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初中语文写作创意指导案例(含学习方法技巧、例题示范教学方法)

初中语文写作创意指导案例写作是语文教学中的重要组成部分，它既考验学生的语言表达能力，又考验学生的思维能力和创造力。

在初中阶段，培养学生的写作兴趣和创意能力尤为重要。

本案例旨在通过具体的写作教学实践，探讨如何有效地指导初中学生进行创意写作。

第一篇范文题目：《我的梦想》1.启发学生思考自己的梦想是什么，引导学生从个人兴趣、兴趣爱好、职业规划等方面进行思考。

2.指导学生如何将梦想的具体内容进行生动描绘，让学生通过细节描写，展现出自己对梦想的热爱和追求。

3.引导学生运用修辞手法，如比喻、拟人等，增强文章的表现力和感染力。

4.鼓励学生在文章中表达出自己对梦想的决心和勇气，以及对未来的期待和憧憬。

《我的梦想》在我心中，一直埋藏着一个炽热的梦想，那就是成为一名优秀的作家。

我希望用自己的文字，描绘出这个世界的美好与悲伤，传递出人性的光明与黑暗。

每当我看到那些精美的文字，我都会被其深深吸引，就如同找到了一个隐藏的宝藏，令我无比兴奋。

我希望通过自己的努力，也能写出那样动人的篇章。

我知道，这条路并不会一帆风顺。

可能会有人嘲笑我的梦想，可能会有人质疑我的能力。

但我相信，只要我心中有梦想，就有勇气去面对所有的困难。

我会用心去感受这个世界，用心去体会人性的善恶，用心去书写我的故事。

我相信，只要我不断努力，我的梦想终将实现。

该范文学生能够较好地按照写作指导进行创作，清晰地表达了自己的梦想，并通过细节描写展现了对梦想的热爱。

同时，文章中运用了比喻等修辞手法，增强了表现力。

但在表达梦想的决心和勇气方面，还有待加强。

第二篇范文题目：《印象最深刻的一次旅行》1.引导学生回忆一次印象最深刻的旅行经历，鼓励学生从旅行中的所见所闻、人物、情感等方面进行详细描绘。

2.指导学生如何通过旅行中的细节，展现出自己对生活的感悟和对世界的认识。

3.引导学生运用对比、排比等修辞手法，提升文章的艺术性和感染力。

4.鼓励学生在文章中表达出旅行给自己带来的成长和改变。

小学语文四年级上册作文指导案例分析

小学语文四年级上册作文指导案例分析作文是语文学习中重要的一部分，对于小学四年级的学生来说，写作能力的培养尤为关键。

本文将通过分析一篇四年级上册语文作文的指导案例，探讨如何引导学生写作，并提供一些实用的写作技巧。

案例一：《我的好朋友》写作指导：该作文主题是“我的好朋友”，学生可以通过描写一个自己的好朋友，展示他们之间的友谊和互助。

可以通过以下步骤来指导学生进行作文写作：1. 确定好朋友的角色：学生可以选择一个真实存在的朋友或者虚构一个朋友角色。

2. 确定文章结构：引言、主体、结尾。

引言中可以简略地介绍好朋友的外貌特点等；主体部分可以通过描述他们之间的共同爱好、经常一起做的事情，以及朋友们之间的友谊互助等；结尾可以总结友谊的重要性或者表达对好朋友的感激之情。

3. 进行内容扩展：可根据学生的实际情况和创造力进行适当的内容扩展，如描写朋友们共同度过的美好时光，或者分享一个故事来展示朋友之间的友谊。

4. 注意语言表达：指导学生注意使用简洁明了的语言，避免长句和复杂的词汇。

适当运用一些形容词和动词来丰富句子，并注意语文书中学过的句式和篇章结构的运用。

写作技巧：除了指导学生作文的结构和内容，我们还可以教给学生一些实用的写作技巧，帮助他们提升写作水平：1. 讲故事：鼓励学生用故事的方式来叙述，可以增加作文的趣味性，并且更容易引起读者的共鸣。

