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What My Life Will Be Like in 20 Years

How is everything going with you? I'm glad to receive your letter on 3rd March. I'm writing to talk about my future life with you.

Twenty years later, I'll be an energetic woman in my thirties. I'm going to be very successful in my career. At that time, I will have been a popular English teacher in my beloved junior high school in which I'm studying now. Sometimes I will give my students online classes through the internet and sometimes we are all present in the classroom in person. When we are at school, playing games with my students and helping them with their difficulties will be my routine between classes. As an enthusiastic teacher, I like to share my time with my lovely children. However, I am going to insist on my hobby --- reading books, which I developed when I was young. When I'm free from my business, going on line and chatting with my friends and teachers will be a perfect way of killing time. With the development of the technology, I will live an easy and comfortable life. Needless to say, I won't need to clean the house or wash clothes, for the intelligent robot which is invented already will do all tasks like that. In my daily life, cellphones will play a very important role, acting as remote controls, computers, and so on. With a handsome husband who loves me, I will live a happy life together with him. As I dream, a lovely girl will come into our life, who is our angel.

Playing with her can be so sweet a task, and I will attempt to take good care of her. Having a happy family and so many new productions, I will enjoy my future life.

My future life

In twenty years, I will be thirty-four years old. I think I will be a successful and happy person.

I will be a good English translator and I will have my English class.

I will love my job because I love English. I do not often go to the office because I can work at home, according to the diary of my work list. I won't need to wake up early and I can work until late at night I think people must have enough sleep, in order to better work.

I will leave home and live in my own flat. However, I will live near my parents and I will visit them often, I will never forget my parents. Every year, we will have a family trip together.

In my spare time, I’m going to speak English and travel around the world. I like the quiet reading, reading my favorite book will read all kinds of English books to enrich my work experience...

I like to speak English, so I have to study English with my friends every day, and have a conversation with my friends.

I will enjoy my life a lot because I will spend my time how I want to. Life will be so exciting wonderful and comfortable. I even dream of my future life, which is what I want.

I'm sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in the future will get better and better.

What will my life be like in 20 years?

In twenty years, I will be thirty-three years old. I think that I will be a successful and happy person. Life will be so interesting and comfortable.

I would like to be a teacher in the future and use more technology in my job. I will enjoy my job very much because I like teaching students. After class, I will play basketball with my students on the playground. Sometimes I will help my students with other subjects. I think I will make good friends with my students. I will build a website to help my students learn and give them lesson and homework online. I will work near my home,