英语作文写作笔记

大作文段落分配：15=4 +（7~8）+ 4【40字+80字+40字】

第一段

（第一句）Describe/depict描述画面（宏观总括）

The picture above gives us a vivid description of …..(two disabled people,此处不应详细描写)

（第二句）just as（画面细节描述）（2）

Just as we can see from the picture, …

（第三句）just…go（谚语举例，可省略）

（第四句）aim at图片设计的目的(点题)

Obviously/Undoubtely, the picture aims at reminding (/convincing us) of……

第二段(微观方面+宏观方面/个人+社会/正面论证+反面论证阐述主题的重要性或深刻含义)

（第一大句）主题句（引言铺垫）

…is extremely important to us, especially to…..。

The implied meaning of the drawing can be interpreted in terms of (从…方面)mutual help and coopration.

（第二大句）第一层意思(1~2)/ （第二大句）第一层意思(1~3)正面

论证

As is known to us all,…..

To begin with ,…

（第三大句）第二层意思(1~2)/ （第三大句）第二层意思(1~3)反面论证

Beside,…..

（第四大句）第三层意思(1~2)/

Last but not least,…..

（第五大句）收尾再次强调主题词（1）

As a result,…is essential to both…and…

第三段（采取措施、提倡主题）(4)

（第一句）

Form all mentioned above,therefore,we can come to a conclusion that we should put great emphasis on…(主题)

In my view ,some necessary measures must be taken to make people realize that…(主题)

Therefore ,we should keep it in mind“名言”

(第二句）(行动上怎么做)/（微观总结）

First of all,…

For one thing,..

(第三句)（意识怎么做）/（宏观总结）

In addition,…

For another,…

(第四句)(号召或预测)

Only in these ways ,can we (build up a society full of harmony). Only by….,can …,and only in this way ,can…

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小作文(致歉信)段落分配：2+3+3+1

第一段

（第一句）自报家门（背景）

I am Li Ming. …. from…who…

（第二句）写信目的（目的）

Now ,I am writing ….to(目的)……for(由于)…

第二段（描述事件过程）

（第一句）介绍事件背景

During ….., ….

（第二句）介绍事件发生过程

（第三句）:略表歉意

I feel quite sorry for this.

第三段：（解决办法）

（第一句）办法一

（第二句）让步，办法二

第四段：（诚挚歉意）

Again，please forgive me for the convenience caused you.

写作范例：

Dear sir.

I am …and I intend to …because I learned from the newspaper that the children have been deprived of the right to…(背景目的原因) You need to make two factors into consideration when you are looking for such a candidate. on the one hand ,….on the other hand . the girl student with outstanding academic achievements will be preferred . （要求）

I intend to carry out my plan as follows: for one thing …for another ,…（行动）

I am looking forward to ….thank you in advance（致谢）

英语句法：

句前状语+前置定语（主语）+后置定语+状语（谓语）+补

语+前置定语（宾语）+后置定语

1）主+动

The price is increasing due to ….

2）主+动+宾

In order to ensure good health ,we should develop good living habits Enhancing the …is ,in the long run, benefical to the stability of…

3）主+动+主补(很少用)

We are eager to turn our dreams into reality.

4）主+动+间宾+直宾

The social practice offers us multiple opportunities to apply what we have learn from books to the real practice

Traveling abroad offers us a good chance to have a better understanding of the western cultures , which is benefical to the friendship between the …and…

5）主+动+宾+宾补

The extensive use of internet has made our daily life more convenient and efficient than ever before .especially in the fields of…

经典句型：

Were it left to me to make a choice between the two points , I