2. 使用形象的词语：指导学生使用形象生动的形容词和动词，使得作文更加具体有趣，让读者能够感受到文字中所描绘的情景。

3. 多用排比句：鼓励学生在作文中使用排比句，增强作文的表现力，同时可以提升语言的节奏感。

4. 注意调整语序：指导学生注意调整语序，使得句子更加通顺，表达更加清晰自然。

通过以上的指导案例和实用写作技巧，学生可以更好地掌握四年级上册语文作文的写作要点，并逐渐提升自己的写作能力。

总结：作文是语文学习中的重要环节，通过指导案例的分析和实用写作技巧的介绍，学生可以更好地掌握四年级上册语文作文写作的要点和技巧，提高写作水平。

培养学生写作能力：教案二年级作文指导案例

在当今社会，良好的写作能力已成为越来越多企业以及高校对于学生的重要指标。

无论是写作业、写论文，还是撰写邮件、报告，良好的写作能力都能够让我们在职场或者学术领域中处于更加有利的位置。

针对学生的写作能力，学校和老师应该制定出一套行之有效的教育方案，针对学生的不同阶段和不同需求，掌握正确的方法和技巧。

本文旨在介绍一个二年级作文的指导案例，希望能够对各位老师和家长提供一些有益的参考与启示。

针对二年级学生的特点，我们需要从学生的生活和感性认知出发，让他们进行自由而有趣的写作，充分发挥他们的想象力和创造力。

我们可以通过一些有趣的话题来引导学生进行写作，比如让他们讲述自己的假期经历、描述自己的宠物、分享自己的梦想等等。

这些话题都有着浓郁的个人特色，能够引导学生用自己独特的视角和语言进行表达，同时也能够锻炼他们的叙述、描写、口语等多方面的写作技会。

我们需要通过一些简单易懂的方法和技巧来帮助学生提升自己的作文水平。

对于二年级的学生来说，基础语言能力的掌握是非常关键。

老师可以通过课堂教育、听力训练、口头表达等方式来提高学生的语言表达能力，同时也可以帮助他们学习和掌握一些常用的句型、词汇和标点符号。

在写作方面，我们可以对学生进行一些简单的指导，如让他们明确文章的主题和中心思想、提供一些范文并对其进行评析、告诉他们如何进行排版分段等。

这些技巧可以让学生更加有目的地进行写作，提高文章的质量和效果。

我们需要鼓励学生进行写作，让他们体验和享受写作的乐趣。

写作是一项非常艰难而令人挫败的工作，我们需要让学生感受到写作的快乐和成就感。

我们可以对一些出色的文章进行表扬和赞赏，同时也可以让学生之间进行互评和讨论，发挥他们的创造力和竞争性。

这样的激励和支持可以为学生创造出一个积极的写作氛围，让他们进一步发掘自己的写作潜能。

培养学生的写作能力是一项长期而有远见的教育工作，过程中，我们需要充分考虑学生的特点和需求，制定出适宜的教育方案，并通过一系列有效的方法和技巧来促进学生的进步和提高。

捕捉细节感悟真情——五年级下册第四单元作文《令人感动的一件事》指导案例_写作指导

捕捉细节感悟真情——五年级下册第四单元作文《令人感动的一件事》指导案例捕捉细节感悟真情——五年级下册第四单元《令人感动的一件事》指导案例教学目标：1.借助多种方法通过情感渲染，引导学生回味亲身经历的或者看到、听到的感动的事，解决“写什么”的问题。

2.抓住日常生活中的动情点，对人物的特点进行细节描写，解决“怎么写”的问题。

教学重点、难点：指导学生如何动情点，通过细节书写“感动”，体验真情。

教学过程：一、导入：世上有许多东西，在与别人分享的时候，总是越分越少，而有些东西却是越分越多，那是什么呢？（学生交流“两个人分享一个快乐是两个快乐，两个人分担一个痛苦是半个痛苦”）像这样情感和精神方面的东西会越分越多！二、回味爱：1. 感受爱：爱和快乐同在，最快乐的事就是感受爱和被爱。

我们先来看看自己的身边，有哪些人让你感受到爱的温暖？（学生交流）每个人都有机会，让我们一起呼唤出心中的这个人（学生呼唤）每天我们都在爱的温暖中快乐地生活着，可是随着我们的成长，有了属于自己的天空之后，却忽略了这些爱我们的人，忽视了他们为我们付出的点点滴滴，所以现在就让我们走近他们，去回味那些让我们感动的事，一起（生齐读：捕捉细节，感悟真情）。

【生活中令我们感动的东西很多，可是因为学生整天沐浴在爱的温暖中，对“感动”已经很漠然，所以我设计了这样的“导语”，给学生提供一个相对集中的话题，从而积极地唤起学生“头脑”中的“情感储备”，调动小班化学生全体参与的积极性，为解决“写什么”打下基础。

】过渡：听过《母亲》这首歌吗？让我们看着歌词静静地欣赏（播放《母亲》mtva）。

师：听着这首歌你感受到了什么？看看歌词，你觉得哪些地方最让你感动？母亲为我们拿书包，打花伞，给我们包饺子，擦眼泪……这些都是平凡的小事，但也正是这些小事包含着浓浓的母爱。

现在就让我们静静地想一想自己的亲人，想想他们为我们做过了哪些事？学生交流小结：这些都是生活中看似平常的小事，现在，我们细细品味之后，心中就会溢满了温暖和感动。

七年级作文指导教案3篇

七年级作文指导教案3篇七年级作文指导教案1：教学目标：1.人物语言描写方法指导。

2.语言描写的个性化、生活化，能突出人物的思想性格和道德品质。

3.语言描写要精炼、灵动、鲜活，以形传神，展现人物的精神风貌。

教学重难点：人物语言要求精炼、传神、个性化和生活化。

特别是个性化，是语言描写最基本也是最高的要求。

教学方法：指导与训练相结合。

课时安排：1课时教学过程：一、导课：亲爱的同学们，今天是圣诞节，有这么多的老师和我们一起度过，幸福就这样温馨地环绕在我们身边。

让我们对他们的到来表示热烈的欢迎，并祝大家圣诞平安吉祥。

今天来到班上的，还有一位我特邀的嘉宾，作文竞赛一等奖获得者，57班的唐童童。

请大家回忆一下《咏雪》这篇课文，文中有位才情并茂的女子是谁呀?——谢道韫(板书)。

她不仅是谢无奕的女儿，也不仅是王凝之的妻子，她还是东晋著名的女诗人。

课文中最能体现出她才情的一句话是——未若柳絮因风起(板书)。

知道吗，从这开始，后世就把女子的文学才能称为“咏絮才”。

作者对她的直接刻画采用的是什么描写法?——语言描写(板书)。

二、授新：什么是语言呢?中国著名的语言学家、语文教育家吕叔湘先生曾经这样说：“语言也就是说话。

”那说什么，怎么说，为什么这样说呢?让我们先听听这样一番话吧。

秀才、县官和财主在大雪天不期而遇。

财主提议，以雪为题，每人吟咏一句诗。

秀才说了一句：“大雪落地似鹅毛。

”这位戴乌纱帽的县官听后马上接了一句：“皇家瑞气降人间。

”财主笑着说：“下它三年又何妨?”这时正好走过来一位穷人，一听就生气，嘟哝了一句：“放你娘的狗屁。

”你知道这段经典的语言描写好在哪里吗?(自由发言)明确：秀才是读书人，讲究文采，用了个比喻来形容;县官不忘为皇帝歌功颂德;财主不缺吃，不愁穿，把下雪看作是乐事;唯独穷人，饥寒交迫，当然要埋怨骂人。

