中考英语作文专题复习课件(2)

How can we write a good composition?
words——phrases——sentences——composition
训练句子的方法：
方法一：用以前所记忆的短语和结构造句。
他总是鼓励我们努力学习。
He always encourages us to work hard.
Mr Tang is a teacher, I like him best.
Let’sຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidupractice! 常见错误改正：
1.We at school from Monday to Friday .We are at school from Monday to Friday. 2.There are some grass or flowers beside the road. There is some grass and flowers beside the road 3.I think go to school by bus is the best way. I think going to school by bus is the best way. 4. They don’t know how to do They don’t know what to do it. They don’t know how to do it. They don’t know what to do . 5.They have become teachers for 30 years. They have been teachers for 30 years. 6.He teaches our English. .He teaches us English.
英语书面表达训练
书面表达:
中考英语中的必考题，占卷面总分的 10%，分值为15 分 。
中考英语作文评分标准 一档13-15分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较 强的语言运用能力。 二档10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和 词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。 三档7-9分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不 够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。 四档4-6分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文 不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。 五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误 多。 六档0分 空白
I look forward to the summer holiday.
方法四：遇到难以表达的句子，可另辟 蹊径，化难为易，化繁为简。
1.我们应该守时 我们应该按时做每件事. We should do everything on time 2.我们不应该闯红灯(traffic lights)
当交通灯是红灯时,我们不应该过马路.
•大病指：
单词、句子结构、谓语构成、语序、语态、 时态等方面；
•小病指：
名词单复数、第三人称单数、拼写、标点符 号、大小写方面。
• 1.句型、结构 --- 避免出现Chinglish 现象。 We all very like her. We all like her very much.√ He by bike to school. He goes to school by bike. √
方法三：仿写
❖ 例如英语九年级上有这样一句话： ❖ I’m looking forward to this. (仿写1) 我正期望着收到你的来信。 I’m looking forward to hearing from you. (信尾使用） (仿写2)我正期望着你的答复。 I’m looking forward to your reply. (仿写3)我期望着暑假的到来。
We shouldn’t go across the road when the traffic lights are red.
He is such a young boy that he can’t go to school. such-that-
He is too young to go to school.
too—to--
He isn’t old enough to go to school.enough-to do sth
√ The shoes are new.
习惯用法:
He helps me winitmhy English.
4. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句，倒装句)
I don’t know if does she like swimming。 she likes swimming
What a nice student is she! she is!
encourage sb to do sth
她的父母不允许她 晚上一个人出去。
Her parents don’t allow her to go out by herself at
night.
allow sb to do sth
方法二:多记同义句和同义词。
他还没到上学的年龄。
He is so young that he can’t go to school. so—that--
He walks to school.
•避免方法： 多记短语和句型
2 注意语法项目
人称一致:
Alice is my best friend,shheelikes sports.
时态:
He has gone to Guilin ye去st掉erday.
主谓一致:
This pair of shoes iasre mine.
She is a student, so I am. so am I
5、注意：重短轻长, 就易避难。 •以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。
1.I have a friend is called Li Ming. 去掉
I have a friend，he is called Li Ming.
2. Mr Tang is the teacher that I like best.