大学英语写作PPT课件
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大学英语写作教案ppt课件
freeways connect the many communities that are part of Los
Angeles.The city has grown higher.Office buildings, hotels and
stores are now taller. Public places, such as sports stadiums, have
Moreover Namely Nevertheless Next Nonetheless Now Otherwise similarly
Still Subsequently Then Thereafter Therefore Thus undoubtedly
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第二章 段落的构成
段落是指一组相互关联，用来阐述某一中心思想的句子群。 一 段落和提纲 我们在写文章之前应该拟出一个提纲，而提纲的每一个
因此，我们在写作时要摈弃一切与本段的中心、主题无关 的句子。
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The bright children is patient. He can tolerate uncertainty and failure and will keep trying until he gets an answer. When all his experiments fail, he can even admit to himself and others that for the time being he is not going to get an answer. This may annoy him, but he can wait. Very often, he does not want to be told how to do the problem or solve the puzzle he has struggled with. because he does not want to be cheated out of the chance to figure It out for himself in the failure. This is not so for the dull child. He can’t stand uncertainty or failure. To him, an unanswered question Is not a challenge or an opportunity, but a threat. If he can’t find the answer quickly, it must be given to him, and quickly; and he must have answers for everything.
实用大学英语写作PPT
该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。
第一章节
三．评分标准
满分15分。 阅卷标准共分五档次：2分、5 分、8分、11分及14分，依作文水平可在本档次内上下浮动1分。
3.细化评分标准：
2分 --- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
连贯性的处理
添加副标题
原因 for; as; since; now that; on account of; given that; owing to; due to; thanks to; because; because of; in that…; considering that…; seeing that…
4.字数不足酌情扣分
累计字数
110-119
100-109
90-99
80-89
70-79
60-69
50-59
低于49
扣分
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四．题型把握
学习与校园生活
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社会发展变化
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常识、格言
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社会热点
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命题范围
2.命题体裁
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论说文
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记叙文
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图表作文
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应用文
3.作文类型模块化
对立观点型
遣词
干涩、枯燥文句的处理
are obliged to effective efficient and immediately serious / water
We should take measures against pollution. We take measures against pollution.
大学英语ppt优秀课件
Reading comprehension
Reading material selection
Choose challenging reading materials such as novels, essays, and comments to improve students' reading comprehension abilities.
Choose a natural and smooth transition effect to maintain audience attention.
When to use animation and transitions
When it is necessary to draw attention or guide the audience's thoughts, avoid abuse.
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Course Introduction
Course objectives
Improving students' English listening, speaking, reading, writing, and translation abilities
Enhancing students' cross cultural communication skills and ability to apply English in practical situations
2 Listening and speaking practice
This part focuses on the basic rules of English grammar and common vocabulary, aiming to lay a solid foundation for further English learning
大学英语四级写作完整课件
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模板1
• People hold different views about X./__ or __, which is better? Different people have diverse opinions upon this question(issue)./ People’s opinions are divided upon this issue.
• 2. 从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和 语言是一个统一体。作文应该表达题目所规定的内容 ，而内容要通过语言来表达。既要考虑作文是否切题 ，是否用英语清楚而明确地表达了主题思想，也要考 虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
• 3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分，该 给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所评阅的 全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
• From the above discussion, we can come to the
conclusion
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总结观点.(可加谚语做结尾)
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高分策略: 注重结构的逻辑性
• 关联词: • 一. Addition 此外 • in addition, and，similarly，besides，furthermore，
• 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是……
• 2. 也有人持不同意见，……
• 3. 我的看法和打算
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如何引入？ —— 一个现象
• Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
With the development of English education in China, nowadays, many attentions have been paid to spoken English skills.The question, wether students can actually use English as a communication tool after years of study, has caused hot debate.As a result, test of spoken English is becoming increasingly common in English education.But does it really necessary to set such a test?
大学英语四六级写作PPT课件
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评分标准: 给分档的标准
14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语 言错误。
8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉 强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多 的严重语言错误。
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books
tell people about the history of human society.
Scientific and technological books make people
me. The campus was beautiful. The college was located
at the foot of a Mountain and was surround with trees. To
the east of it we can see a blue river. There are so many
You are sure to succeed with four “P”: 1) perspiration 2) passion 3) preparation 4) perseverance
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议论文
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评分标准:（一）内容和语言标准
1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分五等：14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。 3.阅卷时根据五个方面的具体标准, 即内容切题、表达清楚、文字 连贯、句式有变化和语言规范.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准, 对照参照卷 评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认 为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)
大学英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
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• Model Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____. In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____. As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.
