读后续写之心理描写和动作描写

deer jumping with joy. Laughter lingered around(萦绕) the room.
personification metaphor mix with surroundings
2.Anger
He glared at me with burning eyes. My head hummed, and my heart burned
in my chest, and I wanted to pounce on him and punch him hard. When he heard this, he immediately glared at me, his face full of blue veins.
3.Sadness
My heart seemed to jump out of my throat, my legs were too weak to stand, and I almost fell down several times.
She held her breath and did not move. Her face turned pale and stood there
The continuous writing
Phycology description and actions description
Steps of continuous writing
1. Read and get main ideas.(5W+H)and(who met what problem).
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
Tears are running down her cheek like a river. exaggeration simile
Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
The shock of the news quite took my breath away.
Raise my eyebrow
7.Anxiety
1.could feel sweat beading on my forehead as I walked around the corner.
2.I have butterflies in my stomach every time I speak in public. 3源自文库My mind went blank. 4.he could feel her palms sweating, heartbeat racing and blood rushing in her ears.
I sobbed slowly, my heart filled with despair.
It's raining in my heart.
4.Fears
I was so scared that I couldn't even get out of the air. My heart was pounding like a rabbit bouncing around in my heart.
• 2.“Here”, he said. At the same time he handed the coins to the gatekeeper.
• "Here. " he said, handing the coins to the gatekeeper.
Use –ing form or –ed form to replace the clause
2.Think: ; plots(情节); the emotion changes the given sentences phycology ,
3.writing. conversation actions
appearance the surroundings
Phycology description
tongue-tied.
5.Regret
Shame hitting, the woman kept silent, having no courage to look his husband in the eye.
Guilt and shame flowing in her mind, she didn't even dare to watch her husband in the eye, weeping in regret.
I froze. I could feel the heat rising into my cheeks, did I really just do that?
6.Surprise
He put his hand over his mouth. His eyes were widely open for he couldn't believe what had happened.
• 1.happiness and enjoyment
I was overjoyed and ran three steps at once. Flowers are smiling brightly, birds are crying
joyfully. My heart is as sweet as honey. Her face is red, excitement in the heart, as a
Practice
1.因为被突然的声音吓到了，Lily的身体 抖（tremble）了一下。 Frightened by the sudden voice, Lily trembled.
2.他下了车，推开门，看见两年未见的 父母在家，激动地热泪盈眶。
He got off the door, and pushed the door open. Seeing his parents who hadn’t seen him for two years, he was so excited that he burst into tears.
Actions description
• 1.When he heard this, he immediately glared at me, his face full of blue veins.
• Hearing this, he immediately glared at me, his face full of blue veins.