高考英语书面表达阅卷情况(精)
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it is widely shared that … it is universally acknowledged that …
3. in my opinion
for my part ， from my own perspective
4. more and more
an increasing number of a growing number of
四．文章思想性的体现 “万能模板”现象：新八股文
08年上海卷书面表达：
Guided Writing
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing
competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看
法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容： •你是否会参加比赛 •你做出该决定的具体理由
ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu
08年广东卷书面表达：
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的
“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写 一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”， 内容要点包括： 1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点； 2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活， 内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受；(2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打 算如何适应。
every now and then; …get the itch to …; …feel the urge to… ; …stretch itself lazily along…; …give a glimpse of; … a walk through … is a history lesson; Few visitors leave …feeling disappointed. …is a paradise for …; a feast for the eye; a wide variety of
四．文章思想性的体现
“万能模板”现象：新八股文
建议 IV：
有思路，有活路
补充：
1. 避免低级错误，尤其写好首尾段；
2. 对高考最后一段时间书面表达辅导的 认识;
高考29分高分作文欣赏 There are basically two ways to get work done. One way is working individually and the other is working in a team. Of course, they each have their own characteristics. The former, working individually, can allow people to do things in whatever ways they like. Besides, people can also solve problems by themselves. The latter, however, is quite different.
小结： 1. 整洁的卷面； -----气派门面 2. 丰富的词汇； -----高档建材
3. 流畅的结构； ----- 合理布局 4. 独到的见解； ----- 金玉其内
四. 文章的思想性；
一. 作文的卷面；
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点 建议 I：
1. 高三各次考试中打卷面分；
2.大张旗鼓地组织学生练书法； 3. 提供标准的考试用纸;
二. 文中所采用的语言材料的层次；
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
1. good perfect. excellent. outstanding promising favorable … 2. think hold the view that …
26分作文鉴赏 There are basically two ways to get work done. Namely, working individually and working in a team. Each of them has its own advantages. The former one, that is，working individually, is a very way to develop one’s DIY ability. People make arrangement and solve problems by themselves, which will contribute to the
5. remember
keep in mind
6.for example to name only a few 7. helpful
beneficial, rewarding
建议 II：
1. 充分利用课文；
2. 鼓励同学平时重视优美语句 的收集和欣赏；
3. 从日常讲解作文做起；
Destination
It requires team spirit. As is known to all, two heads are better than one. Many people can talk over problems together. What’s more, people can learn from each other in team work. Personally, I prefer to combine them together. Because working individually can help me build up my ability to stand on my own feet while working in a team gives me a chance to acquire experience from others. (129 words. )
三. 行文的流畅度
上下贯通、一气呵成
建议 III：
1. 突出文章段落中的主题句； 2. 组织学生归纳各种功能的连词， 组建“连词库”
Some examples：
意义上承上启下的连词： What’s more, moreover, at the same time, then, besides, in addition, furthermore 意义转折的连词： however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, in other words, by the way …
高考英语书面表达阅卷情况 分析及启示
本次高考阅卷特点： 1.阅卷的速度快； 2. 阅卷时间长； 3.阅卷老师的心理状态： 给分中庸
4. 高考卷其余部分较浅；
平均分：
峰值：
约13分
17~18分
最吃亏学生群： 中等左右学生
书面表达是提高平均分 最大的潜力股
影响给分的四大因素：
一. 作文的卷面； 二. 文中所采用的语言材料的层次； 三. 行文的流畅度；
forming of personality of independence. The latter shows exactly the immense power of cooperation. People discuss together and learn from each other. And any problems can be overcome more effectively and efficiently. In terms of me, I prefer the latter one. As an old saying goes, three minds make a giant. Also it is easy to imagine that one person might be willing in mind, but weak in muscle. So to work in a team is a wiser preference. （132 words）
3. in my opinion
for my part ， from my own perspective
4. more and more
an increasing number of a growing number of
四．文章思想性的体现 “万能模板”现象：新八股文
08年上海卷书面表达：
Guided Writing
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing
competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看
法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容： •你是否会参加比赛 •你做出该决定的具体理由
ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu
08年广东卷书面表达：
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的
“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写 一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”， 内容要点包括： 1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点； 2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活， 内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受；(2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打 算如何适应。
every now and then; …get the itch to …; …feel the urge to… ; …stretch itself lazily along…; …give a glimpse of; … a walk through … is a history lesson; Few visitors leave …feeling disappointed. …is a paradise for …; a feast for the eye; a wide variety of
四．文章思想性的体现
“万能模板”现象：新八股文
建议 IV：
有思路，有活路
补充：
1. 避免低级错误，尤其写好首尾段；
2. 对高考最后一段时间书面表达辅导的 认识;
高考29分高分作文欣赏 There are basically two ways to get work done. One way is working individually and the other is working in a team. Of course, they each have their own characteristics. The former, working individually, can allow people to do things in whatever ways they like. Besides, people can also solve problems by themselves. The latter, however, is quite different.
小结： 1. 整洁的卷面； -----气派门面 2. 丰富的词汇； -----高档建材
3. 流畅的结构； ----- 合理布局 4. 独到的见解； ----- 金玉其内
四. 文章的思想性；
一. 作文的卷面；
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点 建议 I：
1. 高三各次考试中打卷面分；
2.大张旗鼓地组织学生练书法； 3. 提供标准的考试用纸;
二. 文中所采用的语言材料的层次；
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
1. good perfect. excellent. outstanding promising favorable … 2. think hold the view that …
26分作文鉴赏 There are basically two ways to get work done. Namely, working individually and working in a team. Each of them has its own advantages. The former one, that is，working individually, is a very way to develop one’s DIY ability. People make arrangement and solve problems by themselves, which will contribute to the
5. remember
keep in mind
6.for example to name only a few 7. helpful
beneficial, rewarding
建议 II：
1. 充分利用课文；
2. 鼓励同学平时重视优美语句 的收集和欣赏；
3. 从日常讲解作文做起；
Destination
It requires team spirit. As is known to all, two heads are better than one. Many people can talk over problems together. What’s more, people can learn from each other in team work. Personally, I prefer to combine them together. Because working individually can help me build up my ability to stand on my own feet while working in a team gives me a chance to acquire experience from others. (129 words. )
三. 行文的流畅度
上下贯通、一气呵成
建议 III：
1. 突出文章段落中的主题句； 2. 组织学生归纳各种功能的连词， 组建“连词库”
Some examples：
意义上承上启下的连词： What’s more, moreover, at the same time, then, besides, in addition, furthermore 意义转折的连词： however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, in other words, by the way …
高考英语书面表达阅卷情况 分析及启示
本次高考阅卷特点： 1.阅卷的速度快； 2. 阅卷时间长； 3.阅卷老师的心理状态： 给分中庸
4. 高考卷其余部分较浅；
平均分：
峰值：
约13分
17~18分
最吃亏学生群： 中等左右学生
书面表达是提高平均分 最大的潜力股
影响给分的四大因素：
一. 作文的卷面； 二. 文中所采用的语言材料的层次； 三. 行文的流畅度；
forming of personality of independence. The latter shows exactly the immense power of cooperation. People discuss together and learn from each other. And any problems can be overcome more effectively and efficiently. In terms of me, I prefer the latter one. As an old saying goes, three minds make a giant. Also it is easy to imagine that one person might be willing in mind, but weak in muscle. So to work in a team is a wiser preference. （132 words）