情景作文写作

Narrative writing 记事（1）

I. 佳作赏析(2011届海淀区一模情景作文)

假设你刚刚参加了一次“伦敦游学”活动，请根据以下五幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文汇报，在班内介绍你们游学的过程。

注意：

1．汇报的开头和结尾已经为你写好。 2．词数不少于60。

提示词语：Big Ben大本钟 London Eye伦敦眼摩天轮 Home-stay family住宿家庭

1. 叙事作文的要点和细节

请结合上面的优秀作文，完成下面的表格。

2.阅读以下范文，根据评分标准打出分数。

范文1

Good morning, everyone. It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour to Britain. The valuable experience, which was really unforgettable and meaningful, will be always treasured in my heart.

We arrived at the Heathrow airport. Our homestay family came to pick us up. I shook hands with the father. We went to the homestay family’s home and had a dinner together. The next day, we went to the Westminster College. We had a class together with the kid of the family. The professor introduced the history of the college and we listened carefully. On the third day, we visited the Big Ben and London Eye and took a lot of pictures. At last, we held a Farewell party and performed on the stage with our homestay family.

That’s all. Thank you!

范文2

Good morning, everyone. It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour to Britain. The valuable experience, which was really unforgettable and meaningful, will be always treasured in my heart.

When we arrived at the Heathrow airport, our homestay family was already waiting there to pick us up. We greeted each other warmly. Then the homestay family brought us to their home and we enjoyed a great dinner together. While having the dinner, we talked and laughed happily. The next day, we went to a class together with the kid of the family in Westminster College. We enjoyed the class very much as the professor was really humorous. On the third day, we went to visit the famous sights in London---Big Ben and London Eye. The tour guide told us some interesting stories about the famous building and we enjoyed ourselves very much. Also, we took plenty of pictures! On the last day of our trip we held a Farewell Party where some of us danced, and others singed. All of us enjoyed ourselves and felt it a pity that we had to say goodbye so soon.

That’s all. Thank you!

范文3

Good morning, everyone. It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour to Britain. The valuable experience, which was really unforgettable and meaningful, will be always treasured in my heart.

On arriving at the Heathrow Airport in London, we received a warm welcome from our home-stay family. We were deeply touched by the family’s thorough consideration and warm greeting. After we were picked up and brought home by our host family, we enjoyed a traditional meal of England that had been well prepared by the family. Despite the exhaustion from the long flight, we talked and chatted in high spirits during the meal, excited at all the culture shocks we were experiencing.

The following days were spent in Westminster College where we learnt its history from the introduction given by the professor. The course we had in the college aroused my interest, broadened my eyesight and greatly improved my spoken English. But the excitement was not finished yet. We spent quite a long time touring around the historic city. The Big Ben and London Eye were only two of the many great places we visited in London. All the way, we followed the tour guide, took pictures of the attractions and learnt their stories from our tour guide. On the last day of the trip we threw a Farewell Party, where we and all our home-stay family members gave terrific performances together. Some danced, and others chose singing to say goodbye. I couldn’t help but shed tears.

The days in London will always be a precious piece of memory in my mind and I hope I have passed my happiness to all of you!

That’s all. Thank you!