高中英语写作讲座

高中英语写作讲座

比较下面两段文字

☐1：

I got up very early this morning. I went to visit a farm with my classmates. We walked to the farm. The workers welcomed us at the gate and we went to many places. They were very beautiful. And then we had a picnic lunch. We were dancing and singing in the party. Finally we said goodbye to the farmers there.

☐2:

I got up very early this morning because I would pay a visit to a farm with my classmates. After about twenty minutes’ walk, we arrived at the farm, where some workers gave us a warm welcome. Then they showed us around the farm so that we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and the harvest there. At noon, we had a picnic lunch and after that we held a party, singing and dancing happily. When the sun set , we said goodbye to the workers. This visit really left me a beautiful memory.

高分作文策略

☐1、结构清新合理：

一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清新，易得高分。每一段落要有一个主题句和几个支撑句。一般文章有三段：主题段—提出问题或论点；发展段—围绕主题讨论、论据或列举；结尾段—得出结论，即论证。

☐2、用词准确得体：

我们常常提到“亮点词汇”，这不等于使用频率较低的偏词、怪词或大词；而是要使用生动具体形象的词汇，关键是要准确得体。如：The Musuem is very beautiful中的beautiful 很抽象；改为The Musuem is magnificent就更形象具体；说The job is very difficult to do不如说The job is very challenging. 词汇彰显深厚的语言功底。要注意阅读中留心积累富有表达力的词汇。

I decided I would pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and

unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of nature.

I read all the books I could find that threw light upon these matters.

Located in southern Austria, Kitzbuhel is a paradise for skiers.

Even though the altitude of the city is not enough to guarantee snow, the good weather and breath-taking scenery make it a world-class ski resort.

☐3、语句简洁流畅：

“简洁流畅”不等于句子简单呆板，无变化，而是指意思表达清楚，语言地道精练，读起来通畅上口。高考书面表达要求100词左右，所以不能说废话、说糊话；每句话都必须精练。

例如：

☐Li Hua is a student. He comes from Wuhan. He speaks Wuhan dialect. We find it hard to understand. 这段话看似简洁，其实很呆板。可以修改如下：Li Hua ,

a student from Wuhan, speaks Wuhan dialect, which we find hard to understand.

修改后的句子，除了简洁流畅，更加地道精练，句中既有同位语，又有非限定性定语从句，表达灵活，富有变化，体现了良好的语言表达技巧。

☐4、逻辑衔接自然：

为了使文章结构紧凑，自然流畅，段落之间要使用适当的过度语；句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词。如：It was very noisy, I could hardly go to sleep. 这句话可以修改为：It was so noisy that I could hardly go to sleep / I could hardly go to sleep because it was very noisy / As a result of the noise, I could hardly go to sleep / Wirh so much noise, I could hardly go to sleep 等等。

☐5、表达灵活多变：

一篇好的文章，要尽可能使用较多的词语和句式结构，如：定语从句、插入语、倒装句、强调句、被动结构和其他常见句型。如：Many people believe that we should keep our own tradition可以换成It is widely believed that we should keep our own tradition. We know very little about the accident 可改进为Very little is known about the accident.

This is the best hotel you can find here可以改为You can’t find a better hotel here或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

We can solve the problem only when everybody takes action改为Only when everybody takes action can we solve the problem会更好。

☐6、深刻的引语：

在文章的开头和结尾适当使用名言和谚语，可以起到画龙点金、深化主题的作用，提高文章品味。

Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the image of a city.

On the other hand, the rest 40% think that fees should be charged, because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

Everything has two sides. In my opinion, fees should be charged as long as the price is reasonable.

Yours truly

Li Hua

书面表达常用步骤

一、审题；定要点：注重表达要点的用词。

用词体现语言基本功。用词要生动具体形象；避免抽象普通词汇。

二、连句；串要点：注重连词和句式变化。

句与句之间尽可能使用连接词，使文章连贯流畅；尽可能使句子多样化，避免呆版。三、组篇；重结构：注重过度语和主题句。

适当分段和过度语使结构紧凑，思路清晰。

示例讲解

☐最近一项调查显示，我们学校40%以上学生不吃早餐。

☐原因：熬夜，早晨没有胃口；早晨时间来不及；女孩为保持身材。

☐危害：课堂精神不振，打瞌睡；影响身体和学习。

☐建议：自己写