英语写作常见语法错误分析PPT课件
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《常见的语法错误》PPT课件
(1)*我会相信他散布谣言而跟我的女朋友分开吗? (2)*他身为商场总经理,不但对多数售货员坚决 反对出售伪劣产品的不良做法丝毫不加制止,反而指责 那些坚持原则的售货员是“拆商场的台”,是“不顾大 局”。(报)
另一种情况是,缺少必要的关联词语。在汉语的复
句里,有时可以不用关联词语。特别在口语里,常 常是能不用就不用。下面是老舍作品《全家福》剧 本里的一段对话:
另一种残缺谓语的情况是,指残缺谓语中心 动词。例如: (2)*对于县委关于扩种省里推广的新的 棉花品种的决定,反应不一,有的甚至抵 触情绪。(报) (3)*你想想,经过自己的努力和奋斗,来 成就一番事业,这不也是很自豪的吗?
(报) (4)*此时,远在大洋彼岸的我,临窗望 着天穹上的一弯新月,千里共婵娟的你, 我双手合十,虔诚地为你默默祝福。(报)
下面的句子毛病相同: (5)*美国的公共交通并不发达。我们到过的
几个城市,几乎都没有无轨或有轨电车,公共汽 车的线路和车辆也较少,等十多分钟不见车来是 常事。地下铁道全国只有很少几个城市有。在这 种情况下,除非你上班地点就在住宅附近,那就 只好自备汽车了。(报)
(6)*吉林省磐石县曾经是多年无森林火灾的 先进县,该县县委主要负责人无视国家法令和合 理的规章制度,纵容一些人进入林区乱砍滥伐, 毁林开荒、搞副业,使一个好端端的林业先进县 城变成山林火灾最多的一个县。(刊)
(二)述语和宾语搭配不当
述语和宾语搭配不当,这有两种情况,一种是 语义上不搭配,例如:
(1)*合伙人如严重违反合伙协议约定的义 务,由此而造成的经济损失将由违反协
议者负责赔偿。(刊) (2)*凡拒不执行火场指挥员指挥的,必须 给以严厉的行政处分,严重的要负刑事
责任。(报) (3)*为了防止这类交通事故不再发生,他 们加强了安全教育与管理。
另一种情况是,缺少必要的关联词语。在汉语的复
句里,有时可以不用关联词语。特别在口语里,常 常是能不用就不用。下面是老舍作品《全家福》剧 本里的一段对话:
另一种残缺谓语的情况是,指残缺谓语中心 动词。例如: (2)*对于县委关于扩种省里推广的新的 棉花品种的决定,反应不一,有的甚至抵 触情绪。(报) (3)*你想想,经过自己的努力和奋斗,来 成就一番事业,这不也是很自豪的吗?
(报) (4)*此时,远在大洋彼岸的我,临窗望 着天穹上的一弯新月,千里共婵娟的你, 我双手合十,虔诚地为你默默祝福。(报)
下面的句子毛病相同: (5)*美国的公共交通并不发达。我们到过的
几个城市,几乎都没有无轨或有轨电车,公共汽 车的线路和车辆也较少,等十多分钟不见车来是 常事。地下铁道全国只有很少几个城市有。在这 种情况下,除非你上班地点就在住宅附近,那就 只好自备汽车了。(报)
(6)*吉林省磐石县曾经是多年无森林火灾的 先进县,该县县委主要负责人无视国家法令和合 理的规章制度,纵容一些人进入林区乱砍滥伐, 毁林开荒、搞副业,使一个好端端的林业先进县 城变成山林火灾最多的一个县。(刊)
(二)述语和宾语搭配不当
述语和宾语搭配不当,这有两种情况,一种是 语义上不搭配,例如:
(1)*合伙人如严重违反合伙协议约定的义 务,由此而造成的经济损失将由违反协
议者负责赔偿。(刊) (2)*凡拒不执行火场指挥员指挥的,必须 给以严厉的行政处分,严重的要负刑事
责任。(报) (3)*为了防止这类交通事故不再发生,他 们加强了安全教育与管理。
英语写作典型错误例析PPT课件
纠正: 1. I have no difficult in finding your home
difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思,或由于语法需要不能 再出现某一单词,如果学生基本功不够扎实,就常常出 现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨:要减少中式英语必须做到:
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
为更好满足学习和使用需求,课件在下载 后自由编辑,请根据实际情况进行调整
difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思,或由于语法需要不能 再出现某一单词,如果学生基本功不够扎实,就常常出 现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨:要减少中式英语必须做到:
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
为更好满足学习和使用需求,课件在下载 后自由编辑,请根据实际情况进行调整
英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)PPT演示课件
③电视的亮度应调到最低。(turn down )
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe
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四、典型错误4
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二、典型错误2 在写作中,逻辑思维混乱.
