英语读后续写公开课

Vivid Writing five tips:
By using linking words effectively. By adding some details reasonably. By using different sentence structures. By describing the action , details, circumstance, psychology… By using rhetoric speech (修辞手法)
His wife cooked us a dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “ The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze( 吃草 ). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horse. They looked really cool.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
Para.1 ： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
Para.2 ： We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
What is a good Continuation writing?
trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. 4. I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. psychology u I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horse. They looked really cool . 5. u It looked like a beautiful woven( 编织的 ) blanket spread out upon the ground just for
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph one: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _____________________________.
Paragraph two: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.______________________________________.
Read for basic information
p Who p When p Where p What
dad and Uncle Paul took the sheep out
get lost
to graze.
climax
curious curious/impressed/admirable
Read for language
1. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom. action & circumstance u My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and
Group talking for the plot developments with questions
Para.1
：
Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
what
horse.
where
1. Seeing the running rabbit, how did the writer or the horse feel ?
The story is about? writer and his dad went on a vacation in the wild .
Read for plots and feelings cozy/relaxed/comfortable
excited
My dad decided to take me on a new trip.
us. simile 比喻手法
6. u “ Don't be late for supper. ” Uncle Paul cried, “ and keep to the track so that you don't get lost! ” “ Ok! ” my dad cried back . conversation
2. What difficulties did they meet? What was their feelings?
3. How did they overcome their difficulties and find their way back to Uncle Paul’s house? What was their feelings?
my dad, Uncle Paul and I one summer afternoon the Wild West, Uncle Paul’s farm in Pecos went on a vacation
One summer , far away from Uncle Paul’s farm house, the
water rolling down the river nearby. 2. My dad and I started riding horses. action u My dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly
5. How did they get lost ★ ? What was their feelings about being lost?
Para.2 ： We had no idea where we were and it got dark. how?
1. When they got lost, what was their feelings ?
towards the mountains. 3. I was so peaceful and quiet. detail & circumstance u It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pipe
On summer day
the first night
Uncle Paul picked on the farm us up and drove us up to his farm in Pecos
I helped Tina feed the chickens. My in the afternoon
Theme plot feeling
Story
2. How did the writer or the horse react to the rabbit ? 3. What was the result ? What was the writer ’s feelings ? 4. How did the writer ’s father react to the writer ’s situation?
in the late afternoon
in the guestroom
listening to the
frogs and water
rolling down the
early in the
river
next morning
delighted
I got a permission to ride a horse with my father’s at dusk company
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper.” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “Ok!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pipe trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven( 编织的 ) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意 : 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
4. How could paragraph two be ended reasonably?
Group talking for key words coordination
dad Uncle Paul farm house river feed
sheep late track get lost
sight