高中英语书面表达课件

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• A lot of people travel . • Some people stay at home. • Some people visit friends or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
写作第三步： 加
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• We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.
• According to it, most people choose to travel during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And some other people visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
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travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
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写作第二步 列
• 用简单的句子或短 语列出文章要点。
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子列出文章的要点
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
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2、学好英语可以交更多的外国朋友。 3、学好英语可以分享不同的文化和技术。
English plays an important part in our lives. So we students must learn English well.
Be one of our subjects a. t school.
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
a nice head
How do people spend their vacation? We
made a survey and here is our survey report.
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that is to say, in other words; 7.表示顺序: begin with, first, second,next,later,
finally, in the end; 8.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, in fact, 9.表示结论: in a word,in short, generally
• I hope I can caocmheietvreue my dream.
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
书面表达
现在，越来越多的人开始认识到英语的重要性。作为 中学生的我们更应该充分认识英语的重要性，并学好英语。 请根据所给提示写一篇80字左右的英语短文，谈谈你的看 法。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：1、英语是我们所学学科之一。
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• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
• A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
书面表达写作技巧
审 列加 连 美
写作第一步 审
•认真审题，找出文 章要表达的中心。
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡o people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
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写作第五步： 美
• 选好词句，美化文章。 在有把握的情况下展 示自己的语言功底。
美化句子
The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We should learn English grammar. It’s important for us to learn English grammar. I find English is difficult to learn,but I never give it up. Though I have difficulty learning English, I believe in myself, as the saying goes: “Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. ”
First, English is one of our subjects at school. Second, with English we can make friends with foreigners. Third, we can share different kinds of culture and technology with others if we learn it well.
English plays an important part in our lives. So we students must learn English well. There are more than 3000 languages in the world. Of all these languages, English is the most widely used in the world. English is useful in many fields of life.
2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though,
after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
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Be the. most widely used.
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Learn English well .
Share different kinds of culture and technology
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书面表达写作 技巧指导
MAKE SENTENCES CORRECT
结构：三段十句法 根据文体可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构。
顺序：
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• SSaavvieng the environment is our duty.
There is going to hbaeve a meeting today.
In a word ,English is becoming more and more important. So we must learn it well.
• Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.
写作第四步： 连
• 恰当运用关联词句，使 得文章层次清晰，各个 部分衔接自然。
关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;