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Writing task
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：
Recreational activities
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• P3 As college students, we should strike a balance between work and rest. Recreation is of great importance to our life, but study is our primary task. If we want to play, we need to know clearly which activities are good and which are bad. At the same time, we should exercise self-control so that we won't get addicted to some bad activities.
• Model Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____. In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____. As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.
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Writing task
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：
Recreational activities
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• P3 As college students, we should strike a balance between work and rest. Recreation is of great importance to our life, but study is our primary task. If we want to play, we need to know clearly which activities are good and which are bad. At the same time, we should exercise self-control so that we won't get addicted to some bad activities.
新视野大学英语读写教程第二版课件PPT
随 笔 视频讨论
导入
课文
小结
写作
Back
Compound Dictation
Seventeen-year-old Yi Sun of the Harker School in San Jose, California, earned second place. He won a seventy-five thousand dollars scholarship for new discoveries about a mathematical theory known as work could help computer random walks. [S10] His ___________________________ ____________________. scientists and chemists Yi Sun was born in China. The Intel Science Talent Search is the oldest science competition for high school students in the United States. It is sixty-five years old this year. [S11] ____ Past _______________________________________________ winners have gone on to receive six Nobel prizes and _________________________________. other top honors in science and math
随 笔
a. n. ad. vt. a. a. n.
导入
课文
小结
写作
Back
Compound Dictation
Seventeen-year-old Yi Sun of the Harker School in San Jose, California, earned second place. He won a seventy-five thousand dollars scholarship for new discoveries about a mathematical theory known as work could help computer random walks. [S10] His ___________________________ ____________________. scientists and chemists Yi Sun was born in China. The Intel Science Talent Search is the oldest science competition for high school students in the United States. It is sixty-five years old this year. [S11] ____ Past _______________________________________________ winners have gone on to receive six Nobel prizes and _________________________________. other top honors in science and math
随 笔
a. n. ad. vt. a. a. n.
(本科)新编大学英语写作课件(全)
other small issues will be talked of in Chapter 1 and 2.
Handwrite
• See Rule 1,2,3,9,11,12, and 30. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following handwriting.
• 2. King George walked and talked an hour after his head was cut off.
Contract and number
• See Rule 13,14,15 and 16. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following sentences.
Eats, Shoots, and Leaves A panda walks into a bar and orders lunch….
Supplementary Reading
• In order to have a better knowledge of the basic rules for writing , please read the passages after class. supplementary Reading for basic rules.doc mainly adapted from An Intermediate Course in Writing, Li Mei, Higher Education Press, 2006
• 2.Different Views On Jane Eyre
• 3. Interpretations of Robert Frost’s Fire and Ice
Handwrite
• See Rule 1,2,3,9,11,12, and 30. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following handwriting.
• 2. King George walked and talked an hour after his head was cut off.
Contract and number
• See Rule 13,14,15 and 16. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following sentences.
Eats, Shoots, and Leaves A panda walks into a bar and orders lunch….
Supplementary Reading
• In order to have a better knowledge of the basic rules for writing , please read the passages after class. supplementary Reading for basic rules.doc mainly adapted from An Intermediate Course in Writing, Li Mei, Higher Education Press, 2006
• 2.Different Views On Jane Eyre
• 3. Interpretations of Robert Frost’s Fire and Ice
大学英语四级作文真题ppt课件
师生关系
ppt课件.
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Nowadays, there has been a heated discussion as to the relationship between doctors and patients. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from different walks of life. To best handle the relationship, some bbeultieovtheetrhsactothnesidpeartieitnbtse’tternteoedpsutshthoeulddobcetosras’tisfied as many as possible, suggestions/opinions/advice first.
From my perspective, it is crucial that the government should encourage people to show more respect to the doctors. Besides, it is also significant for people to be more confident about the doctors (who are more professional in medicine/medicppat课l件s.cience). Only in this way can 2 have a better society.