1. Using Ipods can listen to music and read e-books.(用Ipods可以听音乐和看电子书籍) →Using Ipods , we can listen to music and read e-books. →Ipods can be used to listen to music and read e-books. 2. Through reading can obtain various knowledge. (通过看书能够获得各种各样的知识) →we can obtain various knowledge from reading. → Reading can help us obtain various knowledge.
help us make more friends.
②如果能捐赠一些书给这些孩子,他们就能够获得更多的
知识。
→ If donating some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ If we donate some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ we donating some books to these children, they
英语写作典型错误例析PPT教学课件
put on 4. 3. I accepted your letter yesterday.
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关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
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非完整性句子
Without a friend will feel lonely.
^ one
一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(除祈使句外), 如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子,就会导致出现非 完整句子。
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改正:
1. The woman talked to you just now is our English
纠正:
1. I returned back the book to you at 6:00 am.
2. My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.
3. The train is entering into the tunnel
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选词或搭配不当
^ teacher.
who
2. Although rained, we went on working.
^ it was
3. China, which is the third largest country in the world.
4. This part contain 9 province and 3 autonomous regions, have 5,400,00km2
常见的语法错误 19页PPT文档
⒌句式杂糅:
①造成肥胖的主要原因是因为血液循环不畅的缘 故而引起了新陈代谢缓慢。 ②我们应该经常开展群众性体育活动也是十分必 要的。 ③他的脸色惨白的十分吓人。
㈣、复句运用的错误:
⒈分局之间缺乏密接的意义联系; ⒉结构层次混乱; ⒊关联词语使用错误。
⒊成分多余:
①按照早期教育的观点,儿童六岁入学问题并不算 早。 “问题” ②中国队获得参加决赛阶段的资格。 “阶段” ③当时我们正在进行排练新戏。 “新戏” ④成立业余体校两年来的今天,我们共培养专业运 动员二十多名。 “的今天”
⒋语序不当:
①领操员的口号划破了寂静的清晨。 ②全体同学深刻地受到一次爱国主义教育。 ③他便瞪了我狠狠的两眼。 ④林晓梅成为造船厂出色的第一个女气焊工人。 ⑤一列火车轰隆隆的突然从东面开过来。
㈢、单句结构常见的错误:
⒈搭配不当; ⒉成分残缺; ⒊成分多余; ⒋语序不当; ⒌句式杂糅。
⒈搭配不当:
①参加长跑的运动员在公路上驰骋。主谓搭配不当
②中国队在比赛中发扬了自己的风格和水平,取
得了冠军。 动宾搭配不当
定语中心语搭配不当
③葡萄沟人民今年又提出了响亮的战斗任务。
④今年我要努力地生活,报效伟大的祖国。状 搭语 配中 不心 当语
“和”表示并列关系,“或”表示选择关系。
⒋助词的误用:
①别看花钱不多,可吃的挺舒服。 ②今天,他考上了北师大举办作家函授班。 ③这是我们两国之间第一次的友好合作,具有深远意义。 ④客人们一边吃了点心,一边欣赏了节目。
注意: “的”定语的标志,“地”状语的标志,“得”
补语的标志。 “了”表示动作、变化的完成或实现。
②这种意外的发生是很偶尔的。 副词误用为形容词
③难道谁能否认地球不是绕太阳转的吗? 否定副词误用
英语写作常见语法错误PPT课件
在上一段落中,划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。
(1)两句话之间不能用逗号隔开,应加上并列连词 and。
(2)sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语 口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。
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• (3) First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one
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5. If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition.
6. (指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改 为:If you try … wherever possible, you can maintain …)
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6. In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. (in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为:I think the owner is … 或:In my opinion, the owner is …)
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. (1) Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. (2) Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
(1)两句话之间不能用逗号隔开,应加上并列连词 and。
(2)sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语 口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。
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• (3) First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one
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5. If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition.