这段话表明了不同身份的人因有不同的思想感情，说的话当然就不同。

俗话说，什么树上开什么花;我们说，什么人说什么话——个性(板书)。

初中英语作文写作技巧指导教学设计案例

初中英语作文写作技巧指导教学设计案例全文共6篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: Fun Ways to Become a Great English Writer!Hi there, young writers! Today, we're going to learn some super cool tips and tricks to help you become amazing English writers. Writing is like a magical adventure where you get to explore new worlds and express your thoughts and ideas. But just like any adventure, we need to pack the right tools and strategies to make it exciting and successful!First things first, let's talk about the most important part of writing - having a clear plan! Just like you wouldn't go on a hike without a map, you shouldn't start writing without an outline. An outline is like a roadmap that helps you organize your ideas and keeps your writing on track. Here's how to create a simple outline:Decide on your main idea or topic. This will be the destination for your writing adventure.Brainstorm supporting details or examples. These will be the pit stops along the way.Arrange your supporting details in a logical order. This will be your route.Add an introduction and conclusion. These are like the starting and ending points of your journey.With your outline in hand, you're ready to start writing! But wait, there's more! Let's talk about making your writing interesting and engaging.One way to do this is by using vivid descriptions. Imagine you're painting a picture with your words. Use adjectives (describing words) to add color and detail to your writing. For example, instead of saying "the dog," you could say "the fluffy, energetic golden retriever."Another way to make your writing pop is by using strong verbs. Verbs are action words, and they can really bring your writing to life. Instead of saying "she walked," you could say "she sprinted" or "she tiptoed."Don't forget about adding personal experiences, examples, and anecdotes to your writing. These little stories and details willhelp your readers connect with your ideas and make your writing more relatable and memorable.Of course, no great adventure is complete without a few challenges along the way. When it comes to writing, one of the biggest challenges is revising and editing your work. But don't worry, we've got some tips to make it easier!First, try reading your writing out loud. This can help you catch mistakes and awkward phrasing that you might have missed while reading silently. You can also ask a friend or family member to read your writing and provide feedback.Another helpful strategy is to take a break from your writing and come back to it with fresh eyes. Sometimes, stepping away for a little while can give you a new perspective and help you spot areas that need improvement.Finally, don't be afraid to seek help from your teacher or a writing tutor. They're like expert guides who can offer valuable advice and support to help you become a better writer.Writing may seem like a daunting task at first, but with practice and these handy tips, you'll be embarking on amazing writing adventures in no time! Remember, every great writerstarted somewhere, and with hard work and dedication, you too can become a master storyteller and wordsmith.So grab your pen (or keyboard), pack your outline, and let's hit the trail to writing success! Happy writing, adventurers!篇2Title: Super Cool Tips for Writing Awesome English Essays!Hi friends! Are you a middle school student who struggles with writing English essays? Don't worry, I've got your back! As a wise old elementary school kid, I've learned some really neat tricks to help make essay writing easier and way more fun. Get ready to become an essay master!First up, let's talk about picking a totally rad topic. Your teacher might assign you a subject, but sometimes you get to choose whatever you want to write about. If that's the case, pick something you're really interested in and excited to discuss. Maybe you're obsessed with video games, or perhaps you can't get enough of dinosaurs or candy. Whatever floats your boat! Writing about stuff you love makes the whole process a million times more enjoyable.Once you've nailed down your subject, it's time to get those brilliant ideas flowing. Spend some time brainstorming everything you can think of related to your topic. Don't hold back! Write down anything and everything that pops into your head, even if it seems silly at first. You can sort out the good ideas from the wacky ones later.Now that you've got a jumping off point, you'll want to organize all those amazing thoughts into a solid plan. This is where the classic five paragraph essay structure comes in handy. That's an intro paragraph to get things started, three jam-packed body paragraphs to explore your key points, and a high-impact conclusion to leave your reader wowed. Mapping out your ideas into an outline makes putting the actual essay together a total breeze.Okay, time to dive into the writing itself! Don't be intimidated by staring at that blank page. Just take itstep-by-step, section-by-section. Start with a hook in your intro to grab the reader's attention right away. You could ask a thought-provoking question, share an interesting fact, or tell a funny joke related to your topic. Anything to pique their curiosity! Then, preview the main points you'll cover in the essay so your reader knows what to expect.Each of your body paragraphs needs to focus on one of the key ideas from your outline. Kick things off with a strong topic sentence that states the main point you'll explore. Then back it up with lots of juicy examples, details, facts, quotes, or personal experiences to make your case. Don't just tell, show with vivid descriptions to pull your reader into the action! Also, make sure to analyze and explain why the evidence you provide supports your point.Once you've unpacked all your main points, it's time to bring it on home with your conclusion. This is the perfect opportunity to reinforce why your topic is so fascinating and drive your message home one last time. You could restate your key ideas, add a thought-provoking question for readers to ponder, share a personal anecdote that sums things up, or challenge your audience to take some sort of action. Just avoid introducing any brand new concepts. A conclusion should provide a sense of closure and circular back to your hook.Through each step, always keep your reader in mind. Your essay should flow smoothly with clear transitions between sentences and paragraphs to help your audience easily follow along. Use a variety of sentences structures and vocabulary words to keep things interesting, but don't go overboard withcomplex terms that could confuse your reader. The goal is to explain your thoughts in a straightforward, engaging way.I know, I know... you're probably wondering about pesky things like grammar, spelling, and mechanics. Those are definitely important, but don't get bogged down worrying about every little detail on your first draft. Just get your ideas out onto the page first. You can always revise and polish things up later. Reading your essay aloud can really help you catch and fix any awkward phrasing or errors.Last but not least, don't forget to give your essay an awesome title! Choose something catchy that sums up your main idea and makes readers curious to dive in.And there you have it, all my top tips for crafting an A+ English essay. Just take it one step at a time, stay organized, write about something you're pumped about, and pour your personality onto the page. Before you know it, you'll be churning out killer essays left and right!So what are you waiting for? Grab a snazzy notebook, your favorite pencil or computer, and get to brainstorming that next masterpiece. You've got this!Happy writing, rock stars!