亲子关系
◎四级作文 卷3
Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on How to best handle the relationship between teachers and students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
新标准大学英语,综合教程3,第二版Guided Writingppt课件
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6 months in wilderness / follow ancestral songlines / heart of culture, discover themselves
Guided writing
Organise an essay
Think about: how much time to spend on
Semi-controlled practice
Write a short essay to describe a rite of passage in China.
Think about 1. What is the event, and where does it take
place? 2. In what way can it be seen as a rite of
an introduction; how many examples to refer to; how to link ideas; how to introduce the topic; how to conclude the essay.
More .
Guided writing
Organise an essay
Write only those few words of the source material which will be of use and later write them up as sentences.
More .
Guided writing
Take notes
Write up the notes about Bar Mitzvah ceremony as one or two sentences.
6 months in wilderness / follow ancestral songlines / heart of culture, discover themselves
Guided writing
Organise an essay
Think about: how much time to spend on
Semi-controlled practice
Write a short essay to describe a rite of passage in China.
Think about 1. What is the event, and where does it take
place? 2. In what way can it be seen as a rite of
an introduction; how many examples to refer to; how to link ideas; how to introduce the topic; how to conclude the essay.
More .
Guided writing
Organise an essay
Write only those few words of the source material which will be of use and later write them up as sentences.
More .
Guided writing
Take notes
Write up the notes about Bar Mitzvah ceremony as one or two sentences.
美国大学英语写作：Chapter 13_对比和比较[优质ppt]
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• In this structure, you say everything about one item, then everything about the other.
• For instance, say everything about the characters, settings and plots for the book then everything about the characters, settings and plots for the film.
2).Similarities-to-Differences
• In this structure, you explain all the similarities about the items being compared and then you explain all the differences.
Methods of Development
1).Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block Book, Film
2).Similarities-to-Differences
A---B
3).Point by Point
AB, AB, AB, AB
1). Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block
• Whole-to-Whole comparison and contrast uses a separate section or paragraph for each item you’re discussing.
• The points in each of the sections should be the same and they should be explained in the same order (for instance, you might discuss characters, settings, and plots for both, and in that order for both).
• For instance, say everything about the characters, settings and plots for the book then everything about the characters, settings and plots for the film.
2).Similarities-to-Differences
• In this structure, you explain all the similarities about the items being compared and then you explain all the differences.
Methods of Development
1).Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block Book, Film
2).Similarities-to-Differences
A---B
3).Point by Point
AB, AB, AB, AB
1). Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block
• Whole-to-Whole comparison and contrast uses a separate section or paragraph for each item you’re discussing.
• The points in each of the sections should be the same and they should be explained in the same order (for instance, you might discuss characters, settings, and plots for both, and in that order for both).
关于网络大学英语四级作文课件
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• 【点评】 • 本篇为现象解释型作文。首段描述现象网络促销形式的 多样化，接下来阐释该现象中可能出现的问题，并给出作者 自己的观点。词汇：grasp every opportunity to promote their products意为“抓住一切机会促销商品”；launch group purchasing activities意为“开展团购活动”。
和网络相关的作文
• 一 娱乐活动的好处 • 二 娱乐活动的坏处 • 三 我的意见
• In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally. • 在信息科技领域，有各种各样的休闲娱乐活动。一些人认为 娱乐活动是非常重要的和必要的，因为他们能够帮助人们从 工作和和学习中放松下来。一些活动，比如说徒步旅行，慢 跑都能帮助人们在身体方面放松下来，然而其他的休闲活动， 比如说上网，就能在脑力方面帮助人们放松下来。
• In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development. • 以我的意见来说，我们应该对于各式各样的娱 乐活动给予关注，并且大多数的我们都应该去 做一成为我们发展的有利工具。
• 【点评】 • 本篇为现象解释型作文。首段描述现象网络促销形式的 多样化，接下来阐释该现象中可能出现的问题，并给出作者 自己的观点。词汇：grasp every opportunity to promote their products意为“抓住一切机会促销商品”；launch group purchasing activities意为“开展团购活动”。
和网络相关的作文
• 一 娱乐活动的好处 • 二 娱乐活动的坏处 • 三 我的意见
• In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally. • 在信息科技领域，有各种各样的休闲娱乐活动。一些人认为 娱乐活动是非常重要的和必要的，因为他们能够帮助人们从 工作和和学习中放松下来。一些活动，比如说徒步旅行，慢 跑都能帮助人们在身体方面放松下来，然而其他的休闲活动， 比如说上网，就能在脑力方面帮助人们放松下来。
• In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development. • 以我的意见来说，我们应该对于各式各样的娱 乐活动给予关注，并且大多数的我们都应该去 做一成为我们发展的有利工具。
大学四级英语写作解析PPT课件
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四级作文2分样卷
I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.
