英语Summary Writing概要写作公开课精品PPT课件
Para.1: Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
高中英语-概要写作课summary公开课-课件
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
10
Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
14
Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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高中英语概要写作找要点公开课课件
If there is no topic sentence in a paragraph, summarize the key point according to the key words.
How to Get Key Points?
Find the topic sentence for each paragraph.
The last sentence
Why is work good for health？ It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and solitary when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy.
The first sentence
Scientists find that the hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidences show that the jobless are in poorer health than job-holders. An investigation shows that whenever the unemployment rate increases by 1%，the death rate increases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to(可归结为) one point：work is helpful to health.
How to Get Key Points?
Find the topic sentence for each paragraph.
The last sentence
Why is work good for health？ It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and solitary when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy.
The first sentence
Scientists find that the hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidences show that the jobless are in poorer health than job-holders. An investigation shows that whenever the unemployment rate increases by 1%，the death rate increases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to(可归结为) one point：work is helpful to health.
上海高二 概要写作公开课(26页)
Summary Writing 上海 高二年级
Write a Summary of an Exposition
“Think green!" We have all heard this slogan many times, but do we understand what it means?Climete change is real, and it will have an effect on us, our health, and the health of the planet, so maybe it's time to do something about it. A great way to "think green"is to tum off the electronics in our homes and spend time doing other activities instead of watching TV or surfing the Internet. The planet is helped because we are using less enengy. And if we are not using our electronic devices, we will have time to exercise,connect with our friends, and develop other interests and hobbies. We can choose activities that are both enjoyable and kind to the pianet. So, what is a good way to use this free time? One idea is to plant a vegetable garden, which will help both the gardener and the planet. The gardener gets exercise, time outdoors in the fresh air, the satisfaction of raising food, as well as the benefit o?eating well.
Write a Summary of an Exposition
“Think green!" We have all heard this slogan many times, but do we understand what it means?Climete change is real, and it will have an effect on us, our health, and the health of the planet, so maybe it's time to do something about it. A great way to "think green"is to tum off the electronics in our homes and spend time doing other activities instead of watching TV or surfing the Internet. The planet is helped because we are using less enengy. And if we are not using our electronic devices, we will have time to exercise,connect with our friends, and develop other interests and hobbies. We can choose activities that are both enjoyable and kind to the pianet. So, what is a good way to use this free time? One idea is to plant a vegetable garden, which will help both the gardener and the planet. The gardener gets exercise, time outdoors in the fresh air, the satisfaction of raising food, as well as the benefit o?eating well.
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Step One-- Warming up & Leading in
Q1: Who are they? Q2: What are they? Q3: Whose contributions to society are less? Q4: Whose income are higher? Q5: Does he deserve the high pay?
知识目标：To help students catch the main idea of the passage and each paragraph 能力目标：To help students conclude the passage in their own language 情感态度与价值观： Guide studvely 教学重点： To help the students find out the topic sentences quickly and correctly 教学难点： To help the students replace them with proper vocabularies and sentence structures 教学方法： Analyzing, comparing, conclusion 教学工具：Multimedia facilities, blackboard
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要（上）。 As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous American basketball star, for instance, earns an income of more than 20 million dollars a year. Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting. Some even argue that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people. Their contributions to society are much less than those made by doctors, firemen, scientists, professors, etc. But I can never agree with that.
While sports are for entertainment, it does not mean that they are not important to people’s life. Why do so many people go to see football matches and NBA games？ It is because they enjoy the games, and they are willing to pay to watch the performances. Because of the sports stars, our life becomes more exciting. Some sports stars gain honor for their country, and their countrymen are proud of them. They contribute to the spiritual well-being of their people.
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要(下）。 What’s more, sports stars usually are at the top of level in their fields. In this world, you have to pay if you want the best. It is the same with sports. Skills in sports are like the skills in works of art. People will not say that Da Vinci’s painting Mona Lisa was bought for too much money. Most stars are skilled in their own field not only because of their talents but also because of their hard training. They have to keep performing at their peak to earn that good income.
Their influence on the national economy can not be overlooked. Take NBA in America for example, the stars help to support not only the basketball industry, but also other related industries like sportswear and sports equipment. Sports stars also make constant appearance in advertisements. Since they are well known in the world, they attract many people’s attention, which often leads to an immediate boom in the sales of the products that are advertised by them.