[课件]第六讲： 行文逻辑

逻辑错误
I remember she doesn't hesitate to help me whenever we have trouble in learning English. However, we are grateful to Tracy from the bottom of our heart. He makes great efforts in his work. Therefore, after a long time of pains without gains, he decides to give up. To our relief, some laws and regulations have been worked out to punish those who drive before drinking. Some are even selfish and care much for others. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Passage 12
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介词（固定搭配）
从句引导词（名从） 形容词副词（形副误用） 非谓语动词（谓语动词冗余） 非谓语动词（谓语动词冗余/添加） 非谓语动词（ing/ed区别） 代词（指代单复数一致）
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时态（一现→一过）
主谓一致（have→has） 及物不及物（删减）
Passage 13
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice
Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going
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逻辑错误
Kids may be too young to tell right from wrong with the guidance of their parents. He promised to give me five thousand yuan when summer holidays come. If not, I will be able to afford to go on vacation. Li Hua stood up, put on his broken glasses and kept on running. "Come on ！You cannot do it ！" Everyone on the sports field was cheering for her.
Nowadays, students are spoiled by our parents and form the habit of relying on others. They can do anything but study.
I'll have enough time to make sure the hotel provided you with what we need.
Passage 12
Mistakes are unavoidBiblioteka Baiduble in life. But attitudes with them may make a
difference. I still remember whether my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silently in oral class to avoid make mistakes. Before
well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me, " she said, put
her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (拥抱）you?" The woman smiled happily as she
Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as we were expected.
Before we leave the classroom ,we made sure the lights and the computer were turned on.
long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me speak out what I
wanted to say regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could have avoided it. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I build up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean have its black. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting for us.