公开课观点对比类基础写作

Sentence 4 模仿多，没有自己的风格 Sentence 5 沉迷于“明星梦”，无心学习；有 上当受骗的危险 模仿...风格 model after/imitate...rather than...style 沉迷于be lost in their dreams.....concentrate on their studies 有上当受骗的危险 in danger of being cheated 表达反对的观点 People who are against the idea think that… other students hold the different opinion / view that .... However, others don’t agree because they think...
Sentence 2 展示才艺，增加社会经验；增强自信 Sentence 3 有利于学生全面（adj.）发展 show their talents of art increase their experience build up their confidence be beneficial to/ be good for students' overall development/develop overally 表达赞同观点 …of them are in favor of the idea that… People who are for the idea think … Some people believe that… … ….of them hold the opinion that…
How to polish your Writing
可能需要的连词 并列关系： and, as well as, also… 递进关系： besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more… 比较、对比： like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand…however
2. Tense:
3.Person: Step 2 Organization
Simple present tense and present continuous tense Third
的危险
Sentence 1 目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目 表演（talent shows）,对此，中学生的看法各有不同。 Sentence 2 展示才艺，增加社会经验；增强自信 Sentence 3 有利于学生全面（adj.）发展 Sentence 4 模仿多，没有自己的风格 Sentence 5 沉迷于“明星梦”，无心学习；有上当受骗
positive views negative views
Phrases and Sentences
Sentence 1 目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节 目表演（talent shows）,对此，中学生的看法各有不 同。
at present/presently/nowadays/recently more and more teenagers/ an increasing number of teenagers take part in/participate in 对此，中学生的看法各有不同。
Basic writing
with the contrast of positive and negative
views
正反观点对比
Learning goals:
1.To learn the structure of basic writing with the contrast of positive and negative views 2.To build a group of phrases and sentences 3.To write this kind of writing smoothly
Works of students
1.....place less emphasis on their study... 2.Those who support it believe that..... 3......provide students with a broader platform/stage to show their gift. 4......arm them with full confidence and enough energy. 5......enrich their social experience... 6......expose themselvess to the danger of.... 7.There exists two voices.... 8...drawn in the dream of becoming a star. 9...go in for a diversity of TV talent shows. 10...an increasing number of teenagers have been crazy about taking part in talent shows...
Step 3
Basic writing with the contrast of positive and negative views
Brainstorm---structure
State the problem/phenomenon
positive views
negative views
Own idea
Students take different attitudes towards… There be different attitudes towards… Different students have different views on... Students’ views / ideas /opinions on it vary /differ from person to person. Students’ opinions are divided.
Sample sentences: Sentence 4 Other students hold the different opinion / view that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original and that they don’t have their own style. Sentence 5 Some are too lost in their dreams to concentrate on their studies and some of them are in danger of being cheated by others.
• Sample sentences: • Sentence 1 • At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. • 定语从句 • Students take different attitudes towards the problem that more and more teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows recently. 同位语从句
Sample sentences: Sentence 2 Some believe that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing to their social experience and build up their confidence. Sentence 3 It’s good for/beneficial to their overall development.
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【写作要求】 1.必须用5个句子表达全部的内容； 2.将5个句子组成连贯的短文。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Step 1 Analyse
1.Type:
Argumentation(with the contrast of positive and negative views)
The steps of Basic Writing
Step 1 Analyse(Tense,Person and style） Step 2 Organize(five sentences) Step 3 Translate Step 4 Polish the composition Step 5 Check
structure
Sentence 1 目前，越来越多 的青少年参加各类 电视 节目表演（talent shows）, 对此，中学生的看法各有不 同。 Sentence 2 展示才艺，增加 社会经验；增强自信 Sentence 3 有利于学生全面 （adj.）发展 Sentence 4 模仿多，没有自 己的风格 Sentence 5 沉迷于“明星 梦”，无心学习；有上当受 骗的危险 State the problem/ph enomenon
Ⅲ 写作(共两节，满分40分) 第一节 基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分) 目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才 艺表演（talent shows）。对此，中学生的看法 各有不同。现在进行时 ① 现在进行时
赞同 不赞同
1.展示才艺，增加社会经验； 模仿多，没有自己的风 格；沉迷于“明星梦”， 2.增强自信； 3.有利于学生全面adj.发展。 无心学习；有上当受骗 的危险。
At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. Some believe that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing to their social experience and build up their confidence. What’s more, it’s good for their overall development. However, other students hold the different opinion / view that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original and that they don’t have their own style. Besides, some are too lost in their dreams to concentrate on their studies and some of them are in danger of being cheated by others.
Ⅲ 写作(共两节，满分40分) 第一节 基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分) 目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才 艺表演（talent shows）。对此，中学生的看法 各有不同。
赞同 不赞同
1.展示才艺，增加社会经验； 模仿多，没有自己的风 格；沉迷于“明星梦”， 2.增强自信； 3.有利于学生全面adj.发展。 无心学习；有上当受骗 的危险。 【写作要求】 1.必须用5个句子表达全部的内容； 2.将5个句子组成连贯的短文。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。