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2018高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)_(_PPT)

2018高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)_(_PPT)

总结:什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点,即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来,我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
_I_t_w_a_s__n_o_t_u_n_t_i_l _he had read the news in the newspaper _th__a_t_ he knew what had happened.
6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气)
第一档(差):(1-5分)
• 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题
要求。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。 • 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)

2018高考英语 满分作文(含标准)PPT【精品课件】

2018高考英语 满分作文(含标准)PPT【精品课件】
达到预期写作目的。
二档:6-10分(相当于百分制24-40分)
标准:未恰当完成试题规定任务。
1、漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,添加了一大 堆无关内容;
2、语法结构单调、词汇知识有限;
3、语法结构、词汇错误影响了对写作内容的理解;
4、较少使用语句间的连接成分,缺乏连贯性。信 息未能清楚地传达给读者。
• 挖掘写作提示中列出的写作要点。本篇书面表 达的要点包括:
(1) 得知Terry被中国朋友邀请到家里作客;
(2) 回信给Terry,介绍中国的一些作客礼仪;
(3) 这些礼仪务必包含以下三大内容:到达时间, 合适礼物及餐桌礼仪;
(4) 结束语,总结中国人的热情好客的特质及提出 祝愿。
满分作文分析 • 首段
• 尾段 Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
• Best wishes!

Yours,

LiHua
• 6. 邮件的结尾可用和Hope my suggestions can help you. Best wish等进行表达。这样才能体现邮 件的特点和完整性。
• Dear Terry,
• How is it going? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
许错误因尝试复杂表达结构所致; 4、运用简单的语句连接成分使全文紧凑。

2018高考英语作文指导.ppt

2018高考英语作文指导.ppt

正如谚语所说
As the saying goes
俗话说
As we can see from the table
正如表中所看到的
When it comes to ...
当提到……
It is said / reported that
据说/据报道……
It is generally agreed/acknowledged that 人们通常认为……
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时,应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英, 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇,顺畅连接和复杂结构。
总结:什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点,即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
(二)记叙文的常用结尾法
1.点题升华法——结尾总结全文,进一步升华主题
From this experience, I learned that being careful is
very important and that we can't be too careful, especially in
2.引用数据法——运用数据引出所要论证的主题
A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids don't have breakfast.
最近的研究表明,有50%的学生不吃早饭。
(四)议论文的常用开头法
1.点明主题法——提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明
Tips:can’t help + doing sth. 意为情不自禁、忍不住做 某事

2018高考英语应用文写作精品PPT课件 图文

2018高考英语应用文写作精品PPT课件 图文

2017年6月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英 国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者; 2. 时间、地点; 3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1.词数80字左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2016年10月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。 请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 介绍自己: 2. 告知到达时间: 3. 询问应做何准备. 注意: 1. 词数80左右 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
be a huge success.
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appreciated!
Yours,
Dear
一.
Chris,
应用文的样文赏析8分
I'm Li Hua. I intend to organize a trip. I'll invite my
祝贺信
XXX
询问信
请假条
告知函
倡议书
失物招领 (标题) Found
(署名)
寻物启事 (标题) Lost
(署名)
书面通知 (标题) Notice (署名)出通知单位/个人
口头通知 Ladies and gentlemen, /Boys and girls/……, may I have your attention please?
应用文写作
---基于结构、内容和语言的视角
绍兴市第一中学 叶建映

2018天津高考英语作文范文和讲解PPT演示课件

2018天津高考英语作文范文和讲解PPT演示课件

• If you are willing to join us, I will send the training program to your email box.
Don’t hesitate to put forward your advice, which will definitely become our
4
• Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. In order to promote enthusiasm for scientific
activities and discover talents in this field, a competition, the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, intended for teenagers across the whole nation, is going to be launched in Tianjin Children’s Palace at the end of July. I am convinced that it is a wonderful stage for competitors to show their talents.
scientific exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children’s palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each other meanwhile. • I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know, you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others' strong points as well as double our achievements. • If you are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin

2018高考英语全国1卷参考范文.ppt

2018高考英语全国1卷参考范文.ppt
go to a Chinese friend’s home as a guest . Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early. On the one hand, you can help the host with the housework ;on the other hand, you can have a better talk with the host. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts such as a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, at table, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Another thing is that it is impolite to tap on your bowl with your chopsticks. It’s because that will be considered offending against the host or the chef.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.I have the confidence that you will have a great time.I am looking forward to your good news.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua

2018高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)_(_) (2).ppt

2018高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)_(_) (2).ppt

二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时,应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英, 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇,顺畅连接和复杂结构。
英语各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
总结:什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点,即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来,我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
This village is very small, which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.

高考英语应用文写作2018

高考英语应用文写作2018

高考英语应用文写作2018----2018 年 6 月浙江省高考应用文写作是应聘信体裁,情境设置上切近学生现实生活,适用性较强,具有时代感,话题紧扣《一般高中英语课程标准 (2017 年版 )》的理念要求。

试题经过应聘“志愿者”表现社会责任感,经过“招待来访的外国中学生”睁开跨文化交流活动,经过表达“有关经验和应聘目的”展示正确的价值观、自信自强的优异品行、跨文化交流和流传中华文化的能力。

试题命制科学谨慎,全面考察语言能力,传达课程改革理念,指引核心修养教育。

解读特点,掌握方向求职信包含自荐信和应聘信,是个体求职者向有关用人单位或有关领导介绍自己的主观梦想和实质才华,目的是让对方认识自己、相信自己,进而获取某种职位的书信文体。

求职信拥有针对性、自荐性、务实性的特点,要求语言简短、条理清楚、态度诚心、方向明确、文面整齐。

求职信好像求职者的“名片”,在构造谨慎的前提下,要用踊跃的语言表示自己拥有能够满足特定工作要求的技术、态度、资质和自信,恰到好处地显现自己,用自己的“闪光点”来惹起用人单位的兴趣,切忌用缺少自信和悲观的语言,忌脆而不坚的大段描绘。

剖析真题,掌握要领[假设你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,招待来访的外国中学生。

请你写信应聘,内容包含: 1. 口语能力; 2. 有关经验; 3. 应聘目的。

注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 能够适合增添细节,以使行文连结。

]1.重点提示文体:书信体,要求有书信完好的格式(称呼,正文,结语,落款)构造:写信目的-介绍自己的专长-应聘目的-表达期望和梦想重点:1 写信目的;2 口语能力3 有关经验4 应聘目的语言:这时一封学生写给校英语协会负责人的应聘信,遣辞造句要比较正式,要求要言不烦,同时说话语气要礼貌得体。

2.参照范文Dear Sir/Madam,I ’ m writing to apply for the volunteer job you advertised in the school newspaper to receive students from Canadian schools.I think I am suitable for this job as I can express myself freely in English and I have somesimilar work experience, working as a volunteer last year at an international conference. I love ourschool and I hope I will have a chance to introduce our school to foreign guests in my own way.Looking forward to your reply.With regards,Li Hua3.答题要领下边联合参照范文和阅卷状况,谈写作过程中运用“5C ”原则的答题要领。

2018全国一卷高考作文解析 PPT课件

2018全国一卷高考作文解析 PPT课件

In China
Put up the bowl
Don't stick the chopsticks upright in the bowl.
Lay … on…
Sometimes, the Chinese host (主人) use their
chopsticks to put food in others' bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness(有礼貌、客气).
Dear Terry,
P3 ___祝___愿__他___玩__的___开___心__,___并__希___望__采___纳___建__议_____________________
__________________________________________________________________
ask sb for advice make a plan
eful/helpful/beneficial take part in/participate in
Have a good/great/wonderful time in China! I hope you will enjoy yourself! Have a nice/good day! I would be more than happy to see you have a good time in China! I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful. I believe you will take my suggestions into consideration.
__________________________________________________________________