篇3Title: Tips for Writing Awesome English Compositions!Hey there, fellow students! Are you struggling with writing compositions in your English class? Don't worry; I've got some super-cool tips to share with you. Writing can be a lot of fun once you get the hang of it, and with these tricks up your sleeve, you'll be impressing your teachers and classmates in no time!First things first, let's talk about the most important part of any composition – the topic! Choosing an interesting and exciting topic is key to keeping your readers engaged from start to finish. Don't just pick something boring like "My Summer Vacation" or "My Favorite Food." Instead, think about things that fascinate you or make you curious. Maybe you're really into dinosaurs, or you love exploring space and the mysteries of the universe. Whatever your passion is, let that shine through in your topic choice.Next up, we've got the introduction. This is where you'll hook your readers and give them a sneak peek of what's to come.A great way to start is by asking a thought-provoking question or sharing an interesting fact related to your topic. For example, if you're writing about dinosaurs, you could ask, "Did you knowthat the Tyrannosaurus Rex had teeth as big as bananas?" Or, if you're writing about space exploration, you could share amind-blowing statistic like, "There are more stars in the universe than grains of sand on all the beaches of the world." See? Now you've got your readers' attention!Once you've got them hooked, it's time to dive into the body paragraphs. This is where you'll flesh out your ideas and support them with juicy details and examples. Remember, each paragraph should focus on one main idea, and you'll want to use transition words (like "firstly," "additionally," and "moreover") to help your writing flow smoothly from one point to the next.Don't forget to back up your claims with evidence! If you're writing about dinosaurs, you could include facts and figures from reliable sources, like museums or science websites. If you're writing about space, you might want to quote famous astronauts or include snippets from NASA reports. The more specific and concrete your examples are, the stronger your composition will be.Now, let's talk about something that can make or break your composition: vocabulary! Using a variety of interesting and descriptive words can really bring your writing to life. Instead of saying something is "big," you could call it "colossal" or"gargantuan." Instead of saying something is "cool," you could describe it as "fascinating" or "captivating." The more colorful your language, the more engaging your composition will be.But be careful – you don't want to overdo it with big, fancy words that you don't fully understand. That's a surefire way to confuse your readers and undermine your credibility. Stick to words you're comfortable with, and if you're unsure about the meaning or usage of a word, look it up or ask your teacher for guidance.As you're nearing the end of your composition, it's time to start thinking about your conclusion. This is where you'll wrap everything up and leave your readers with a lasting impression. A great conclusion should summarize your main points and tie everything together in a neat little bow. You might also want to include a thought-provoking question or a call to action that encourages your readers to think more deeply about the topic.Finally, don't forget to proofread, proofread, proofread! Even the best writers make mistakes, so it's crucial to go over your work with a fine-toothed comb. Check for spelling and grammar errors, as well as any awkward phrasing or unclear sentences. You might even want to read your composition out loud to catch any areas that sound clunky or confusing.And there you have it, my friends – the secret sauce to writing amazing English compositions! Remember, practice makes perfect, so don't be discouraged if your first few attempts aren't masterpieces. Keep writing, keep learning, and keep having fun with it. Before you know it, you'll be a composition-writing pro!篇4Writing Great English Essays in Middle School - A Kid's GuideHey everyone! Are you a middle schooler who has to write essays in English class? I know it can seem really hard and boring at first. But don't worry, I'm going to share some tips that will help make your essay writing much easier and way more fun!First off, let's talk about getting started on your essay. The very first step is to carefully read the instructions or prompt your teacher gives you. What is the essay supposed to be about? What kind of essay do you need to write - persuasive, narrative, expository? Knowing this will help guide the whole process.Once you know the topic and type of essay, it's time to start brainstorming ideas! Get a piece of paper or open a document on your computer and just start writing down anything that comes to mind about the topic. Don't worry about completesentences or organization yet, just get all your thoughts out there. You can use diagrams or make lists too if that helps spark ideas.After brainstorming, start sorting through and organizing your ideas into an outline. This will be the road map for your essay. A solid outline has an introduction paragraph, body paragraphs with supporting details, and a conclusion paragraph. Each body paragraph should have one clear main idea.Okay, now for some tips on actually writing the essay itself! The introduction paragraph needs to grab the reader's attention right away with an interesting hook. This could be a question, fun fact, or bold statement related to your topic. Then, introduce what your essay will be about and wrap it up with a clear thesis statement.Next up are the body paragraphs, where you'll lay out all your supporting points and evidence for your thesis. A good trick is to start each body paragraph with a topic sentence that sums up the main idea you'll cover. Then use examples, facts, explanations and analysis to back that point up. Don't forget to include transitions between paragraphs to help everything flow smoothly.For the conclusion paragraph, start by restating your thesis in a new way. Then summarize the key points you made in the body paragraphs. Try to leave the reader with something powerful and thought-provoking to ponder after finishing your essay.While you're writing, remember to use a variety of vocabulary words, literary techniques like similes and metaphors, and different types of sentences (simple, compound, complex). This makes your writing way more engaging and shows off your skills. But be careful not to overuse fancy words either - write in a natural style.Another important thing is to stick to the required formatting and guidelines, like heading, title, spacing, font, word count etc. It shows you can follow directions carefully. And of course, proofread thoroughly for spelling, grammar and other errors before handing in your final draft.I know writing essays can seem like a drag, but look at it this way - you're getting awesome communication skills that will help you out big time in the future with jobs, school applications, and just about everything! The more you practice essay writing now, the easier it will become.So don't stress, use these tips and you'll be cranking out A+ English essays in no time! Let me know if you have any other questions. Now get out there and start writing!篇5Title: Become a Writing Superhero! Tips for Awesome English EssaysHi there, elementary school friend! Are you ready to become a writing superhero? I'm going to share some super cool tips to help you write amazing English essays when you get to middle school. Get ready to power up your writing skills!First things first - every superhero needs a great origin story. For your essay, that's the introduction paragraph. This is where you grab the reader's attention with an awesome opening line. Try asking a question, telling a joke, or sharing an interesting fact related to your essay topic. Then you'll want to clearly state your main idea or thesis statement. This is like revealing your superhero identity and superpowers!Once you've suited up with that intro, it's time for the most important part - the body paragraphs! This is where you get to show off all your best evidence and examples, just like asuperhero battles the villains. Ideally, you'll want 3-5 body paragraphs.For each body paragraph, start by stating the main idea in a clear topic sentence. This helps focus your writing, just like a superhero's laser vision! Then you'll want to provide detailed examples, facts, and explanations to back up that main idea. Use super vivid and descriptive language to really paint a picture for your reader. Don't be afraid to use sensory details about sights, sounds, smells, tastes, or textures.To make your paragraphs flow smoothly, be sure to include transitions words like "first," "next," "additionally," "moreover," etc. Transitions are like your superhero's grappling hook, swinging the reader effortlessly from one idea to the next!Need to cite evidence from other sources? No problem! Use clear quotes or paraphrased information, and always cite your sources to avoid any literary kryptonite (aka plagiarism). Be sure to analyze and explain how your evidence supports your point - you're the superhero, not the quoted author!As your body paragraphs start to wrap up, get ready for the exciting conclusion - the final showdown between your superhero and the villain! In your conclusion paragraph, you'll summarize your main points by restating your thesis in a newway. Then finish strong by relating your topic back to the "real world" with insights, opinions, or a call to action.Just like any superhero movie's climactic battle, you want to leave your reader feeling totally wowed and excited about what they just experienced. Maybe you'll inspire them to fight for the same cause as your thesis statement!Once you've crafted your super essay from intro to conclusion, it's time for some final editing and polishing. Read through your work a few times, making sure:Every paragraph relates to your thesisYour evidence and examples are clear and effectiveYou've checked for proper grammar, spelling, and punctuationYour language and tone are appropriate for the audienceEditing is like giving your superhero costume those final adjustments before heading off to face evil! When you're all set, turn in that essay feeling confident and proud.Writing may seem tough at first, kind of like lifting a boulder over your head. But with practice and using these tips, you'll be a lean, mean, essay-writing machine! I can't wait to read yoursuper adventures in middle school English class. What heroic tales will you tell?篇6How to Write a Rocking English EssayHey kids! Are you struggling with writing English essays for school? Don't worry, I've got your back! Follow my tips and tricks, and you'll be churning out A+ essays in no time. Let's get started!First things first, what even is an essay? It's just a bunch of paragraphs where you write about a topic and share your ideas and opinions. See, not so scary, right?Now, every good essay needs to start with a bang! You want to hook your reader from the very first sentence. Think of a really cool fact, question, or story related to your topic that will grab their attention. If you're writing about dogs, you could start with "Did you know dogs have better low-light vision than humans?" See how that makes you curious to read more?Okay, after that killer opening line, it's time to write your introduction paragraph. This is where you'll state your main idea or thesis statement. Basically, it's a one-sentence summary ofwhat your whole essay will be about. For example: "Dogs make great pets because they are loyal, intelligent, and loving companions." Bam! Short and sweet.Now we're getting into the good stuff - the body paragraphs. This is where you'll expand on your main idea with examples, details, facts, and reasons to support your point. Maybe you'll have one paragraph explaining why dogs are loyal, then another on their intelligence, then another on how loving they are.Each body paragraph should start with a topic sentence that summarizes what that paragraph is about. Then you'll write 4-6 sentences explaining that point in detail using examples from your own experiences, things you've read, or just logical reasoning. Does that make sense?To make your body paragraphs flow nicely, you'll want to use transition words like "firstly", "additionally", "for example", "furthermore". They're like little bridges connecting your ideas together.Once you've made all your points in the body, it's time to wrap things up with a strong conclusion paragraph. This is where you'll restate your thesis in a new way and leave your reader with something interesting to think about. You can end with athought-provoking question, call to action, or memorable quote related to your topic.When you're all done writing, be sure to read through your essay and check for any silly grammar, spelling, or punctuation mistakes. It's also great to have a parent, teacher, or friend read it over and give you feedback.The biggest keys to writing a stellar English essay are to 1) Start with an engaging hook, 2) State your thesis clearly, 3) Support your main idea thoroughly in the body paragraphs, 4) Use transition words, and 5) Have an impactful conclusion. Got all that?Of course, practice makes perfect. So write, write, write! The more you practice, the easier it will become to organize your thoughts into a logical essay. Before you know it, you'll be a total pro.Don't get discouraged if your first few essays aren't masterpieces - it takes time and effort to become a great writer. Just have fun with it, let your creativity shine, and pretty soon you'll be earning essay awards left and right!So what are you waiting for? Grab a pencil and start jotting down some killer ideas for your next English essay. You've got this!。

