读后续写与概要写作微技能九 高分开头

下面介绍12种常见的开头方式。
语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基
1．巧用副词 Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. Joyfully he skipped up the street. (10 月 浙 江 卷 )Para.1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.(时间副词衔接＋环境描写)
3．巧用分词短语 Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door. Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over. (10月浙江卷)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.(现在分词＋情绪形容词)
(2018·6月浙江卷)Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.(情绪 形容词＋从句) (2018·6月浙江卷)Para.2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.
4．巧用连词 As he walked, he whistled. Although he was afraid, he jumped right in.
5．巧用介词短语 At the end of the lane he suddenly stopped.
6．巧用对话或独白 “Let’s see who gets there first！” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. “Hold on tight！” My father yelled.We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion.This was my first roller coaster ride. (2017·6月浙江卷)The car abruptly stopped in front of him.“Get into the car.” Paul shouted at Mac.
7．描述人物性格 Mark is a studious boy who loves reading.His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking and they call him Mr.Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home...
8．描述感情 The moment she saw how she did for her science test, tears started welling up in Tina’s eyes and falห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ing down her cheeks.
9．描写环境
I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves.Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach. (2017·11月浙江卷)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination.(视觉＋环境描写 ＋拟人)
微技能九 高分开头
浙江高考读后续写已经进行了多次。如何写好读后续写在高考中博取阅卷老师的 眼球获得梦寐以求的高分，如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出，获得20＋高分这是 很多老师和学生一直不懈努力的课题。
如何写好读后续写的开头？可以使用哪些写作技能和手法？我们一起来探究一下 一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣， 并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味 十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地读完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读 者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。“Well begun is half done！”可见，写好一个故事的好开头 是多么的重要。
2．巧用形容词短语 Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave. (10月浙江卷)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.(并列情绪形容词) (10月浙江卷)It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.(状态形容词＋as/though 引导的倒装句)