高中英语记叙文的写作
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中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。
中心段细节描写练习
请找出下文与主题无关的细节 An accident
This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On coming near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident.
例文– A traffic accident中心段赏析
It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st). （补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car. Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood. （交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过）After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果）
记叙文常用句式——首段：交代主题
It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.
All through my senior high school, I couldn’t forget …
In the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to my memory/kept haunting me.
记叙文
记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以 写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史， 游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。
这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三 人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感 受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。
记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文 用各种时态。
பைடு நூலகம்
记叙文写作的注意事项
例文– A traffic accident
中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切
相关的内容，从而点明文章中心。 从首段也可看出 文章重点在traffic
accident和stick in my mind
注意空间的移动：I got there…
例文– A traffic accident结尾段赏析
结尾段：可适当发表一点议论
In my opinion, the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street. Besides, the driver might have driven too fast, regardless of such bad weather. Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if we become aware of the importance of safety.（结尾）
首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人 物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind.
例文– A traffic accident
一、交代背景 文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的
时间、地点、人物以及事件等 二、详略得当 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关
的内容，从而点明文章中心。 三、条理清晰 记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述， 要求层次清晰、条理清楚。
例文– A traffic accident
中心段细节描写练习
请找出下文与主题无关的细节 An accident
This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On coming near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident.
例文– A traffic accident中心段赏析
It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st). （补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car. Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood. （交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过）After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果）
记叙文常用句式——首段：交代主题
It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.
All through my senior high school, I couldn’t forget …
In the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to my memory/kept haunting me.
记叙文
记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以 写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史， 游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。
这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三 人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感 受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。
记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文 用各种时态。
பைடு நூலகம்
记叙文写作的注意事项
例文– A traffic accident
中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切
相关的内容，从而点明文章中心。 从首段也可看出 文章重点在traffic
accident和stick in my mind
注意空间的移动：I got there…
例文– A traffic accident结尾段赏析
结尾段：可适当发表一点议论
In my opinion, the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street. Besides, the driver might have driven too fast, regardless of such bad weather. Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if we become aware of the importance of safety.（结尾）
首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人 物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind.
例文– A traffic accident
一、交代背景 文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的
时间、地点、人物以及事件等 二、详略得当 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关
的内容，从而点明文章中心。 三、条理清晰 记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述， 要求层次清晰、条理清楚。
例文– A traffic accident