部编小学五年级下册语文第四单元作文指导

部编小学五年级下册语文第四单元作文指导全文共5篇示例，供读者参考部编小学五年级下册语文第四单元作文指导篇1一、班级基本情况分析本班学生59人，经过一学期的努力，学生的语文基础知识和基本能力有了明显进步，大部分学生基础较扎实，有一定的听话、说话和朗读、背诵的能力，但课外读书较少，作文水平还较差。

这学期的教学重点放在注重调动学生的学习兴趣，转化学生的学习态度，培养良好的学习习惯，努力提高学生的自学能力，做好差生的转化工作。

二、工作目标在教学上，要加强学生的基础知识训练，每月继续向学生推荐一、两本好书，激发学生的阅读兴趣，提高阅读量。

重视课堂教学，利用文本进行阅读分析，提高学生的阅读能力。

针对学生习作中存在的问题，加强学生自我修改作文的'能力，多进行自主拟题作文练习和作文指导。

指导学生观察事物的方法，积累素材的方法和审题、构思、开头、结尾等方法的指导。

相信学生的习作会有所提高。

三、方法和措施1、充分借助“精读课文”对学生进行语文基本功训练。

2、注意提高学生学习的积极性和主动性。

针对学生的各方面情况，努力转化他们的学习兴趣，特别是对后进生，开展“一帮一”活动让优秀生带动落后生，给他们多一点关爱。

努力提高其学习的积极性。

从原来的“厌学”到“爱学”。

3、充分利用“略读课文”的安排，让学生将所学运用于其中进行自学，培养独立阅读的能力。

4、以作业、测试等形式进行句、段、篇、章的巩固。

抓住作业质量不放松。

5、注意调动学生练笔的积极性，利用周记形式，对学生进行作文训练。

尽量鼓励学生自由表达和说真话、实话、心里话，表达真情实感。

部编小学五年级下册语文第四单元作文指导篇2一、指导思想：以学校工作计划，教导处工作计划和语文大组工作计划为根本指导思想，一切从学生出发，以学生为本，以学定教，以教促学，以提高课堂四十分钟质量为核心，以推进“互动课堂，学程导航”教学范式为重点，深入开展教学研究，确保提高教育教学质量，使我们组的语文教学和教研工作更上一层楼。

2024届高考作文写作指导：拿来主义与文化自信的较量

高考作文写作指导：《文化在路上：拿来主义与文化自信的较量》写作要求：材料1:近日，由中国博主拍摄的短剧《逃出大英博物馆》，以拟人的方式讲述了一盏收藏于大英博物馆的“中华缠枝纹薄胎玉壶”化成少女，并在一位中国记者的帮助下踏上寻乡之行的故事。

材料2:什么都是“送去主义”了。

别的且不说罢，单是学艺上的东西，近来就先送-批古董到巴黎去展览，但终“不知后事如何”;还有几位“大师”们捧着几张古画和新画，在欧洲各国一路的挂过去，叫作“发扬国光”———鲁迅《拿来主义》从以上材料触发了你哪些思考请结合材料写一篇文章，谈谈你的认识。

要求:立意明确，选准角度，明确文体，自拟标题;不要套作，不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。

考前分析：一、考题分析该作文题目包含两个材料，涉及中国博主拍摄的短剧《逃出大英博物馆》和鲁迅的《拿来主义》。

前者讲述了一盏玉壶拟人化成少女，通过中国记者的帮助寻找家乡的故事，强调文化在国际舞台上的传播。

后者提到“送去主义”现象，批判一些学艺和文化作品被送往国外，提倡“拿来主义”。

二、审题立意文化传播与认同：通过《逃出大英博物馆》的故事，思考中国文化在国际传播中的角色，以及个体在这个过程中对文化认同的影响。

“送去主义”与“拿来主义”：结合鲁迅的观点，探讨当前文化交流中存在的问题，以及如何在文化输出中找到平衡。

三、构思要点文化输出的重要性：引入《逃出大英博物馆》的情节，强调文化输出对国家形象的塑造以及个体文化认同的影响。

文化自信与平衡：探讨在全球化时代，中国文化如何在国际舞台上展现自信，避免“送去主义”导致文化深度的流失。

“拿来主义”的理念：通过引用鲁迅的观点，分析“拿来主义”对于保护本土文化、提升国际地位的积极意义。

国际化的文化交流：思考如何在文化交流中实现平衡，既能输出本土文化，又能吸收外来文化，实现文明互鉴。

四、补充说明引用相关数据：结合当前文化输出的实际情况，引入一些数据和事实，支撑观点。

写作指导教学设计案例锦集四篇

写作指导教学设计案例锦集四篇案例一：感悟自然之美——自然题材写作指导案例导语：自然是孩子们最为亲近的朋友，通过培养对自然的感悟，可以激发他们的创作潜能。

以下是一份针对自然题材作文的写作指导案例。

案例一：春天的花【写作目标】培养学生对春天花朵的观察和感悟，提高写作表达能力。

【适用年级】小学二年级【教学准备】多媒体课件、季节海报、画笔和颜料【教学过程】1. 通过多媒体课件，介绍春天的花朵种类和特点，引发学生对春天花朵的兴趣。

2. 展示季节海报，引导学生回忆并描述他们在春天常见的花朵，如樱花、玫瑰等。

3. 学生们使用画笔和颜料，亲自绘制一幅春天花朵的图画，鼓励他们观察花朵的颜色、形状和细节，为后续作文准备素材。

4. 引导学生用简单的句子描述他们自己绘制的花朵画，如“这朵花是红色的，叶子是绿色的”等。

5. 教师鼓励学生自由发挥，写一篇关于春天花朵的小故事，以展示他们对春天花朵的感悟和创造力。

6. 学生交流彼此的作品，互相欣赏和点评，鼓励彼此的努力与进步。

【案例评价】此案例通过观察、绘画和写作的方式，培养了学生对春天花朵的感悟和表达能力。

同时，通过作品展示和交流，增加了学生的自信心和合作意识。

案例二：自我表达——个人经历题材写作指导案例导语：个人经历是写作的重要素材，通过培养学生对自身经历的观察和铭记，可以拓展他们的写作内容。

以下是一份针对个人经历题材作文的写作指导案例。

案例二：开心的周末活动【写作目标】引导学生描述自己开心的周末活动，实践书写个人经历的能力。

【适用年级】小学三年级【教学准备】学生照片、个人活动记录本、图画纸、彩色铅笔【教学过程】1. 老师复习和引导学生回忆他们上周末做过的开心活动，鼓励他们用简洁的语言描述这些活动。