2018天津高考英语作文范文和讲解 Tianjin PPT课件(共9张)

2018天津高考英语作文范文和讲解 Tianjin PPT课件(共9张)
have good news to tell you. In order to promote enthusiasm for scientific activities and discover talents in this field, a competition, the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, intended for teenagers across the whole nation, is going to be launched in Tianjin Children’s Palace at the end of July. I am convinced that it is a wonderful stage for competitors to show their talents. • Knowing that you have won several awards in the previous competitions of robotics, I am sure that you are experienced and competitive enough to participate. Besides, I have always been impressed by your initiative and creation in science, which play a significant role in technical invention and research. If we could have you involved in our team, one with years of experience and gifted members, that would be a win-win cooperation. Only in cooperation with each other, can we take in each other’s strengths and reap more benefits and victories. • If you are willing to join us, I will send the training program to your email box. Don’t hesitate to put forward your advice, which will definitely become our precious property. I’m looking forward to your reply.
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第三部分表达对方应邀的愿望
• 完整的内容、丰富的语言和句式
(二)具体评分细节
• 词数少于60或多于100,扣2分 • 内容要点遗漏,或篡改要点,降一档 • 标点符号大面积不规范,扣1-2分 • 书写较差,影响交际,可将分数降一档 • 格式不对,扣一分
一. 应用文的样文赏析
Dear Chris,
14 分
1. 参加者; 2. 时间、地点; 3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1.词数80字左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连应用文的总分为15分, 这一次的均分去零分卷后为9.1。
• 严谨的行文结构: 第一部分应为问候语和写信目的
第二部分main body 活动内容
---基于结构、内容和语言的 视角
• 1. 应用文的分类 • 2. 应用文的特点 • 3. 应用文写作中存在的问题 • 4. 解决的策略及实践
(一)、 应用文的分类
投诉信( Class失if物ic招at领ion )
感谢信
寻物启事
邀请信
倡议书
道歉信
请假条
求助信
告知函
求职信
发言稿(演讲稿、
建议信
致辞等)
推荐信
通知(书面、口头)
申请信
报道
祝贺信
……
询问信
(二)、应用文的特点
• Clear in structure 晰)
(结构清
• Substantial in content
(内容充实)
• Appropriate in language (语言得体)
(三)、应用文写作中存在的问题
1. 培养应用文写作逻辑思维。 2. 熟悉应用文篇章结构特点。 3. 牢记应用文语言表达特点。 4. 精选写作题材与范文分析。
01 应用文的评分原则、细节和样文赏析
从结构、内容、语言的视角
02
应对应用文写作
03 如何改进你的应用文写作
2017年6月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英 国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
2017年6月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英 国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者; 2. 时间、地点; 3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1.词数80字左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2016年10月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。 请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 介绍自己: 2. 告知到达时间: 3. 询问应做何准备. 注意: 1. 词数80左右 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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a picnic. At the same time, we'll take
photos in order to memory our trip.
I believe if you join us, you’ll love the views from the bottom of your
二、应用文写作
电邮+提纲 书信+提纲 书信+提纲
2014 2013
咨询信:暑假赴英求学,咨询英国学校学校课 书信+提纲 程情况
告知涵:告知事项(含人物描写),询问能否 书信+提纲
2017年11月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回国, 想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信, 内容包括: 1.时间; 2.一同过节的家人; 3.活动。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
应用文写作
---基于结构、内容和语言的视 角
写作,除了运气, 我们能准备什么吗?
年份
写作题材
命题形式
2017.11 邀请信:写信给外教邀请他到家里一起过春节 书信+提纲
2017.6 邀请信:写信给外国朋友Chris邀请他参加郊游 电邮+提纲
2016.10 2016 2015
给加拿大的交换生写一封信 求助信:请外教修改求职信 约稿:介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活
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Dear
一.
Chris,
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I'm Li Hua. I intend to organize a
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