读写任务型材料概括型作文写作训练高三英语

“读写任务式作文”写作训练

Focus: 30 词的摘要怎么写？

(限时训练十五作文)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

As we all know, the “ (passe nger) tran sport duri ng the Spring Festival period ” has bee n a hot phrase all through the China land.

The volume of passenger traffic(客运量)reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways( 铁道咅B) has come up with solutions. For instanee, it arranges extra trains

duri ng the peak time for passe nger tran sport as well as ope ns 24-hour ticket sales win dows for passe ngers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providi ng convenience for passe ngers.

One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passe ngers are migra nt workers returni ng home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selli ng tickets broke dow n un der too much pressure of operati on. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn ' t suit nowadays ' situation. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。【忌照抄原句！忌添加自己观点！30词左右！】

1. 以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写，内容包括：

(1 )自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况；【第一人称，过去时】

(2)“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因；【乘客主体是农民工，不懂购票；系统本身不够先进。

其实这两点可以从阅读材料中找到，但是必须用不同方式来表达】

(3)给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。【针对上一段提出的两方面问

题来写】

［写作要求］

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句

子；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

［评分标准］

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。

【请你练习】划出每段关键词；替换成不同表达方式；关键词：tran sport during the Spring Festival _____ period ”，solutions , selling tickets on-Iine , However, passengers , blame

范文：Although it is as crowded as usual during the “ transport during the Spring Festival period ” ， many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-I ine appeari ng, many passe ngers are dissatisfied. ________________________________________

Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.

Reas ons for the problems of buying tickets on-I ine are divided. For migra nt workers, lack ing the kno wledge of han dli ng computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-sell ing system is not adva need eno ugh to cope with difficult situatio ns.

To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Mini stry of Railways update or better the ticket-selli ng system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migra nt workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can leann to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choos ing other means of tran sportati on to return back is also available.