2. 每个学生拿出自己的个人活动记录本，老师和同学一起分享和欣赏他们记录的活动照片和文字。

3. 老师指导学生在图画纸上，用彩色铅笔画出自己最喜欢的一次周末活动的场景。

4. 学生使用自己记录本的文字，描述他们绘制的图画，表达自己在活动中的感受和心情。

教师指导小学作文小品案例

教师指导小学作文小品案例在我所任教的小学班级里，有一个叫明明的小男孩，他聪明伶俐，但一提到写作文，就像霜打的茄子——蔫了。

每次作文课，他总是咬着笔头，一脸苦相，半天也挤不出几个字来。

有一次，作文题目是。

明明交上来的作文只有短短几行：“我的课余生活就是看电视、玩游戏。

没什么好玩的。

”看到这样的作文，我真是哭笑不得。

我把明明叫到办公室，决定好好跟他聊聊。

我笑着问他：“明明，你平时真的就只看电视和玩游戏吗？”他低着头，小声说：“也不是，老师，我还和小伙伴们一起踢足球呢。

”我一听，眼睛一亮，说：“这多好呀，那你怎么不写踢足球呢？”明明皱着眉头说：“老师，我不知道怎么写。

”我想了想，决定先引导他回忆踢足球的场景。

“明明，你先跟老师说一说，你们一般什么时候踢足球呀？”明明来了精神，说：“放学后，只要作业不多，我们就会在操场上踢一会儿。

”“那都有谁和你一起踢呢？”我接着问。

“有我的好朋友小刚、小强，还有隔壁班的几个同学。

”明明越说越兴奋。

“那你们是怎么分组的呢？”我继续引导。

明明手舞足蹈地说：“我们一般就石头剪刀布，谁赢了谁先选人，分成两组。

”“那比赛开始的时候，是什么样的呀？”我追问。

明明眼睛放光，说：“老师，一开始大家都特别兴奋，都想抢到球。

我跑得可快了，一下子就冲到前面去了。

”我笑着点点头，说：“明明，你看，这不就有很多可以写的了吗？那你抢到球之后呢？”明明挠挠头，说：“我想射门，可是被对方的守门员拦住了。

”“哎呀，那多可惜呀！然后呢？”我表现出很惋惜的样子。

明明接着说：“然后小刚接到了球，他一个假动作，骗过了对方的防守队员，把球传给了我。

这次我可没浪费机会，一脚就把球踢进了球门！”说到这，明明脸上洋溢着自豪的笑容。

我趁机说：“明明，你看，把你刚刚跟老师说的这些写下来，不就是一篇很棒的作文了吗？”明明有点犹豫，说：“老师，我怕我写不好。

”我拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励他：“别怕，你就按照你说的顺序，把每一个细节都写清楚，老师相信你一定可以的。

中考成长作文指导课教学设计案例

中考成长作文指导课教学设计案例全文共9篇示例，供读者参考中考成长作文指导课教学设计案例篇1【中考成长作文指导课教学设计案例】大家好啊,我是小明!今天我就来给你们讲一讲,我是怎么在老师的指导下写好了自己的中考成长作文的。

老师说,中考成长作文是考察我们的写作能力的一个重要内容。

它不仅关系到我们的语文成绩,也对我们以后的写作能力有很大影响。

所以写好成长作文可是一件特别重要的事情哦!老师首先就让我们每个人回忆自己成长过程中最难忘的一件事情。

嗯,我想了好久,终于想起来了一件事。

那是我上小学四年级的时候,有一次体育课上,我们在操场上玩"捉迷藏"游戏。

我藏起来的时候,不小心摔到了一个很深的水泥坑里。

当时坑里面很深,光线也不太好,我觉得很害怕。

我大声呼救,好在同学们很快就发现了我,老师也赶紧过来把我救了出去。

虽然当时我的手臂和膝盖擦伤了,但我并没有受太重的伤。

老师说,这真是一件让我难忘的事情啊!然后老师就让我们根据自己回忆的这件事,先写一个大概的作文提纲。

这可把我难住了,我从来没有独立写过作文提纲呢!不过好在老师就在一旁指导我们。

老师说,作文提纲其实就是把你回忆的那件事情,总结概括成几个重要的部分。

比如说我这件事情的话,可以分成开头、正文和结尾三个部分。

开头部分可以先写一句话,引出当时发生的那件事情;"正文"部分可以详细描述当时发生的一些具体情节;"结尾"部分则可以写一写我从这件事情中学到的一些体会和教训。

有了老师的指导,我就开始动手写作文提纲了。

提纲写好之后,我把它拿给老师看,老师说我的提纲已经写得很不错了,基本上都抓住了要点。

接下来就是根据提纲来写作文的正文部分了。

老师说,成长作文最重要的是要"切身""具体""生动",要让读者仿佛亲身经历了你描述的那件事情一样。

所以在写作时,一定要多使用一些生动的细节来渲染气氛,使读者有代入感。

餐桌上的故事作文指导

餐桌上的故事作文指导餐桌上的故事作文指导作为一名高中生，我们都已经明白了餐桌上的饮食文化的重要性，这里不再赘述。

相信我们在生活中也都曾经有过很多在餐桌上的故事，或开心或悲伤，或舒适或惊讶，值得我们回味。

本篇作文将围绕着这样一个主题——“餐桌上的故事”，给大家带来一些指导和思考。

一、清晰明了的中心思想在写作之前，我们需要先明确文章的中心思想，确定我们要传达给读者的信息是什么，为什么要写这篇文章。

对于餐桌上的故事来说，很多人可能会认为只是单纯的叙述一些趣闻轶事，但实际上，餐桌上的故事更多的是体现人际关系、文化交流以及情感交流等方面。

在撰写餐桌上的故事作文时，我们要明确表达的意图，例如可以描述一个家庭在餐桌上分饰不同的角色，体现每个人的责任和角色，或者描述一次与不同文化背景的人共进晚餐的经历，描绘其中的文化差异和交流，或者写下一次与父母吃饭时的聊天，体现家庭之间的深入交流，甚至是朋友间一次感性的交流，从而展现人与人之间的感情纽带。

