高中英语_应用文写作_求助信_导学案_带答案

求助信_导学案

一、文体概述

求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。通常包括三部分内容：

二、常用语块

(1)做某事有麻烦have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth

(2)给某人帮助do sb a favor/give sb a hand

(3)寻求帮助ask for help/seek help

(4)遇到一些问题encounter some problems

(5)面临困难be faced with difficulties

(6)忙于做某事be busy doing sth/be engaged in doing sth

(7)急需/迫切需要in urgent need of

(8)专业指导professional guidance

(9)学以致用put…into use

(10)让某人失望let sb down

(11)克服恐惧overcome the fear

(12)取得巨大的进步make great progress

(13)渴望做某事be anxious to do sth/long to do sth

(14)提供一些有建设性的指导offer some constructive guidance

(15)因某事感激某人be grateful to sb for sth

三、常用句式

1.开头

(1)我写信想请您帮我一个忙。

I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand./I'm writing to ask for your help.

(2)面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。

Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.

2.正文

(3)我想知道你是否能为我推荐……。

I'm wondering if you could recommend … to me.

[例]我想知道你是否能为我推荐几首比赛用的诗。

I'm wondering if you could recommend some poems to me for the competition.

(4)你能就……给我一些建议吗？

could you give me some tips on …?/Would you please offer me some advice on…?

[例]我想知道你是否能为我推荐几首比赛用的诗。

Could you give me some tips on the basic skills of recitation?

(5)如果在……方面有什么注意事项，请一定要告诉我。

If there are any do’s and don’ts in terms of …, please do let me know.

[例]如果在着装礼仪等方面有什么注意事项，请告诉我。

If there are any do’s and don’ts in terms of dressing manners and so on, please do let me know.

3.结束语

(6)如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。

I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand/help me.

(7)如果你能花点时间来看一下并做些必要的修改，我将不胜感激。

I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through it and make necessary changes.

四、典题示例

(2021年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试)假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括：

1. 说明比赛要求；

2. 请他推荐英文诗；

3. 请教朗诵技巧。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

第一步：审题构思很关键

一、审题

1. 确定体裁：本文为求助信

2. 确定人称：第一人称

3. 时态：一般现在时

二、构思

第一段：表明写信目的，即寻求帮助

第二段：说明比赛要求，请他推荐英文诗并请教朗诵技巧。

第三段：表达感谢，希望得到帮助

第二步：核心词汇想周全

英文诗朗诵比赛English Poetry Recitation Competition 参赛者competitors

给我推荐几首诗recommend some poems to me

与挑战和梦想相关的主题related to the topics of challenges and dreams

请在我的阅读技巧上给我一些指导，比如声调、情感和手势offer me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture

第三步：由词扩句雏形现

Para. 2 说明比赛要求，请他推荐英文诗并请教朗诵技巧。

1. 我们学校下个月将举行英语诗歌朗诵比赛。

An English Poetry Recitation Competition is going to be held next month in our school.

2. 我们参赛者被要求在3分钟内朗诵一首英文诗。

We competitors are required to recite an English poem within 3 minutes.

3. 我想知道您是否可以为我推荐一些比赛用的诗。

I am wondering if you could recommend some poems to me for the competition.

4. 如果主题是关于挑战和梦想，那就更好了。

It would be better if the topics are related to challenges and dreams.

5. 您能不能给我一些阅读技巧方面的指导，比如语气、情感和手势。

W ould you be kind enough to offer me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture?

Para. 3 表达感谢，希望得到帮助

6. 如果您能为我提供帮助，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。

I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.

第四步：过渡衔接连成篇

One possible version：

Dear George,

I’m writing for your help.

An English Poetry Recitation Competition is going to be held next month in our school. We competitors are required to recite an English poem within 3 minutes. Therefore, I am wondering if you could recommend some poems to me for the competition. And it would be better if the themes are related to challenges and dreams. Moreover, would you be kind enough to offer me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture?