读后续写-样题.ppt

可能情节发展
1
thief
the young man
2
not thief
Money
3
thief
another man
4
not thief
5
thief
the young man
6
not thief
7
Other things
another man
8
thief not thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1） 碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后到警局 传来抓到劫犯消息
碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后到警局 传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在 Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
路遇一个路人帮人搬运装满钱的行李箱，而Arthur 错把路人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会
错把普通小偷当劫犯，最后帮助抓到该小偷 错把路人当劫犯（即结尾2） 碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人东西的小偷，最后到警 局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在 Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
语言 设定
高融洽度
tone (情节基调) language characteristics(语言特征) content (内容: plot development -- “W & H”)
Step 1. Read for basic information
1. tone (情节基调): ?funny
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词 语。
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些 错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短 文结构紧凑。
两个要弄明白的问题：
原文有什么用？
原文
素 材
续写要写什么？ 理解 模仿
续写文
情节 基调
核心 矛盾
潜素伏 信材息
故事 源自文库架
start my car.”
Conversation---direct speech(直接引语)
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics: vivid (生动)
Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. ....
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. ...
Story narration (故事旁白)
...“It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said. “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t
Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. ...
Step 1. Read for basic information
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Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
新高考考试说明
读后续写:
提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据 材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一 篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语 衔接合理。
第五档 (21-25)
inside the
suitcase?
Step 3. Predict possible plot development
In a group predict how the story will develop:
money
other things
(tone: funny→ a happy ending) The underlined words:
made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.
the bank robbery.
How: How will the story develop?
Step 2. Read for plot development clues
(情节发展线索)
Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:
Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man
shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”
Para2:
The taxi stopped in front o_f_Wt_h_he_aP_t oislice Station
and Arthur...
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. ...
a happy ending
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics: (s语im言ple特(简征单) ): ?
Park Avenue, the young man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, robbery, the shouts, people, the bank thief
箱子里 所属人
Young man身 份