新目标初三英语写作课课件

Your opinions
(1.make good use of 2.face-to-face conversation, )
In my opinion, We should…We’d better… I think/believe…
Exchange your article with your partner , then underline the beautiful sentences and circle the mistakes.
(firstly, secondly, besides, what's more, finally… On the one hand, on the other hand… not only…but also)
Structures: In my opinion… I think/believe…
（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已 被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图 中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”写 一篇120词左右的短文。
Opinions
小组讨论发表你们的观点：
1.好好利用手机。（make good use of） We’d better make good use of smart-phones. We can use them at proper time and proper situations 2.面对面的交流胜过网上交流。 （ face-to-face conversation） Face-to-face conversation is better than chatting online.
Describe the picture • 1.eat with family
Danger influence the relationship with
eat with family
Some people use smart-phones. They eat with family.
Some people use smart-phones when they eat with family.
Describe the picture
描述图片
Danger
伤身体
be bad for
before going to bed
智能手机
She uses a smart-phone before going to bed. She is used to using a smart-phone before going to bed every day.
Some advice for you!
• 1.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短语。 • 2.用英语思维来表达。 • 3.语句要通顺，层次要清楚，上下连贯很重 要。
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱut down the phones, give more time to our families .
Homework
A组：继续改写本节课作文，使它更加完美。 B组：利用本节课所学方法，针对近段时间班上 有些同学“抄袭作业或不锻炼身体”的现象屡 见不鲜，写一篇分析原因、危害、解决办法和 自己的态度的英语作文 。
He is very young. He knows a lot. ( Good! )
He knows a lot although he is very young. ( Better! )
现象Phenomenon Disadvantages
(1.eat with family
2.get together with friends 3.be busy doing\ cross the street） 4.the relationship with 5.cause traffic accidents 6.be bad for/get in the way of…
小组讨论，完成以下任务
1.认真审题， 理清思路。
本篇文章应分为几段，每段都写什么？ 应选用哪种时态？第几人称？
2.列出提纲，初步成形。
需要用到哪些句式结构？
（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已 被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图 中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”写 一篇120词左右的短文。
要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当 发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：1. eat with family 2. cause traffic accidents 3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. _______________________________________________ _____________________________________________ ______________________________________ _______________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________
3.观点
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3.Being phubbers has some disadvantages.
Don’t eat fast. I love China. Don’t eat, fast!I love china(瓷器). I very like English.(×) 几点建议： I like English very much. (√) 1.注意标点和字母大小写. 2.注意句子的结构正确。 3.注意遣词造句，争取文采。
现 象
弊 端
观 点
选出每段主题句：
1.现象 1. In my opinion, we should learn to use
our smart-phones properly, and we should refuse to be phubbers
2.弊端 2. With the development of the Internet, smartphones are widely used among people.
Describe the picture
cause traffic accidents
Many people use smart-phones when they ride bikes\drive a car\walk. Many people use smart-phones when they cross the street.