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several days ago. • After reading the story above, I recall the
experience of my friend who… • After reading the story, I can’t help thinking of… • The story above reminds me of one of my
常用句型： ● We should take some effective measures. ● We should try our best to overcome/conquer the
difficulties. ● We should solve the problems that we are faced with. ● It is necessary that proper actions/ steps should be
In some(2w0a1y,0I年a广gre东e 高wi考th…读写bu任t…务要点1)
WIhaamt tnhoetwinriftaervosraiodfseonucnodusrargeainsgonkaibdlsew, bituht…cash
just because they have got good marks.
模式3. 重述要点
不直接回答写作要 点，而是翻译要点作 为段落主题句。
M中od学e生l：活在和生大活学中生谅活解的他差人别有. 何(2重00要8高意考义读. 写任 From the story I learn that un务de要rs点ta3n)ding anAds fwoergailvliknngoowth, ecrosllpeglaeylsifaenisimwpidoerltyadnitfrfeorleent frinomoumr liidfde.le school life.
模式5.引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等
M如o何de才l: 能说获说得人快们乐对？环境保护所采取的措施。 WLeucskhiolyu,ldmfoinredasnodmme eofrfeecmtievaeswuraeyssatroemake
beoiunrgstealvkeesnhtaopppryo.tect the environment.
I can’t agree more with what the writer said/says.
表示反对或不赞同的句型：
I disagree with the idea that…
I I
ad你mis对aop用pppr金oosv钱eedo鼓tfot励hthe孩eidi子deea学atht习haat的…t …看法。
你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？
In my eyes, my ideal college life is wonderful/relaxing.
模式2. 表明立场
明确表示对某观点支持、 赞同或反对。
Model: 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 (2009年广东高考读写任务要点3)
I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.
Model: 假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？
（2009广东高考读写任务要点2） If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.
常用词组：In my opinion / as for me / as far as I am concerned
Useful expressions for reasons: There are several reasons that contribute to… Th句e rea…so的ns原fo因r t显his而a易re见obvious… Re型提ason…s f的or原th因is 有are多v种arious… …示for r…ea的son原s因as如fo下llows The reason why… is that…
Discuss the expressions of supporting and objecting
表示支持或赞同的句型：
I agree with the statement that …
I am in favor of …
I approve of the idea that…
I believe that …
词组积累 play an important role/part have a bad/good influence/effect have a close relation /connection
do harm to be defferent from
模式4. 总述原因
你M支o持de青l:少使年我的们秘密生应活该发与生父变母化分有享的哪理些由原是因什？么？ I insisTththeartetaeerneatgheres’esreceraestos nshsofuolrd tbheeshcharaendgweisthththaetir parenhtsafvoer rtaeakseonnspalsacfoellionwos.ur life.
taken to end the phenomenon.
模式6.引出经历
用来引出记叙文具体 事例。
简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。
It reminds me of my own experience when …
常用句型： • It reminds me of the time when… • It reminds me of an accident which happened
评分标准及解题要求
读写任务写作（25分）
概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰
写作内容（20分）:主题明确，内容丰富
五年来的写作内容2都是三个要点, 三个 要点最好依次用三个段落来写, 每个段落前 最好用一个主题句, 这样做既不会漏掉要点, 又层次清楚, 能让阅卷老师一目了然
模式.1 直接回答要点
写作要点是询问考生 的看法时，对提问直 接作出回答。
experience of my friend who… • After reading the story, I can’t help thinking of… • The story above reminds me of one of my
常用句型： ● We should take some effective measures. ● We should try our best to overcome/conquer the
difficulties. ● We should solve the problems that we are faced with. ● It is necessary that proper actions/ steps should be
In some(2w0a1y,0I年a广gre东e 高wi考th…读写bu任t…务要点1)
WIhaamt tnhoetwinriftaervosraiodfseonucnodusrargeainsgonkaibdlsew, bituht…cash
just because they have got good marks.
模式3. 重述要点
不直接回答写作要 点，而是翻译要点作 为段落主题句。
M中od学e生l：活在和生大活学中生谅活解的他差人别有. 何(2重00要8高意考义读. 写任 From the story I learn that un务de要rs点ta3n)ding anAds fwoergailvliknngoowth, ecrosllpeglaeylsifaenisimwpidoerltyadnitfrfeorleent frinomoumr liidfde.le school life.
模式5.引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等
M如o何de才l: 能说获说得人快们乐对？环境保护所采取的措施。 WLeucskhiolyu,ldmfoinredasnodmme eofrfeecmtievaeswuraeyssatroemake
beoiunrgstealvkeesnhtaopppryo.tect the environment.
I can’t agree more with what the writer said/says.
表示反对或不赞同的句型：
I disagree with the idea that…
I I
ad你mis对aop用pppr金oosv钱eedo鼓tfot励hthe孩eidi子deea学atht习haat的…t …看法。
你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？
In my eyes, my ideal college life is wonderful/relaxing.
模式2. 表明立场
明确表示对某观点支持、 赞同或反对。
Model: 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 (2009年广东高考读写任务要点3)
I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.
Model: 假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？
（2009广东高考读写任务要点2） If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.
常用词组：In my opinion / as for me / as far as I am concerned
Useful expressions for reasons: There are several reasons that contribute to… Th句e rea…so的ns原fo因r t显his而a易re见obvious… Re型提ason…s f的or原th因is 有are多v种arious… …示for r…ea的son原s因as如fo下llows The reason why… is that…
Discuss the expressions of supporting and objecting
表示支持或赞同的句型：
I agree with the statement that …
I am in favor of …
I approve of the idea that…
I believe that …
词组积累 play an important role/part have a bad/good influence/effect have a close relation /connection
do harm to be defferent from
模式4. 总述原因
你M支o持de青l:少使年我的们秘密生应活该发与生父变母化分有享的哪理些由原是因什？么？ I insisTththeartetaeerneatgheres’esreceraestos nshsofuolrd tbheeshcharaendgweisthththaetir parenhtsafvoer rtaeakseonnspalsacfoellionwos.ur life.
taken to end the phenomenon.
模式6.引出经历
用来引出记叙文具体 事例。
简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。
It reminds me of my own experience when …
常用句型： • It reminds me of the time when… • It reminds me of an accident which happened
评分标准及解题要求
读写任务写作（25分）
概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰
写作内容（20分）:主题明确，内容丰富
五年来的写作内容2都是三个要点, 三个 要点最好依次用三个段落来写, 每个段落前 最好用一个主题句, 这样做既不会漏掉要点, 又层次清楚, 能让阅卷老师一目了然
模式.1 直接回答要点
写作要点是询问考生 的看法时，对提问直 接作出回答。