6. (指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改 为:If you try … wherever possible, you can maintain …)
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6. In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. (in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为:I think the owner is … 或:In my opinion, the owner is …)
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. (1) Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. (2) Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
英语写作常见错误PPT课件
Mixed constructions occur in a sentence when the
writer starts out writing one sentence pattern and
ends up writing another. GUCAS English Depart. Hu
2020/8/17
--If you find that writing is hard, it’s because it is hard. It’s one of the hardest things that people do.
Reason: For a group of words to be a complete sentence, it must have an independent clause with a subject and a predicate.
Jiangbo
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End-stop error
I asked the guard for directions she told me the time instead.
--I asked the guard for directions. She told me the time instead.
-- Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to all readers.
Or: Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.
英语写作常见错误与分析
GUCAS English Depart. Hu
英文写作常见错误PPT课件
processed,apologize,grateful,delay,stock,prompt, first-time,would,note,firm,assure,repeat,records,
amend,accept,track
Please return the ___ form asap so that your order can be processed without any ____.
Homework: (5.2-5.9)
1. In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown aren’t very busy.
2. Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
一、主语错误
3. 主谓错位 1) Reading books can acquire
knowledge.
People can acquire knowledge from books.
We _______be _______ if you could supply bank references. Our normal terms for _____customers are 50% ______. I have spoken to my line manager, and we are pleased to
英文写作常见错误
amend,accept,track
Please return the ___ form asap so that your order can be processed without any ____.
Homework: (5.2-5.9)
1. In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown aren’t very busy.
2. Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
一、主语错误
3. 主谓错位 1) Reading books can acquire
knowledge.
People can acquire knowledge from books.
We _______be _______ if you could supply bank references. Our normal terms for _____customers are 50% ______. I have spoken to my line manager, and we are pleased to
英文写作常见错误
语法纠错课件ppt
语法纠错实践与案例分析
案例一:英文写作中的常见语法错误
总结词
英文写作中常见的语法错误包括主谓不一致、时态错误、冠词使用不当等。
详细描述
主谓不一致是指主语和谓语在人称和数上不一致,例如“She like”应该改为“She likes”。时态错误是指在句 子中使用了不正确的时态,例如“I will go to the park”应该改为“I went to the park”。冠词使用不当是指 使用了错误的冠词或不使用冠词,例如“a university”应该改为“the university”。
详细描述
形容词和副词使用不当通常出现在比较级、最高级以及修饰名词、动词、形容词等的使用上。例如, “She is more beautiful than him”应该改为“She is more beautiful than he”。
CHAPTER 03
语法纠错技巧和方法
仔细阅读和检查
仔细阅读文章或句子,检查是否 有拼写错误、标点符号使用不当
语法纠错课件
CONTENTS 目录
• 语法纠错的重要性 • 常见语法错误分析 • 语法纠错技巧和方法 • 语法纠错实践与案例分析 • 总结与建议
CHAPTER 01
语法纠错的重要性
语法错误的常见类型
01
02
03
04
主谓不一致
主语和谓语动词的数不一致, 例如“The books are written by him”。
案例二:中文写作中的常见语法错误
要点一
总结词
要点二
详细描述
中文写作中常见的语法错误包括语序不当、成分残缺、语 义重复等。
语序不当是指词语或短语的位置不正确,例如“我非常非 常喜欢读书”应该改为“我非常喜欢读书”。成分残缺是 指句子缺少必要的成分,例如“因为时间很紧,所以我很 着急”应该改为“因为时间很紧,我很着急”。语义重复 是指句子中使用了重复或相似的词语,例如“他很聪明, 但是也很狡猾”应该改为“他既聪明又狡猾”。
案例一:英文写作中的常见语法错误
总结词
英文写作中常见的语法错误包括主谓不一致、时态错误、冠词使用不当等。
详细描述
主谓不一致是指主语和谓语在人称和数上不一致,例如“She like”应该改为“She likes”。时态错误是指在句 子中使用了不正确的时态,例如“I will go to the park”应该改为“I went to the park”。冠词使用不当是指 使用了错误的冠词或不使用冠词,例如“a university”应该改为“the university”。
详细描述
形容词和副词使用不当通常出现在比较级、最高级以及修饰名词、动词、形容词等的使用上。例如, “She is more beautiful than him”应该改为“She is more beautiful than he”。
CHAPTER 03
语法纠错技巧和方法
仔细阅读和检查
仔细阅读文章或句子,检查是否 有拼写错误、标点符号使用不当
语法纠错课件
CONTENTS 目录
• 语法纠错的重要性 • 常见语法错误分析 • 语法纠错技巧和方法 • 语法纠错实践与案例分析 • 总结与建议
CHAPTER 01
语法纠错的重要性
语法错误的常见类型
01
02
03
04
主谓不一致
主语和谓语动词的数不一致, 例如“The books are written by him”。
案例二:中文写作中的常见语法错误
要点一
总结词
要点二
详细描述
中文写作中常见的语法错误包括语序不当、成分残缺、语 义重复等。
语序不当是指词语或短语的位置不正确,例如“我非常非 常喜欢读书”应该改为“我非常喜欢读书”。成分残缺是 指句子缺少必要的成分,例如“因为时间很紧,所以我很 着急”应该改为“因为时间很紧,我很着急”。语义重复 是指句子中使用了重复或相似的词语,例如“他很聪明, 但是也很狡猾”应该改为“他既聪明又狡猾”。
英语写作中的常见错误PPT课件
• 2. The jury _e_xp_e_c_t_s_ to reach its decision very quickly. (expect)
• 3. He believes that athletics _im__p_ro_v_e_s_ school morale. (improve)
• 4. She is one of the women who _m_a_k_e_ this country what it is. (make)
• She happily deposited in her savings account the money she has earned teaching English.
