2011高考作文上海卷

2011秋季高考上海卷写作样卷及评分
样卷一
Word came that the International Children Funds Association intended to aid middle school students financially in launching programs designed to help children in poor areas. And I am writing to you to apply for one, hoping that the fund as much as 2000 yuan can realize my wish to help these children.
As a normal student of MingQi Middle School, I, Li Ming, Has been long cherishing a dream that every single child in poverty can have free access to knowledge, thus devoting themselves to society to make it more harmonious in turn.
Consequently, if my application can be luckily agreed to, I will spare no efforts to build a library for those children as my program.
To be more specific, the fund will be divided into three parts. First of all, 800 yuan of it will be spent on buying books which may be mainly second-hand, in order to ensure the quantity. Also, another 400 yuan will be intended to carry out advertisements that call on the people with a sense of respon sibility in society to donate textbooks and so forth. What’s more, the remaining 800 yuan, according to my design, shall be given to those children, entitling them the right to buy their favorite books that are beyond what is mentioned above.
As you can see from what is talked about above, my plan may still leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to help those children is concerned, I genuinely hope you and your association can grant me the opportunity to turn it into reality.
样卷二
I am Li Ming. A student in Ming Qi Middle School, who is eager to apply for the project. I have a perfect blueprint for that and I am self-confident in making best use of the fund as well. My management is as followed.
Firstly, I will talk about my plan on the project. Resuming the fact that the children in poor area lack opportunities to study and know something new about the modern society, a series of lectures will be held in the poor area, I will select many excellent students and volunteers to address the lectures, which is beneficial not only to the children but ourselves as well. Further more, large quantities of books will be sent to the students in poor area which we believe can contribute to the children’s growth up.
Secondly, the fund of 2000 yuan can also be well used. We will rent a bus to reach the poor area and it may cost half of the fund and we will
release a report about our activity on newspapers to attract more volunteers. Furthermore, the rest of the fund will be spent on buying books.
I am sincerely willing to apply for this project and I believe it will be a remarkable event under my organization.
样卷三
My name is LiMing from MingQi School. I always watch the poor children study hard with bad condition in poor area on television. I was totally moved by that. So I am dying to apply for a product which can help them. The following is my plan.
First, I think what they need most is clothes and books. The clothes can keep them warm and the books will be their friends. So we need an activity about donation. We will appeal for the students to donate these things which they don’t need in our school. My schoolmates are all
warm-hearted and glad to help people. They will ready to do it so we will succeed at last.
Then, to expand the influence of the activity, we can set up a website. We can put some photos on the website to introduce the conditions of the children in poor areas to let people know more about them. Then they will be eager to play a role in the donation. Frankly speaking, I am good at computer so I have the confidence to do well.
As we all know, we can’t compl etely change their situation by it, but there is a famous saying which stands the test of the time ‘Rome is not built in a day’. If I wish, I will put all the money into holding the donation. I think with our joint effort they finally have got rid of the poverty.
Thank you for reading the letter!
样卷四
My name is Li Ming from Ming Qi Middle school. I am proficient on English and have a good command of singing and writing.
I plan to apply for a project of helping the children who come from the poor areas. I have several plans. To begin with, I will keep a close touch with them. You know. Finally, communication can put our heart together. Secondly, I will teach them some necessary skills, such as singing and dancing which can bring them happiness.
Last but not the least, I will spent money calling a experienced teacher. He can teach them a lot of knowledge which I can give them.
If I apply for this project successfully, I will use project money to call in a
teacher.
All in all, I can eager to get this chance. 样卷五
My name is Li Ming. I am a student from Ming Qi Middle School. I’d like to apply to you for the item. I will help the poor.
Since I am 18-year- old teenager, I have ability to afford for the item. My parents are going to help me too. I can use the knowledge I have learnt from the class to improve poor children’s life.
I have planned for the item. I will offer for their tuitions and other payments about studying and living.
The money of 2000 will be used up in two years for their tuition and other payment meaningful.
I hope that you would give me the chance. It will serve as a bridge between I and one poor child. I will do my best for him.。