二、适当引用的例证或事实在文章中增加有代表性的例证和事实是证明观点的有效方式。

餐桌上的故事也是如此，如可以引用生活中的事件，例如身边亲友的餐桌故事，如果是写饮食文化交流，可以引用具体的案例或者背景，如地域、节庆等，加深文章的信服力及可信程度。

这种方法可以使文章更加生动、具有实验性、说服力和亲切感。

三、流畅的语言表达文章语言表达应该简练明了，逻辑清晰，重点突出，让读者能在短时间内理解作者的观点和写作意图。

餐桌上的故事也应该尽量做到这一点，减少冗杂无用的叙述，可以通过加入具体细节、画面、心理分析等手法，营造一个比较真实的情境。

如果遇到无法表达的地方，还可以选择适当的描写手法来展示，如比喻、暗示、对比等。

要注意语言的通俗易懂，不要使用过于生僻或专业性太强的词汇，毕竟，我们的目标是让尽可能多的人能够理解我们的思想。

四、独特的思考角度和见解在描述餐桌上的故事时，尤其要避免大同小异的叙述方式，可以用一些独特的观点或者见解来表达自己的想法。

初中语文写作创意指导案例(含示范课课程设计、学科学习情况总结)

初中语文写作创意指导案例第一篇范文《秋天的印象》秋天，如一位成熟的女性，优雅地走来。

她穿着金黄的袍子，手持一枝凋谢的荷花，眼神中流露出淡淡的忧伤。

秋天的印象，是那金黄的稻田，波光粼粼的湖面，以及天空中南飞的大雁。

秋天的早晨，空气中弥漫着露水的气息，阳光透过树叶的缝隙，洒在地面上，形成斑驳的光影。

我独自漫步在公园的小径上，看着两旁金黄的落叶，踩在脚下沙沙作响。

公园里的湖面平静如镜，倒映着蓝天、白云和沿岸的树木，一群鸭子在湖中游弋，偶尔潜入水中，寻找食物。

湖边的柳树上，几只喜鹊在欢快地嬉戏，它们的歌声在秋天的早晨显得格外清脆。

抬头仰望天空，只见一群大雁排成“人”字形，向南方飞去。

它们的身影在秋天的蓝天中显得如此渺小，却又坚定地向着目标前进。

我不禁想起了那句诗：“秋水共长天一色，落霞与孤鹜齐飞。

”大雁的南飞，是秋天的一道靓丽风景线，也是秋天印象的一部分。

走进树林，一阵阵萧瑟的风声传来，树叶在风中纷纷落下，犹如黄色的雨点。

地上铺满了一层厚厚的落叶，踩在脚下软绵绵的。

秋天的树林，充满了生机与衰败，生命在悄然间完成了轮回。

秋天，是一个收获的季节，也是一个思考的季节。

面对大自然的变迁，我们应当学会珍惜时光，努力追求自己的梦想。

正如那南飞的大雁，不畏艰辛，勇往直前，终将抵达理想的彼岸。

第二篇范文《我的老师》我的老师，是一位充满智慧和爱心的人。

她犹如一盏明灯，照亮了我求学的道路，让我在迷茫时找到方向，在失落时找回信心。

老师的笑容，如同春天的阳光，温暖而明媚。

每当我走进教室，看到老师那亲切的笑容，心中的忧虑便瞬间消散。

她总是用鼓励的眼光看着我，让我相信自己有能力克服一切困难。

在她的关爱下，我变得更加自信、勇敢。

老师的知识渊博，让我深感敬佩。

她讲授的课程，总能引人入胜，让我们在愉快的氛围中学习。

她不仅关注我们的学业，还关心我们的兴趣爱好，鼓励我们全面发展。

在她的引导下，我找到了自己的兴趣所在，并在各方面取得了进步。

老师的责任心，让我为之感动。

作文指导：中考话题作文设计案例分析三则

作文指导：中考话题作文设计案例分析三则
文题一
石头怎样才能在水中漂起来? 海尔集团的CEO(首席执行官)张瑞敏目光炯炯地看着讲台下的中层干部们，提出了这样一个像是脑筋急转弯的问题。

这是海尔的一次关于流程再造的高级经理人才培训会上的一幕情景，张瑞敏作为主持人正在与学员们互动讨论。

把石头掏空。

有人喊了一句，张瑞敏摇摇头。

把石头放在木板上。

又有人答道，张瑞敏又摇摇头：没有木板。

做一块假石头。

这个回答引来一片笑声，张瑞敏还是摇摇头：石头是真的。

速度。

海尔集团见习副总裁喻子达回答道。

正确。

张瑞敏脸上露出了笑容，《孙子兵法》上说：激水之疾，至于漂石者，势也。

速度决定了石头能否漂起来。

读罢这则材料，请以速度为话题，结合自身的学习、生活实际，深入思考，写一篇不少于600字的作文，自拟题目，文体不限。

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①按常理，石头在水中总是要往下沉的，但只要给石头足够的速度，它在水中就会漂起来。

速度不仅可以让石头漂起来，也可以让摩托车、汽车在陡壁上运动而不掉下来，还可以让飞机漂行于离地球数千米的空中，甚至可以让卫星漂在太空中。

②早起的鸟儿有虫吃，赶在别人前头，不要停下来，这是竞争者的姿态，也是致胜者的姿态。

③人生亦如此，没有人为你等待，没有机会为你停留，与时间赛跑，才可。