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I feel very sad after reading the news . In my eyes, the woman was so impolite to get her justice with violence, which really does great harm to our society.
He is not only very lovely but also humorous.
He is not only very lovely ,but he also has a great sense of humor.
1.出生于法国，华籍美国人，40岁。 2.他活泼，具有幽默感。
Born in France and aged 40, Mr. Moon, an American Chinese, is very lovely and humorous.
6.博学，深受学生爱戴。 He is such a learned\an educated person
that we all admire him very much.
He is so knowledgeable that we all show respect for him.
A young disabled man was beaten for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby. The author thought that violent justice will slow down our speed of building up a harmonious society.
Born in France and aged 40, Mr. Moon, an American Chinese, is very lovely with a sense of humor.
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3.与其他老师相比，他更注重教学方法，总是想尽 各种办法让他的课生动有趣。并列谓语，非谓语 Compared with other teachers, Mr. Moon pays more attention to his ways of teaching and tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.
5.帮助学生学会分析和解决问题。 He helps students learn how to analyze and
solve problems. not only ….but also
4.鼓励学生思考，培养学生的自学能力. 5.帮助学生学会分析和解决问题。
He not only encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own, but he also helps students learn how to analyze and solve problems.
Compared with other teachers, Mr. Moon pays more attention to his ways of teaching, trying various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.
4.鼓励学生思考，培养学生的自学能力. He always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.
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1.出生于法国，华籍美国人，40岁。 2.他活泼，具有幽默感。 3.与其他老师相比，他更注重教学方法，
总是想尽各种办法让他的课生动有趣。 4.鼓励学生思考，培养学生的自学能力 5.帮助学生学会分析和解决问题。 6.博学，深受学生爱戴。
1.出生于法国，华籍美国人，40岁。 非谓语，同位语或定语从句
Born in France, Mr. Moon, an American Chinese, is 40 years old. Born in France, Mr. Moon, who is an American Chinese, is 40 years old. 2.他活泼，具有幽默感。用not only …but also… He is very lovely and /as well as humorous.
If I were one of the passengers on the bus, I would be the first person to offer the seat to the woman, trying my best to stop this accident from happening. But if I didn’t take a seat, I would stand out to tell the woman that the young man also need the seat because of his disability. I strongly believe that the woman would feel embarrassed and apologize to the young man after hearing this.
As far as I am concerned, when something goes wrong ,we should try our best to calm down and deal with the problems through other methods instead of violence. Only in this way can our society become more harmonious.