高中英语写作课教学课件
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a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高考英语概要写作讲解+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
并用自己的话简单地写出来。（一句话） ➢ 写下每个主要想法的关键支持点，不要涉及小细节。 ➢ 以符合逻辑的顺序组织主要和相关的支持点，实现连贯性的必要过渡。 ➢ 校对语法、拼写和标点错误等。
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
【课件】高中英语写作公开课(共30张PPT)
Tag to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition 表示比较：just like, in the same way,
Yours, Li Hua
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________ ___________, and__________________________.
welcome
Writing
Ⅰ. Discussion
高中教育英语必修第一册人教版《Writing——个人简介》教学课件
练·写作规范Байду номын сангаас
假定你是高中生李华，在班会上用英语介绍自己，请你按写作要点 写一篇发言稿：
1．你的姓名和性格； 2．你的爱好、兴趣等； 3．你的梦想。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。
第一步：认真审题 谋篇布局
第二步：斟词酌句 靓化表达 1．我是高中生李华，我对世界的一切感到好奇。(定语从句) I'm Li Hua, _a_se_n_io_r h_ig_h_st_ud_e_nt_, w_h_o_is_c_ur_io_us_a_bo_u_t ________ everything around the
_I_'m_s_o _go_od_a_t_En_g_lis_h_th_a_t _____ I have helped my teacher successfully organise
several English parties, _w_h_ic_h_h_av_e_le_ft_a _de_ep_i_m_pr_es_si_on_o_n_m_y_te_ac_h_er_a_nd___________ __cl_as_sm_a_te_s ___．
My goal is to become a designer in the future, __an_d_I'm__lo_ok_in_g_fo_rw_a_rd_t_o______ _d_es_ig_ni_ng_b_e_au_ti_fu_l c_am_p_u_se_s _fo_r s_tu_d_en_ts_________．
6．这就是我，一个勤奋且自信的学生。 Such is me, _a_h_ar_dw_o_rk_in_g_an_d_c_on_fi_de_n_t s_tu_de_n_t _______．
高中英语记叙文写作 教学课件(共40张PPT)
meeting to discuss it.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
人教高中英语必修3Unit5写作课件(共26张PPT)
famous for
population
climate
resources
Located in the North America, Canada is the second largest country in the world，larger than the United States. It covers a total area of 9.98 million square kilometers with a population of about 35 million in 2013. It is mainly a cold country in winter, where temperature falls below freezing point throughout most of the area with only the south western coast having a relatively mild climate. Its capital is Ottawa and Toronto is one of the largest cities. Much of the country is covered by forests, so this country is rich in forestry . Also well known for its fishing and wildlife, Canada attracts the tourists from all over the world to enjoy its charming scenery. 划出介绍地点时常用的词句
高分作文要求：（1）书写美观，卷面整洁； （2）信息内容完整，句子结构; （3）篇章结构连贯。
新教材2023年高中英语Unit2 SectionⅣWriting课件新人教版选择性必修第二册
[常用表达] 1．话题词汇 (1)consider考虑 (2)regret后悔；遗憾 (3)determine决定 (4)intend意图 (5)prepare准备 (6)I am convinc best尽某人最大努力 (8)you are supposed to你应当…… (9)inform sb. of sth.通知某人某事 (10)in my opinion依我看
⑧Why not do...为什么不…… ⑨I'd like to suggest that...我想要建议…… ⑩If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… ⑪As is known to all...众所周知…… ⑫What's more，try to...更重要的是，试一试…… ⑬Last but not least，you should...最后但同样重要的是，你应当……
[佳作展示] Dear Tom，
I'm glad to know you want to study abroad to experience a different
culture. Generally speaking，it is beneficial. On the one hand，you can walk out of the comfort zone，forcing
think is also my advantage.I'll appreciate it if you can consider me.
Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
精品展示 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom计划出国留学，写信询问你的意见， 请你给他写封回信。内容包括： ①写信目的； ②分析利弊； ③表达自己的观点。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
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homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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高中教育英语必修第一册人教版《4.5 Writing——概要写作(新闻报道)》教学课件
3．到了下午，一半城市中心已经消失了。 _B_y_th_e_af_te_rn_o_on____， half the heart of the city _h_ad_d_is_ap_p_ea_re_d____． 4．当夜晚降临的时候， 无家可归的人们看到了可怕的破坏。 _W__he_n_ni_gh_t_fe_ll____， homeless people saw the terrible destruction. 5．无家可归的人们逃离这座城市寻找避难之所。
积·满分素材 1．描写某事物的性质功能。即“对象＋性质功能＋利弊”： (In the passage )The writer introduces...to us, especially its..., from which we
know... 2．针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即“问题＋解决方法”：
第三步：合理过渡 完美卷面
One possible version： A great earthquake struck San Francisco on April 18th, 1906, leaving the city completely destroyed. It was at 5： 15 am that the quake began, and later fires started in South of Market Street and the city was left without means of communication or transportation. By the afternoon, half the heart of the city had disappeared. When night fell, seeing the awful destruction, homeless people escaped the city to find shelter. Although in disaster, people had shown their greatest kindness.
Unit3 Writing 课件-2022-2023学年高中英语人教版(2019)选择性必修第二册
第二步 遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1.消息传来说 2.在我看来 3.与……有联系 4.在于 5.消费；吃；喝 6.由……组成 7.大量的 8.促成；导致
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写作实践
假如你是李华，你的朋友王力目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已， 来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一 下你的饮食习惯。内容包括： 1.很少吃甜食和垃圾食品； 2.饮食中蔬菜、水果居多，有少量肉、蛋和奶制品； 3.一日三餐有规律。 注意：
1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.这使你沮丧。 _T_h_i_s__m_a_k_e_s__y_o_u__d_e_p_r_e_s_s_e_d_._______________________________
3.在我看来，你的不健康饮食与你的问题有密切联系。 _F_r_o_m__m_y__p_o_i_n_t__o_f__v_i_e_w__，__y_o_u_r__u_n_h_e_a_l_t_h_y__d_i_e_t__i_s__c_l_o_s_e_l_y__ _a_s_s_o_c_i_a_t_e_d__w_i_t_h__y_o_u_r__p_r_o_b_l_e_m_.___________________________
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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Express the same meaning using other expressions:
account for contribute to result from result in lie in lead to bring about
1. There are several reasons that account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
6. Several factors result in [lead to// bring about] the phenomenon mentioned above.
7. The phenomenon reflected in the picture largely results from several factors.
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows: 3 ） The reason for this is obvious ． 4） The reason for this is that．．． 5） We have good reason to believe that．．． 6) The answer to this problem involves many factors.
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❖8)It benefits us quite a lot． 9）It is beneficial to us．
10）It is of great benefit to us．
11) We can benefit greatly from it.
12) Walking and running are all healthy forms of exercise.
standard has been greatly improved,
making it possible for them to spare
enough money for something else．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but 活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our life．First of all，people’s living
4. Several factors contribute to the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
5. There are several factors contributing to the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
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❖Traveling can do us a lot of good,
which can be listed as follows. First of all, it helps us know the world better，
and it can broaden our horizons as well．In addition, it makes it possible
2. There are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
3. A number of factors account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
13) It helps a lot.//It will help.// It is of great help to us.
14) It has brought us great convenience
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练吧
谈谈旅游对我们青少年的好处。 （请尽量使用我们所练过的表达形 式）
and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages． 2）It does us a lot of good． 3) It's good for you to take regular exercise. 4) Her advice was a great help. 5）It will bring benefit to you. 6) It is to your advantage. 7) It is advantageous to your future career.
for us to make friends with people in different areas. To sum up，traveling is of great benefit to us．
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3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．