• 4. I almost spent two hours on this exercise.
• I spent almost two hours on this exercise.
• 不定代词anybody, everybody, each, every, anyone, nobody, somebody等,通常都跟单 数谓语动词。
• 改为:Every boy and girl in Grade 6 is eager to win the contest.
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by Wu Joy
英语写作中的常见错误
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by Wu Joy
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一、不一致(Disagreements)
• 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数 的不一致、时态不一致、及代词不一致等.
• 例1. When one have money ,he can do what he want to .
• (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么.) • 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have
• 3. He believes that athletics _im__p_ro_v_e_s_ school morale. (improve)
• 4. She is one of the women who _m_a_k_e_ this country what it is. (make)
• She happily deposited in her savings account the money she has earned teaching English.
• 4. I almost spent two hours on this exercise.
• I spent almost two hours on this exercise.
• 不定代词anybody, everybody, each, every, anyone, nobody, somebody等,通常都跟单 数谓语动词。
• 改为:Every boy and girl in Grade 6 is eager to win the contest.
2020/9/18
by Wu Joy
英语写作中的常见错误
2020/9/18
by Wu Joy
1
一、不一致(Disagreements)
• 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数 的不一致、时态不一致、及代词不一致等.
• 例1. When one have money ,he can do what he want to .
• (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么.) • 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have
英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)精品PPT课件
The tasks for this lesson: 1.复合句中缺少必要的连接词
2.逻辑性错误
3. be动词用错 4.主语用错 5. There be 句型用错 6.谓语与非谓语混乱
一、典型错误1
在写作中,复合句缺少相应的连接词。
1. You should do is to adjust yourself. (你所应该做
三、典型错误3 Be 动词使用不当
1.We are often blame the teachers for their strict demands. (我们常常会责备老ar师e 的严格要求) 2.However, other students against the idea. (然而, 其他学生都反对这个观点)
的是调整好自己)
→ What you should do is to adjust yourself.
2. My dream is I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao. (我的梦想是成为林书豪一样的运动
明星)
→ My dream is that I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao.
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe mtiontihmeumm.inimum.
What upsets us most is that many people are not aware of its importance.
2.我们最好要保持放松,这对我们的学习有积极的影响。
We had better keep us relaxed, which will have an active effect on our study.
英语写作常见语法错误分析PPT课件
important role in many fields of our life. As is known to all, English plays an
important role in many fields of our life.
or It is known to all that English plays an
important role in many fields of our life.
or What is known to all is that English plays an important role in many fields of our life.
D.句子成分缺失 California has a population of 38 million which mainly including Indians, Europeans and others.
sentences. 1. Wherever they looked that nearly
everything was destroyed. Wherever they looked nearly everything
was destroyed. 2. As is known to all that English plays an
Indians were the first to arrive here. or What is known to all is that 15,000 years
ago Indians were the first to arrive here.
Try to correct the mistakes in the following
important role in many fields of our life.
or It is known to all that English plays an
important role in many fields of our life.
or What is known to all is that English plays an important role in many fields of our life.
D.句子成分缺失 California has a population of 38 million which mainly including Indians, Europeans and others.
sentences. 1. Wherever they looked that nearly
everything was destroyed. Wherever they looked nearly everything
was destroyed. 2. As is known to all that English plays an
Indians were the first to arrive here. or What is known to all is that 15,000 years
ago Indians were the first to arrive here.
