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五步法：
一审
五美 书面 二构
表达
四连
三列
Step by step
• 1. 审 • 2. 构 • 3. 列 • 4. 连 • 5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____ 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加 细节 列出要点
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活 使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想， 使文增色。
So in my opinion, I think we should watch TV less and we shouldn’t watch unhealthy TV programs. If everyone follow these, life will become more colorful and healthy.
审
美 书面 构
表达
连
列
一、审：
文体： 讨论型、议论性、观点看法型、意见建议型 时态： 一般现在时态 人称： 第一人称（we）
二、构：
仔细读题——健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健 康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢? ——这是抛出问题，是此文要探讨的中心 问题。 1.健康饮食。 2.早睡早起,不熬夜。 3.参加运动,强身健体。——具体健康 生活习惯的罗列。
of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally
speaking…
All of us want to be healthy. I think healthy habits are very important for us.
As we know, we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning and is good for our stomachs as well. We must also have the right kinds of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less meat, no junk food. Don't forget to wash your hands before meals.
Moreover, taking exercise is necessary for our health. Such as playing basketball, taking a walk after meals, swimming and so on. Exercise will keep us active and strong as well as stop us from getting a cold. Remember, life is moveit also does harm to us. If we put our hearts into TV, we may have no time to do our homework. Besides, it is bad for our eyes. Many students begin to wear glasses because of watching TV too long. Some TV programs are unhealthy and they are bad for us too.
For Example:
生活习惯与健康问题（热点）
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当 是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文。 信息提示： 健康饮食。 ②.早睡早起,不熬夜。 ③.参加运动,强身健体。 要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
On watching TV
Now watching TV has become a part of our life. It has advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, we can learn many things from it and it can take us anywhere we haven’t been before.
3.Take exercise.
展开：many kinds of sports; keep us active and strong; full of energy; stop from getting cold. Etc.
四、连。 Use information above to make sentences. 注意衔接过渡词：
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, besides, in addition（加之）, what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however, on the contrary（相反）,… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
谈谈你对此的看法，要求要点齐全，100词左右。
Sample My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. Now let me tell you something about my low-carbon life.
First, I try my best to go to school on foot every day. Second, I always remember to turn off the lights ,TVs and so on when I leave the room. Third, I take an active part in outdoor activities so that I will stay away from my computer and spend little time surfing the Internet. Besides, I don’t use the plastic bags. I am proud of my low-carbon life.
Nowadays, more and more people stay up late at night, it’s obviously bad for our health. If we can't get enough sleep, we may feel sleepy in class or even have a headache. We should(are supposed to) get up early as well.
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as，like… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point
以上两个部分是题目给的信息，是不是这两部分信息写出来就结束了呢？ 还需要进一步归纳，总结，点题，或者升华主题。
结构初现：抛出观点——展开论述——总结呼吁（点题、升华）
三、列：列出要点
1.Eating habits. 展开：eat more fruit and vegetables；less meat; drink a lot of water； eat on time; eat a lot; junk food; breakfast is important (necessary); wash hands before eating; stomach. Etc. 2.Other living habits. 展开：Stay up late；play computer games too late at night; over use phones; get up early; feel sleepy in class; hard to focus on study. etc.
• ２．背诵经典文段．在平时阅读训练及范例作文 中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵， 不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条 捷径．背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地 道．
• ３．加强练习．加强实际写作练习至关重要．我 们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅， 有无严重语法错误等．
Exercise after class:
中学生应该使用手机么？
赞成意见： 1.现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利 用好手机。如偶遇突发事故,可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习 之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机,也可以对 学习有帮助。
反对意见： 1.学校已提供了公共电话,因此手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且花费 较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短 信,将无法集中精力学习。
In a word, health is wealth. Only to have healthy bodies can we enjoy life’s pleasure and make our dreams come true.
