argumentation写作精华

Improvement areas:

1 cohesion and coherence /linking words/logic/supporting evidence 连接词、支持句（复杂句的写作）。因果论证、举例论证、对比论证、修饰关系（定语从句）

2 Grammatical range and accuracy. 避免主谓不一致、介词误用。

3 Lexical resources 背诵写作话题词汇、避免中式翻译。

一、请用英文翻译以下句子。（练习支持句，扩展分论点）

1、报纸上的很多信息都不可靠，因为很多记者为了出名而捏造具有轰动效应的事件。

记者跟干其他工作的人一样也面临着激烈的竞争，因此有些人会故意夸大或掩饰

某些事情以此来在同事间赢得上风。(因果论证)

Some information in the newspaper is not reliable because many journalists fabricate

sensational incidents in order to make themselves conspicuous/gain fame. Reporters, like many people in other occupations, now feel the fierce competition in their own

circle. Consequently, some of them deliberately exaggerate or whitewash certain

matters to gain upper hand over their colleagues.

2、压力来自于同事之间的激烈竞争。每个人都渴望成功，就是这种欲望促使人们不

惜一切代价争夺有限的岗位和资源，造成每个人都有巨大的压力。(因果论证\修

饰关系)

Stress stems from/is due to/is caused by the fierce competition among colleagues. Every person aspires to success and this desire (, which) pushes people to scramble/fight for limited positions and resources at all costs, creating intense pressure on everyone.

3、过多看电视会对家庭关系产生不良影响。如果一个人花大量的业余时间在电视上，

他就没有足够的时间与家庭成员交流，这可能会造成家庭关系的疏远。（假设关系）Watching TV too much tends to have an unfavorable influence on the family relationship.

If one spends the vast majority of his spare time on television, he will lack sufficient time for communication with the family members, which may possibly result in the

alienation in the family.

4、毋庸置疑，因特网注定在孩子们的教育中发挥非常重要的作用。如果一个学生不

会用IE或者firefox探索虚拟世界，他或她将会不知道今天世界上正发生什么。相

比之下，那些知道如何从网站上搜索宝贵信息的学生将会有很大的优势因为他们

能从网上得到课堂上讨论的话题的更多详细信息、对事件有更深刻的认识，因为

他们能用一些如谷歌或百度的搜索引擎获取大量的相关信息。（假设论证、对比论

证、因果论证）

Admittedly/There is no denying/ It is undeniable that the internet is doomed to play an

indispensable/inevitable/important/key role in children’s education. If a student cannot explore the virtual world by using IE or firefox, he or she will be in danger of being kept

from what is going on in the world. By contrast, those students who know how to search for the valuable information available on the websites tend to gain themselves big

advantages in that/because they can browse for more detailed information about the subject discussed in class, gaining a deeper insight into the events, since so great a

variety of related information can be accessed by some powerful search engine such as

Google or Baidu.

二、复习Argumentation 写作素材思考、结构。（讲解作文批改）

三、Report 写法

基本结构：

首段：引出主题-总论点

主体段：原因1及扩展

原因2及扩展

尾段：建议1&2---需要的话写解决问题的意义或不解决的危害

注意事项：

1、仔细审题，分清题目要求谈论原因还是结果。

2、根据原因和建议的扩展水平、段落个数及安排可以灵活变化。比如，原因可以写为

同一段，建议却可以写成两段，根据具体情况而定即可。

3、所提建议要有一定的扩展，同是尽量确实可行，不要简单罗列，不要大而无当。

标准说明文：

Eg: 1、in many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

2、Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening?

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

3、It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. What

are the possible reasons for this and what can be done to reserve the trend?

4、In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find

jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

混搭型

Eg: News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?

1、政府类：Some people say that governments should pay for the public health care and

education, while others say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Please discuss both views and give your own opinion.

2、教育类：Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views.

3、科技类：Many people believe that the increasing use of modern technology at work and

in leisure is reducing people’s creativity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is now possible to perform everyday tasks, such as bank transaction, shopping or even office works, without meeting people face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and the society as a whole?

4、犯罪类：Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them.

Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?