(完整版)导学案：浙江考试说明读后续写Arther

读后续写（一）

故事：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. ---

一、写前分析：

1. 原文所给关键词分类：

地点：Park Avenue, the bank

人物：The young man, people, the bank thief

事件：suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, robbery, the shouts

思考：Which are the key words that stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing?

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2. 在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意文本中以下线索：

1) Why did the young man look worried?

2) What happened to the young man? (But everyone had a different answer.)

3) Arthur became frightened and without another thought, he started to run.

3. 一定注意两段开头所给的句子里有什么线索或者限定，甚至是句子是否完整。Para1：As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Characters: ____________________ Actions: _____________________

该段落中不必出现过多人物，以免混乱。

Para2：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur （本句不完整）

根据句中提到________和__________，说明上一段故事中应该涉及到__________，否则该段落的开头出现得很突兀，跟上文不能进行很好的衔接。

4. 分析文章体裁是什么？语言有什么特点？故事的基调是什么？故事情节发展如何？故事会有什么结局？

5. 构思续写内容。

Para1：

What are the main characters in this paragraph?

What happened to them?

Para2:

What did Arthur want to do at the police station?

How about the young man?

What happened at the police station?

6. 故事结局，兼顾开头的funny一词。结局应该是surprising 或者interesting.

二、应注意的问题以及存在的问题

1、应根据该类写作的特点和要求，定语气，定基调，定线索，定结局。

2、文章必须以根据指定的段落开头进行续写，只写两段。

3、故事情节一定要简单明了，过于复杂并不能得高分。太多对话并不能交代太多信息。不要重复上文已经交代的内容。

4、对动作、语言、表情、心理和环境等进行描写一定要与情景吻合。

如：到了警察局后，主人公应该是rushed / raced into the police station, 如果写成walked into---，就显得与情景不符。再如：jump into the taxi 要比get into the taxi更符合语境。

5、情节上要有连贯性，逻辑性，合理性；语言要符合文章题材特点，要有丰富的词汇和句式，要恰当使用连接词。

6、写完后一定别忘了给关键词加下划线。

7.有没有必要描写司机的心理活动？有没有必要增加别的重要人物？

三、语言表达：

1. 认为---是---

2. rob 和steal的用法：

3. thief theft robber robbery

4. 赶上某人

5. 上了出租车

6. 注意句群。逗号不能连接两个句子

四、优美句子：

1. Arthur looked back over his shoulder only to find that Arthur was running after him. He became increasingly frightened and ran as fast as possible. At this time, he flagged down a taxi（挥手拦下）and put the suitcase in the back seat. （语言很丰富）刘文馨14

2. Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.

3. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.”

4. The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.

5. Arthur was under arrest, and he had no alternative but to follow the policemen to the police station.（5 孙铭晗）

7. Arthur was too frightened to stop, with the loud noise of an alarm and the shouts of people around his ears. To his surprise，a taxi pulled over in the distance, so he raced to it, put the suitcases in the back seat and asked the driver to drive to the police station without