临考如何提高写作能力：
• １．适当加强阅读量．读得越多，在潜移默化中， 你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快．
一审
五美 书面 二构
表达
四连
三列
Step by step
• 1. 审 • 2. 构 • 3. 列 • 4. 连 • 5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____ 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加 细节 列出要点
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活 使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想， 使文增色。
So in my opinion, I think we should watch TV less and we shouldn’t watch unhealthy TV programs. If everyone follow these, life will become more colorful and healthy.
审
美 书面 构
表达
连
列
一、审：
文体： 讨论型、议论性、观点看法型、意见建议型 时态： 一般现在时态 人称： 第一人称（we）
二、构：
仔细读题——健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健 康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢? ——这是抛出问题，是此文要探讨的中心 问题。 1.健康饮食。 2.早睡早起,不熬夜。 3.参加运动,强身健体。——具体健康 生活习惯的罗列。
of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally
speaking…
All of us want to be healthy. I think healthy habits are very important for us.
As we know, we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning and is good for our stomachs as well. We must also have the right kinds of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less meat, no junk food. Don't forget to wash your hands before meals.
Moreover, taking exercise is necessary for our health. Such as playing basketball, taking a walk after meals, swimming and so on. Exercise will keep us active and strong as well as stop us from getting a cold. Remember, life is moveit also does harm to us. If we put our hearts into TV, we may have no time to do our homework. Besides, it is bad for our eyes. Many students begin to wear glasses because of watching TV too long. Some TV programs are unhealthy and they are bad for us too.
For Example:
生活习惯与健康问题（热点）
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当 是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文。 信息提示： 健康饮食。 ②.早睡早起,不熬夜。 ③.参加运动,强身健体。 要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
On watching TV
Now watching TV has become a part of our life. It has advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, we can learn many things from it and it can take us anywhere we haven’t been before.
3.Take exercise.
展开：many kinds of sports; keep us active and strong; full of energy; stop from getting cold. Etc.
四、连。 Use information above to make sentences. 注意衔接过渡词：
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, besides, in addition（加之）, what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however, on the contrary（相反）,… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
谈谈你对此的看法，要求要点齐全，100词左右。
Sample My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. Now let me tell you something about my low-carbon life.
First, I try my best to go to school on foot every day. Second, I always remember to turn off the lights ,TVs and so on when I leave the room. Third, I take an active part in outdoor activities so that I will stay away from my computer and spend little time surfing the Internet. Besides, I don’t use the plastic bags. I am proud of my low-carbon life.
Nowadays, more and more people stay up late at night, it’s obviously bad for our health. If we can't get enough sleep, we may feel sleepy in class or even have a headache. We should(are supposed to) get up early as well.
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as，like… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point
以上两个部分是题目给的信息，是不是这两部分信息写出来就结束了呢？ 还需要进一步归纳，总结，点题，或者升华主题。
结构初现：抛出观点——展开论述——总结呼吁（点题、升华）
三、列：列出要点
1.Eating habits. 展开：eat more fruit and vegetables；less meat; drink a lot of water； eat on time; eat a lot; junk food; breakfast is important (necessary); wash hands before eating; stomach. Etc. 2.Other living habits. 展开：Stay up late；play computer games too late at night; over use phones; get up early; feel sleepy in class; hard to focus on study. etc.
• ２．背诵经典文段．在平时阅读训练及范例作文 中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵， 不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条 捷径．背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地 道．
• ３．加强练习．加强实际写作练习至关重要．我 们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅， 有无严重语法错误等．
Exercise after class:
中学生应该使用手机么？
赞成意见： 1.现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利 用好手机。如偶遇突发事故,可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习 之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机,也可以对 学习有帮助。
反对意见： 1.学校已提供了公共电话,因此手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且花费 较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短 信,将无法集中精力学习。
In a word, health is wealth. Only to have healthy bodies can we enjoy life’s pleasure and make our dreams come true.
临考如何提高写作能力：
• １．适当加强阅读量．读得越多，在潜移默化中， 你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快．