第14页/共44页
四级作文8分样卷
I think the accident mostly attributed to such
reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the
carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly
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四级作文题目
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witn ess account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
四级作文2分样卷
I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.
第14页/共44页
四级作文8分样卷
I think the accident mostly attributed to such
reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the
carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly
第6页/共44页
四级作文题目
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witn ess account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
大学英语四级写作专题讲解ppt课件
Cultivate students' critical thinking
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
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Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
01
Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
大学生英语ppt课件
Analysis of Article Structure
Recognizing text organization: Students should identify how the author organizes the text, such as through chronological order, comparison and contrast, cause and effect, etc. Understanding the organizational patterns can help them better understand the content
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Basic English knowledge
Vocabulary learning
Summary words
Master basic vocabulary
Detailed description
Learn the basic vocabulary of English, including common nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs, as well as common phrases and expressions.
intonation, and rhythm, to help students produce standard English
pronunciation.
Pronunciation training
要点一
Summary
Improving oral expression ability
要点二
Detailed description
Recognizing the importance of introductions and conclusions: introductions and conclusions are critical in understanding the overall message of the article They provide a framework for understanding the content and help readers grasp the main ideas
大学英语四级作文精品PPT课件
教育与娱乐
recreation, relax, entertainment; cultivate, foster, enlighten, give inspiration to ,motivate, expand one’s horizon
促进学生身心展
promote the student’s physical, intellectual and emotional development (well-rounded/ versatile) mould one’s character;team spirit —2009.06(博物馆免费开放的目的）-2008.06（娱 乐使人们受益）/2007.12(学生选课不同原因 )/2007.06( 参加社团的好处)/2006.12( 看春晚)
社会热点话题
社会热点话题与普通百姓社会生活紧密相关的 话题，如：环境话题、交通话题、休闲娱乐、疾病 与健康等话题。
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008. 12) Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006. 12) How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? （2010） An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident（2003, 6） It Pays to Be Honest （2003, 1） Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”（1999, 1） Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck？ （1998, 6）
最新CET-4专题讲解：
四级写作题材－常考话题
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+原因 第三段 1）总结 2）决心
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三、问题解决型
题目是社会问题，指坏的方面
第一段 1)引出话题 2）我的观点
第二段 1）承上启下 2）原因+举例
3）趋势句
第三段 解决段
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四、现象阐述型
题目是社会问题，指好的方面
第一段 1）引话题2）我的观点
第二段 1）承上启下2）原因+举例
3）趋势句
2)Hearing of the idea /phenomenon that---,some people become furious.
3）Some people take the negative/opposite view towards the idea/phenomenon that…..
议论文
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观点对比类
题目是A or B. 题目是一般疑问句？
第一段：1）引出话题 2）一种观点 3）原因 第二段：1）另一种观点 2）原因 第三段1）我的观点 2）原因 3）决心
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二、观点论证型
题目特征是格言或谚语
第一段 1）引出话题2）我的观点 第二段 1）承上启下2）原因+举例，或举例
4）A report conducted by a certain news agency came to us recently that……
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（空）里的句子 the number of-----has increased/decreased by x% from----to---
the loss caused by -----has amounted to -----dollars by the June of this year.
最后一点Finally….
Eventually…
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开阔思路
1、经济 2、安全 3、便利 4、心理或交流 5、站在一个受教育的角度来考虑 6. 国家
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万能原因句
The development of__has evolved from an amusing pace towards future to an all -out spurt, Which leads to the phenomenon that countless people (do sth) (to strive for economic benefits.
第三段 1）总结 2）决心
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引出话题板块
（一）报道法 As was reported on the china
daily on June,18th,2007,……
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（二）科学举例法
1）According to the recent survey conducted by a certain news agency,……
X% of people do sth
Sb do sth
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(三)句型法
1）Pepole in increasing number start to cast light on the issue that-------
2) People in amounting number start to realized that-------
2）The headline of the china daily on June,17th,2007，presented a thoughtprovoking data to us the statistics frequently appeared on newspapers recently,……
3)Tastes differ. Others assume that….
