读后续写和概要写作讲义 续写导练

读后续写

一、考纲解读

提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

二、原题分析

①原文材料350词以内，所续写文章150词左右。

②原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文。

③原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用5个以上。

④续写部分分为两段

．．，每段开头语已经给出。

⑤续写部分分为两大类别：

1)半开放性质。必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。

2)完全开放性质。可以依据文章的思路，自己发挥。

三、注意事项

①词数要求。②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。

④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。⑤上下文的连贯性。

四、评分原则

①本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

②评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。

③词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。

④评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：

(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；

(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；

(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；

(4)上下文的连贯性。

⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

⑥如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。

续写导练（一）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

When I was eleven years old, I had a big accident. I get scared even now when I think about that time. I went skating near my house. There were many people, and I saw some of them falling on the ice.

It was my first time to go ice skating, so I was nervous. I was wondering how to skate.

I went with a friend who was very skillful. He spent some time teaching me how to skate,but I didn’t learn

much. He left me and skated all around. As soon as he left, I fell down. I envied the other people because they could skate well.

I was bored because I kept falling so I took off my skates and just walked around on the ice in my shoes. It was cold and my hands were frozen.

Suddenly, I stepped on something that was not hard. What was it? It was a weak place in the ice. When I stepped there, I sank under the ice. I thought that I was going to die, but I did my best to grab something to get out from under the ice. I tried to grab the edge of the ice, but it was very difficult for an eleven-year-old.

It seemed like a very long time, like a year. Then, fortunately, someone helped me. He grabbed my arms and pulled me up. So, I lived and I’m still alive today.

I thanked him. At that time, my friend came back. I was annoyed at him because he was supposed to take care of me, but he didn’t. He was embarrassed. When I took a taxi home, the taxi driver was surprised and asked what had happened. I didn’t want to say anything because I was tired and scared. Even now, whenever I think about that time, I feel uncomfortable. I don’t want to go skating again even now.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

It was long before I went skating once again,______________________________________ __________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

However, ever since then I haven’t found any time to go skating, ___________________________________

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续写导练（二）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Mr Brown lived in a house less than two miles away from his office. He was therefore able to drive home every day for lunch. Every time he drove in the middle of the day, he found cars were parked in the road outside his house, and there was no room for his own car. He had to drive two blocks farther before he could find a place to park. Then he had to walk home. This made him very angry.

He had put up a board which read “No Parking!” in the garden facing the road, but nobody seemed to pay attention to it. People only obeyed a police notice, but not a private one. There were no parked cars where there was a blue board with white letters on it: Police Notice—No Parking!

Mrs Brown suggested that he should steal a police notice. But he dared not, being afraid of going to prison. She then suggested that he make one just like a police notice. He said he was not a policeman and couldn’t use the word “police”. He decided that he must find a way out and started thinking hard. For several days, the smell of paint filled the house. One night he showed his life a new notice board. It was painted in white letters on a blue board: Polite Notice—No Parking!

“Oh,” Mrs Brown said, “but you told me you weren’t going to use the word ‘police’. That’s exactly like a police notice.”

“Is it?” he asked. “Look again.”

She began to laugh, “You are really rather clever.”

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

Why did Mrs Brown say her husband was really rather clever? ___________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

If the police discovered that the Browns were using a police notice,_______________________________

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续写导练（三）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

My mother used to ask me what the most important part of the body is. Through the years I would take a guess

at what I thought was the correct answer. When I was younger, I thought sound was very important to us as humans,

so I said, “My ears, Mommy.”

She said, “No. Many people are deaf. But they are doing well in their life. You keep thinking about it and I

will ask you again soon.”

Several years passed before she asked me again. Since making my first attempt, I had contemplated（深思）

the correct answer. So this time I told her, “Mommy, sight is very important to everybody, so it must be our eyes.”

She looked at me and told me, “You are learning fast, but the answer is not correct because there are many

people who are blind.”

Over the years my mother asked me a couple more times and always her answer was: “No, but you are getting

smarter every year, my child.”

Then last year, my grandpa died. Everybody was hurt. Everybody was crying. My Mom looked at me when it

was our turn to say our final goodbye to grandpa. She asked me, “Do you know the most important body part yet,

my dear?”

I was surprised when she asked me this on this occasion. I always thought this was a game between her and

me. She saw the confusion on my face and told me, “This question is very important. How you answer it shows

whether you have learned about life. For every body part you gave me in the past, I have told you were wrong and I

have given you a reason why. But today is the day you will know the answer.”

I look puzzled.

“All your previous answers-ears, eyes, hands, heart... They are all very important to yourself. But this time I

need you to think of something that is important to others.”

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

“My dear, the most important body part,” she said,_____________________________________________

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Paragraph 2:

“Mom, I understand. And you can cry on my shoulder too.”______________________________________

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续写导练（四）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow（乌鸦）perched（栖息）on their window.

The father asked his son, “What is this?” The son replied, “It is a crow.”

After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this?” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you, it’s a crow!”

After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this?”

At this time some expression of irritation（恼怒）was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff（生硬回绝）. “It’s a crow, a crow.” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this?”

This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again,

although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’. Are you not able to understand this?”

A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered（发皱的）diary, which he had maintained since his son was born.

On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page.

When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary:

“Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa, when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

After reading the diary,____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

续写导练（五）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I was touched through experiences, memories, books, stories, animals, angels, and most of all other people. People have moved me and molded（对……影响重大）me with moments of love and examples of kindness.

One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill（工厂）worker, I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would like them. I hated not having enough to give them more. I hated being poor. And I hated feeling bad at Christmas rather than happy.

I pulled into a store parking lot and counted my money again. It wasn’t much but maybe I could get something small with it. As I was getting out of the car I noticed the Salvation Army（救世军）bell ringer at the entrance. I felt bad again because I didn’t feel I could spare anything to give him. I started walking towards the entrance when two cars pulled into empty parking spots in front of me. The first was a shiny, new Cadillac and I felt a twinge of jealousy when I saw it. “How nice,” I thought, “Would it be to have enough money to buy a car like that.” The second car, though, was an ancient sedan（轿车）more beat-up and rusty than the one I was driving.

A man hopped（冲）out of the Cadillac and hurried into the store right past the bell ringer without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with three small children in tow（紧随着）. Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she stopped in front of the bell ringer, smiled, opened her purse, and dropped a bill in his red kettle（钱罐）.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

I stood there for a minute in astonishment._____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:

In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred（憎恨）left me, and all the love and joy that are Christmas filled me. ________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________

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