翻译的顺序调整法

change of the situation
Now look at Para 4:
When Canada took similar measures to protect the supply of herring in the 1970s, the fish eventually recovered. But experts say that some species today have been so wasted, they may never recover. The government also faces protests from Canadian fishermen. About 40,000 are now unemployed as a result of the fishing bans and loss of their fish supply.
Natural Word Order of English S + V +O +A Natural Word Order of Chinese S + A + V + O
I sang loudly in my room this morning. (1) (2) (3) (4)
今天早上我在房间里 大声 歌唱。
2. Science and technology are developing rapidly with each passing day. At the same time, tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to finance your college education had become a matter of concern for many. You can deal with it in many ways. You can get all of the money from your parents. You can apply for a loan especially set up for college students. You can also acquire the money completely by yourself, doing a full-time job in summer or winter holiday. In addition, you can ask your parents for most of it and earn the rest in your spare time in college, by doing a part-time job.
顺序调整法
inversion
Translation
Inversion:
the necessary or even inevitable change of word-order in a sentence according to the usage of the language to be translated into. Special attention should be paid to attributive and adverbial.
successful fish protection measures
unsuccessful protection measures
protest against these protection measures
measures to protect fish
Notes: The principle of unity should be followed not only in a single paragraph but in several paragraphs concerning one topic. In passage A the writer of the article lists a few examples of countries undertaking new environmental initiatives. Most of the examples are presented in a very common writing structure: situation-problem-solutionresult/evaluation. All these should center around one topic: the problem. Let’s take paragraphs 6,7, and 8 about what happened in Brazil as an example.
因为禁渔和捕鱼数量的减 少，现在已有大约4万 （渔民）失业。
按原句序：大约4万 （渔民）现在已失业， 因为禁渔和捕鱼数量 的减少。
Writing
Unity in the Paragraph
INTRODUCTION
A paragraph is unified when all the sentences in the paragraph are focused on one central thought or on a single topic. When you write a paragraph, be sure that each sentence contributes to the theme, and any irrelevant information is excluded. Let’s take paragraph 1 as an example:
The Soviet Red Army dealt a crushing blow to and defeated the aggressor troops of the German fascists at Stalingrad in November 1942.
1942年11月，苏联红 军在斯大林格勒狠很 地打败了德国法西斯 的侵略军。
(3)But in recent years, as environmental damage has increased, signs of change have sprung up in various pockets around the world.
change of the situation
力学上所用的“力”这 个术语，在日常生活中 就是“推”或“拉”。
But with such a large population base, the country must still convert millions more to the idea of birth control if it is to reach its population targets.
(1)In most parts of the world, environmental awareness does not exist.
lack of environmental awareness
(2)The great majority of nations concern themselves with economic development, further explanation regardless of its effect on the global ecology.
(4)The following are a supportive examples few examples of countries undertaking new environmental initiatives.
lack of environmental awareness
environmental awareness
但是因为该国的人口基数 十分大，要想达到政府的 人口目标，印尼还必须再 转变几百万人的思想，他 们接受节制生育的观念。
按原句序：印尼还必 须再转变几百万人的 思想，如果它要想达 到政府的人口目标，
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Now, 500 years later, excessive fishing has reduced
按原句序：苏联红军狠 狠地打败了德国法西斯 的侵略军在斯大林格勒， 1942年11月。
The term “force”, as used in mechanics, refers to what is known in everyday language as a push or pull.
按原句序： “力” 这个术语，正如 力学上所用的
1. Riding a bicycle has a lot of advantages over driving a car. First, it is a physical exercise to ride a bicycle. in contrast, sitting in the car, one tends to gain weight. Besides, it is much more economical to ride a bike than drive a car. The only fee a bike-rider has to pay is the annual tax. However, the annual fees for a car are costly. Most important of all, it is beneficial to the environment to ride a bicycle because the bike doesn’t consume petrol; it is a pollution-free transport. In contrast, the exhaust released by the car is harmful to the environment. Scientists should find a way to reduce its damage to the environment.
(4) (3) (2) (1)
We ate to our hearts’ content at her home last Sunday.
我们上星期天在她家尽情地吃了一顿。
He is not happy, though he is rich. 他虽然富有， 但并不幸福。
But in recent years, as environmental damage has increased, signs of change have sprung up in various pockets around the world. ( L.4)
Background:situation (the world’s largest jungle rain forest)
topic: Problem (environmental disaster) Solution: ended tax favors, agreed to finance new forest protection projects
··世界各地出现 ·· ·· 了许多变化的迹 象。
按原句序: ··许多 ·· ·· 改变的迹象出现在 世界各地。
The heat energy produced is equal to the electrical energy utilized.
能源所产生的热量
等于 所使用的电能。
The government promises it will protect the region’s native people, but questions remain as to its true level of commitment. ( L.37)
result protested the move, continue to destroy the forests
Read the following paragraphs and analyze:
Which of the sentences
doesn’t contribute to the topic?
the number of fish to dangerously low levels. ( L.11 )
已使鱼的数量减少到 了危险的程度。
原句序：已减少了鱼的 数量到危险的程度。
About 40,000 are now unemployed as a result of the fishing bans and less of their fish supply. ( L. 19 )
按原句语序: ··· 疑虑仍 ··· 然存在于对这个承诺的 可信度。 ··· 人们对这个承诺的 ··· 可信度仍然心存疑虑。
It was reported that revolts sometimes flared up in the south.
按原句序：叛乱有时 发生在南方。
据报道，南方有时发 生叛乱。