Try to correct the mistakes in the following
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例2.There is a fire happened / broke out. There was occurred a fire in Honghua Hotel.
改为:A fire happened / broke out / occurred.
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例3.She learn knowledge depend on herself. 改为: She learns knowledge
改为1:There are a large number of people who die from the disasters. 改为2:There are a large number of people dying from the disasters. 改为3:A large number of people die from the disasters.
by herself.
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例4.The driver of the red car was died on the spot. 改为:The driver of the red car died on the spot.
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例5.Helping others we also know the significance of life. 改为: We also realize the significance of life through helping others.
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例8.Children take care of the seniors should meet their material needs, but this is not enough, concerning their spiritual needs is more important.
改为: When it comes to taking care of the seniors , children should meet their spiritual needs as well as material needs.
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1.句子结构混乱,出现句子不完整或句子 成分多余。句子不完整(Sentence Fragments) 在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文 等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书 面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表 达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后, 笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.
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例1.There are large number of people die from the disasters.
2. 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech) “词性误用”常表现为:介 词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名 词当动词用等.
例1.It’s likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.
改为1: You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.
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例9.When your opportunity coming, you attain success will be easier. 改为: When your opportunity comes, it will be easier for you to attain success.
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例2.You can’t success without your
efforts.
改为1:You can’t succeed without
your efforts.
改为2:You can’t obtain success
without your efforts.
改为3:You can’t become successful
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例6.The public service advertisement catch everyone’s eyes, enable us pay more attention about our lives and societies.
改为:The public service advertisements catch everyone’s eyes, which enables us to pay more attention about our lives and societies.
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改为2: It’s likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent. 改为3: It is likely that you are on the
way to success if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.
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例7.The aging of population bring some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors feel lonely and so on.
改为: The aging of poblems, such as the lack of labor, seniors’ sense of loneliness and so on.
英语写作常见错误
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整体概况
概况一
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概况二
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概况三
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1.句子结构混乱,出现句子不完整 或句子成分多余
2. 词性误用 3.主谓不一致 4.根据中文逐字硬译
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5. 名词可数与不可数的误用 6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆 7 .动宾搭配不当 8. 词组搭配错误 9.综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态, 语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误
例2.There is a fire happened / broke out. There was occurred a fire in Honghua Hotel.
改为:A fire happened / broke out / occurred.
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例3.She learn knowledge depend on herself. 改为: She learns knowledge
改为1:There are a large number of people who die from the disasters. 改为2:There are a large number of people dying from the disasters. 改为3:A large number of people die from the disasters.
by herself.
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例4.The driver of the red car was died on the spot. 改为:The driver of the red car died on the spot.
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例5.Helping others we also know the significance of life. 改为: We also realize the significance of life through helping others.
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例8.Children take care of the seniors should meet their material needs, but this is not enough, concerning their spiritual needs is more important.
改为: When it comes to taking care of the seniors , children should meet their spiritual needs as well as material needs.
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1.句子结构混乱,出现句子不完整或句子 成分多余。句子不完整(Sentence Fragments) 在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文 等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书 面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表 达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后, 笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.
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例1.There are large number of people die from the disasters.
2. 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech) “词性误用”常表现为:介 词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名 词当动词用等.
例1.It’s likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.
改为1: You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.
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例9.When your opportunity coming, you attain success will be easier. 改为: When your opportunity comes, it will be easier for you to attain success.
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例2.You can’t success without your
efforts.
改为1:You can’t succeed without
your efforts.
改为2:You can’t obtain success
without your efforts.
改为3:You can’t become successful
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例6.The public service advertisement catch everyone’s eyes, enable us pay more attention about our lives and societies.
改为:The public service advertisements catch everyone’s eyes, which enables us to pay more attention about our lives and societies.
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改为2: It’s likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent. 改为3: It is likely that you are on the
way to success if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.
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例7.The aging of population bring some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors feel lonely and so on.
改为: The aging of poblems, such as the lack of labor, seniors’ sense of loneliness and so on.
英语写作常见错误
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整体概况
概况一
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概况二
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概况三
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1.句子结构混乱,出现句子不完整 或句子成分多余
2. 词性误用 3.主谓不一致 4.根据中文逐字硬译
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5. 名词可数与不可数的误用 6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆 7 .动宾搭配不当 8. 词组搭配错误 9.综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态, 语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误