图画和图表作文

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As is vividly depicted in the drawing, in the middle of the cartoon stands a hot pot, containing many Chinese cultural symbols, such as Beijing operas, Daoism, and some foreign cultural symbols, etc. How impressive the drawing is in describing the common phenomenon that Chinese culture is becoming increasingly integrated into the world. The drawer’s intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking.
It holds to be apparent that the cartoon is indicative of a pervasive phenomenon with regard to culture. When it comes to culture, its great impacts and benefits can’t be too estimated. As China opens to the outside world, our traditional culture is embracing the foreign culture, thus making our Chinese culture more diversified, colorful and internationalized just like a melting pot. What the picture conveys goes far beyond this. The fact that people from different countries are attracted to each other, indicating that to some extent different cultures can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared internationally. In other words, Chinese unique culture can become international through worldwide economic and cultural exchanges. Since the trend of globalization become irresistible, cultural integration can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship among different countries.
In my personal sense, Chinese national culture as priceless spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished. Meanwhile, there are good reasons to embrace foreign cultures on the ground that those ideas from the other cultures can provide a different perspective for us to observe the world in the long run. However, confronted with a different culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and to resist its dark side. Only in this way can we promote cultural integration and development positively, thus making our motherland dimensional, colorful and vigorous.
Part B: Directions: Write an essay of
160-200words on the following
drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and
then,
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER
SHEET 2.
网络的“近”与“远”
大作文例文
The above picture vividly depicts a huge spider web which is a symbol of Internet. It is universally acknowledged that Internet, an entirely new way of communication,
is becoming so popular nowadays that it’s difficult to imagine modern life without it. Undoubtedly, it exerts a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s li ving and thinking.
Definitely, the symbolic meaning of the picture subtly conveyed should be taken into deep consideration. To begin with, with the Internet, it is convenient and fast for people to get a variety of information and what they need to do is just to press key buttons. What’s more, the great utility of the Internet allow people within a company, across a nation or even around the world to work together. Finally, we can do almost everything via Internet in a long run. Specifically, we can conduct E-business, advertise our products, book an air ticket, buy and sell stocks, even hunt a new job through clicking the mouse. Nevertheless, it is a two-edged sword as well and has its own negative effects. To illustrate, a great many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle. Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work. Also, some people tend to spend hours on Internet for the sake of relaxation and develop addictions. As a result, the public have an emotional distance sometimes and thus few communications in reality due to Internet addiction without self-restriction.
Considering all these, it is advisable that we take a rational attitude towards the issue and take prompt initiatives to counterbalance the negative effects concerned. The media, for instance, needs to promote the awareness of healthy lifestyle among the so called netizens. Meanwhile, those Internet addicts are advised to get actively involved in real-world communication. Just as what the cartoon connotes, we may be connected by the web, but we are not supposed to be confined within it.
一、图画式作文的写作要点
1. 图画式作文的写作步骤
2. 图画式作文的写作要点
(1)技巧篇
①不要总是使用简单句
②不要使用生僻的单词
③使用连接词
④记住一些固定句型
⑤注意通篇文章的层次性
⑥字数一定要够
(2)攻略篇
①详细查看图画
②如果图画以系列形式(既两幅以上)出现
③合理而丰富的联想
④文字提示
⑤草拟提纲
⑥系统且突出地展开段落
⑦检查与修改
二、图画式作文常用的表达方式
1. 开头段
✩This cartoon vividly depicts …
✩This picture shows us a serious social phenomenon that …
✩As is vividly revealed in the drawing, …
✩What is conveyed in the drawing is most thought-provoking and sounds an alarm for everyone.
✩What is conveyed in the drawing is a common social phenomenon and worth discussing among the general public.
✩The phenomenon of …conveyed in the drawing is widespread and should arouse the concern of our society.
✩As is vividly revealed in the cartoon, a hen is making promises. (’98)
✩The drawings vividly illustrate the changes of numbers of fishes and fishing-boats in the past 100 years. (2000)
✩It is vividly described in the picture that a lamp is lightening in the darkness. (2001)
✩The photo vividly shows a lovely American girl in traditional Chinese custome with a sweet smile on her face. (2002)
✩This set of drawings vividly reflects the destiny of a delicate flower under different circumstances. (2003)
✩It is vividly illustrated in the cartoon that a boy is running on the playground. (2004)
✩As is vividly depicted in the drawing, four young people are playing a “football match”of caring their helpless father on the playground.
(2005)
✩The pictures vividly reveal thet Beckham is extremely popular in China at present. (2006)
✩We are informed that “the flower growing in a greenhouse cannot withstand the test of a storm”. (2003)
✩The caption reads, “the finishing line is also the starting point”. (2004)
2. 中间段
✩Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the significance/importance of …
✩The intended meaning of the drawing can be interpreted in terms of …
✩The implied meaning of the picture can be interpreted in terms of …
✩The intended meaning of the drawing above is worth noticing and can be interpreted with respect to …
✩The main purpose of the painter can be analyzed in the following two aspects.
✩The symbolic meaning of the pictures is to show us that importance should be attached to the widespread meaningless promises made by
people from all works of life. (1998)
✩The pictures illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how
dark the world around us becomes. (2001)
✩The fact that people from different countries are attracted to Chinese culture indicates that to some extent a culture can be accepted, respected,
appreciated and shared internationally. (2002)
✩Undoubtedly, the drawings have symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily life. (2003)
✩The cartoon conveys the meaning that life is like the process of running in which one should make constant efforts and never stop making
progress. (2004)
✩The purpose of the drawing is to show us that utmost importance should be attached to the mistreatment of senior citizens. (2005)
✩The pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the teenagers nowadays. (2006)
3. 结尾段
✩In my view, counter-measures/ effective measures should be taken so as to …
✩In my view, some necessary measures should immediately be taken to …
✩In sum, we should be aware that …
✩As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take effective actions.
✩Therefore, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.
✩From the analysis made above, we may come to the conclusion that people’s living standards have been constantly improved.
✩On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be
sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with
troubles and problems. (2003)
✩To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who shun the responsibility of caring their parents. In
addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that respecting
the old has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture. (2005) ✩Only in these ways can we … (e.g. make the society a better place to live in.)
三、图画式作文模板
模板一
模板二
The cartoon describes a very common phenomenon in our society that
__________. Basically, what we see from the cartoon is that ____________. We are informed that “_______”.
Why does this phenomenon appear/arise? I assume there are several factors. The first is that ___________. Another major reason is that ______________. Current study shows us another primary cause is ________________. In general, ________.
To solve the problem, it is essential for us to take steps to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the cartoon. Above all, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who ____________. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of people that ____________ is of greatest significance to us.
模板三
Through the picture the author tries to warn us of the serious problem of
____________. In the picture, there is/ are _____________-. The caption reads “_____________”.
It seems that the cartoonist is sending a message about the significance of
__________- and the need of everyone to fight against the danger of this issue. In fact, what he is saying is if we do not exert efforts to it, ______________. If we let this situation go as it is, our ________ will suffer a great destruction.
To improve this situation, the best way is to __________. First and foremost, we should always be ready to _________. More importantly, _____________. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place to live in.
模板四
The cartoon ridicules / criticizes some people who often __________. The picture reveals a serious problem that ____________. At the lower part of the drawing, there are several Chinese characters which read “____________”.
Undoubtedly, the cartoon conveys the meaning that __________. Owing to
___________, __________. A good case in point is _______.
Hence, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these
thought-provoking drawings. On the one hand, we should _____________. Ont eh other hand, we should __________.
四、图表式作文的写法
(1)图表作文的写作要点
✩仔细阅读题目的提示和要求,以及图表的标题,准确理解题意。