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我的观点
观点对比类 1）Weighing the pros and cons，I am
inclined to agree that… 2)From my point of view,… 3)As far as I am concerned,… 4)For my own part ,… 5)In my opinion,…
4) Some people object/oppose to the idea/phenomenon that…..
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另一种观点：
1）However, others take the opposite stand that……
2)However,other opinions can also be heard from all walks of life. They insist that….
3)The data reported on china daily recently offers us another way of looking at the issue that----
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(四)名言引用法
1）“——，is a abstruse and recondite concept, which is hardly to be defined definitely.” as__ ,an Italian writer, puts it.
2) “__,like an old friend, always stop by when you are busy doing something else.” as the old saying goes .
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观点表达
一种观点： 1）Some people frown at the idea that ---
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原因表达
First ----Initially,…
To start with,…
To begin with,…
First and foremost,…
Second- Third ---
Furthermore,… Moreover,..
In addition,… Besides,… What is more,…
.
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承上启下
1、Several factors can account for this idea/phenomenon.
2、Why does it take place? 3、The main reasons why such a
phenomenon takes place are as follows.
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三、问题解决型
题目是社会问题，指坏的方面
第一段 1)引出话题 2）我的观点
第二段 1）承上启下 2）原因+举例
3）趋势句
第三段 解决段
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四、现象阐述型
题目是社会问题，指好的方面
第一段 1）引话题2）我的观点
第二段 1）承上启下2）原因+举例
3）趋势句
2)Hearing of the idea /phenomenon that---,some people become furious.
3）Some people take the negative/opposite view towards the idea/phenomenon that…..
议论文
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观点对比类
题目是A or B. 题目是一般疑问句？
第一段：1）引出话题 2）一种观点 3）原因 第二段：1）另一种观点 2）原因 第三段1）我的观点 2）原因 3）决心
.
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二、观点论证型
题目特征是格言或谚语
第一段 1）引出话题2）我的观点 第二段 1）承上启下2）原因+举例，或举例
4）A report conducted by a certain news agency came to us recently that……
.
7
（空）里的句子 the number of-----has increased/decreased by x% from----to---
the loss caused by -----has amounted to -----dollars by the June of this year.
最后一点Finally….
Eventually…
.
15
开阔思路
1、经济 2、安全 3、便利 4、心理或交流 5、站在一个受教育的角度来考虑 6. 国家
.
16
万能原因句
The development of__has evolved from an amusing pace towards future to an all -out spurt, Which leads to the phenomenon that countless people (do sth) (to strive for economic benefits.
第三段 1）总结 2）决心
.
5
引出话题板块
（一）报道法 As was reported on the china
daily on June,18th,2007,……
.
6
（二）科学举例法
1）According to the recent survey conducted by a certain news agency,……
X% of people do sth
Sb do sth
.
8
(三)句型法
1）Pepole in increasing number start to cast light on the issue that-------
2) People in amounting number start to realized that-------
2）The headline of the china daily on June,17th,2007，presented a thoughtprovoking data to us the statistics frequently appeared on newspapers recently,……
3)Tastes differ. Others assume that….
.
12
我的观点
观点对比类 1）Weighing the pros and cons，I am
inclined to agree that… 2)From my point of view,… 3)As far as I am concerned,… 4)For my own part ,… 5)In my opinion,…
4) Some people object/oppose to the idea/phenomenon that…..
.
11
另一种观点：
1）However, others take the opposite stand that……
2)However,other opinions can also be heard from all walks of life. They insist that….
3)The data reported on china daily recently offers us another way of looking at the issue that----
.
9
(四)名言引用法
1）“——，is a abstruse and recondite concept, which is hardly to be defined definitely.” as__ ,an Italian writer, puts it.
2) “__,like an old friend, always stop by when you are busy doing something else.” as the old saying goes .
.
10
观点表达
一种观点： 1）Some people frown at the idea that ---
.
14
原因表达
First ----Initially,…
To start with,…
To begin with,…
First and foremost,…
Second- Third ---
Furthermore,… Moreover,..
In addition,… Besides,… What is more,…
.
13
承上启下
1、Several factors can account for this idea/phenomenon.
2、Why does it take place? 3、The main reasons why such a
phenomenon takes place are as follows.