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• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as，like… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point
Moreover, taking exercise is necessary for our health. Such as playing basketball, taking a walk after meals, swimming and so on. Exercise will keep us active and strong as well as stop us from getting a cold. Remember, life is movement.
For Example:
生活习惯与健康问题（热点）
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当 是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文。 信息提示： 健康饮食。 ②.早睡早起,不熬夜。 ③.参加运动,强身健体。 要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
3.Take exercise.
展开：many kinds of sports; keep us active and strong; full of energy; stop from getting cold. Etc.
四、连。 Use information above to make sentences. 注意衔接过渡词：
以上两个部分是题目给的信息，是不是这两部分信息写出来就结束了呢？ 还需要进一步归纳，总结，点题，或者升华主题。
结构初现：抛出观点——展开论述——总结呼吁（点题、升华）
三、列：列出要点
1.Eating habits. 展开：eat more fruit and vegetables；less meat; drink a lot of water； eat on time; eat a lot; junk food; breakfast is important (necessary); wash hands before eating; stomach. Etc. 2.Other living habits. 展开：Stay up late；play computer games too late at night; over use phones; get up early; feel sleepy in class; hard to focus on study. etc.
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, besides, in addition（加之）, what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however, on the contrary（相反）,… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
五步法：
一审
五美 书面 二构
表达
四连
三列
Step by step
• 1. 审 • 2. 构 • 3. 列 • 4. 连 • 5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____ 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加 细节 列出要点
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活 使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想， 使文增色。
Nowadays, more and more people stay up late at night, it’s obviously bad for our health. If we can't get enough sleep, we may feel sleepy in class or even have a headache. We should(are supposed to) get up early as well.
In a word, health is wealth. Only to have healthy bodies can we enjoy life’s pleasure and make our dreams come true.
审
美 书面 构
表达
连
列
一、审：时态： 一般现在时态 人称： 第一人称（we）
二、构：
仔细读题——健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健 康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢? ——这是抛出问题，是此文要探讨的中心 问题。 1.健康饮食。 2.早睡早起,不熬夜。 3.参加运动,强身健体。——具体健康 生活习惯的罗列。
of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally
speaking…
All of us want to be healthy. I think healthy habits are very important for us.
As we know, we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning and is good for our stomachs as well. We must also have the right kinds of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less meat, no junk food. Don't forget to wash your hands before meals.
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as，like… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point
Moreover, taking exercise is necessary for our health. Such as playing basketball, taking a walk after meals, swimming and so on. Exercise will keep us active and strong as well as stop us from getting a cold. Remember, life is movement.
For Example:
生活习惯与健康问题（热点）
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当 是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文。 信息提示： 健康饮食。 ②.早睡早起,不熬夜。 ③.参加运动,强身健体。 要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
3.Take exercise.
展开：many kinds of sports; keep us active and strong; full of energy; stop from getting cold. Etc.
四、连。 Use information above to make sentences. 注意衔接过渡词：
以上两个部分是题目给的信息，是不是这两部分信息写出来就结束了呢？ 还需要进一步归纳，总结，点题，或者升华主题。
结构初现：抛出观点——展开论述——总结呼吁（点题、升华）
三、列：列出要点
1.Eating habits. 展开：eat more fruit and vegetables；less meat; drink a lot of water； eat on time; eat a lot; junk food; breakfast is important (necessary); wash hands before eating; stomach. Etc. 2.Other living habits. 展开：Stay up late；play computer games too late at night; over use phones; get up early; feel sleepy in class; hard to focus on study. etc.
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, besides, in addition（加之）, what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however, on the contrary（相反）,… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
五步法：
一审
五美 书面 二构
表达
四连
三列
Step by step
• 1. 审 • 2. 构 • 3. 列 • 4. 连 • 5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____ 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加 细节 列出要点
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活 使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想， 使文增色。
Nowadays, more and more people stay up late at night, it’s obviously bad for our health. If we can't get enough sleep, we may feel sleepy in class or even have a headache. We should(are supposed to) get up early as well.
In a word, health is wealth. Only to have healthy bodies can we enjoy life’s pleasure and make our dreams come true.
审
美 书面 构
表达
连
列
一、审：时态： 一般现在时态 人称： 第一人称（we）
二、构：
仔细读题——健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健 康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢? ——这是抛出问题，是此文要探讨的中心 问题。 1.健康饮食。 2.早睡早起,不熬夜。 3.参加运动,强身健体。——具体健康 生活习惯的罗列。
of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally
speaking…
All of us want to be healthy. I think healthy habits are very important for us.
As we know, we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning and is good for our stomachs as well. We must also have the right kinds of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less meat, no junk food. Don't forget to wash your hands before meals.