✩认真观察图表,准确描述图表,抓住图表中最主要的数据、变化等,发掘出图表所传递出的深层次的信息。

✩写作时,所用素材既要紧扣图表信息,又要联系实际,以突出和深化主题思想。

✩图表作文的结构一般可以分为三部分:第一部分简要描述图表,指出图表所反映的问题;第二部分联系实际对图标所反映的问题进行说明、分
析、归纳、论述。

第三部分得出结论或作出评论,有时提出解决问题的
Now our country is troubled with aging of population. As is shown in the table, the number of the population aged 60 and above in 1990 is 97.19 million, making up 8.8 percent of total population. It estimated that the number will rise to 230 million in 2020, and approach its peak to 410 million, which accounts for
27.4 percent of the total. That means one out of every four people will be elderly.
As for the issue of aging, its situation has been increasingly severe in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about. Firstly, aging will hinder the development of our economy because there will be a
relative decline in working force with more people approach their old age.
Consequently, the productivity of the whole society is affected to some extent.
Secondly, the national expenditure on the elderly would always be on the rise, for more old people means more retirement pension, more medical expenses and so on. Thirdly, the children of the elderly would be heavily burdened. Besides working, they have to take care of their parents as well as their children. As the majority of them are only-child, a couple will have to support four parents, which would tire them out.
The rapidity of the population’s aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of counter measures. No doubt the key point is to build a solid economic foundation and, meanwhile, to improve social security, assurance and welfare system. Besides, family care and community services should be encouraged to guarantee that the elderly can enjoy their remaining years in happiness. In addition, we can encourage people to retire later or offer some part-time jobs for senior citizens so that they can not only make more contributions to the society but also lead an active life and remain young at heart. What’s more, in the long run, to thoroughly solve the problem, the policy of family planning (birth control) should be adhered to and late marriage and late birth should be encouraged.
✩According to /As is shown in the Table /Figure/Chart...
✩It has increased by three times as compared with that of ...
✩It can be seen from the chart/diagram/table/graph/figures/statistics that...
✩From the table/figures/data/results/information above, it can/may be seen/concluded/shown/estimated/calculated/inferred that...
✩It accounts for 30% of the total population.
✩The table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... ✩As can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of...。

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