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短文改错口诀
动词形，名词数， 注意是形和副． 非谓动词细辨别， 习惯用法要记住。
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误需关注。 删加各次心有数， 改完一定要读读。
17
Passage 2 2009 海南卷
As is well know, when senior students graduate from school, most of their textbooks are throwing away, which are still in good condition. What a waste of it! I quite agree to the suggestion we should recycle these textbooks. For one thing, recycling textbooks can save a lot of nature materials, which are used to making textbooks. For another, senior students may have plenty of useful notes in the pages.They are very much helpful to those textbooks users.what’s most, the cost of the books will unload some burden of the families of the students.Actually in Australia and any other countries, recycling textbooks are popular and it gives us a good example.
make
Passage 2
For another, senior students may have plenty of useful
notes in the pages.They are very much helpful to those on textbooks users.What’s most, the cost of the books more will unload some burden of the families of the students. Actually in Australia and any other countries, recycling some textbooks are popular and it gives us a good example. is
that
should recycle these textbooks. For one thing, recycling textbooks can save a lot of nature materials, which are used to making textbooks.
natural
19
1.I met student yesterday. ^ a 2.He is looking^ a missing book. for 3.He wants have a rest. ^ to 4. He praised by the teacher several times. ^ was 5.I’m looking forward your letter. ^ to
2009年宁· 海 卷 2008年宁· 海 卷 2007年宁· 海
2
1
1
1
7
8
1
1
1
1
8
5
8
三.近三年高考短文改错考点分布表
考查点 时态 非谓 一 语态 语动 致 试卷 词
副词 名 形容 词 词
代 词 1
2 2
介 词 3
2 3
冠 词 1
1 1
连 词 1
2 1
2009 年浙江 2009 年辽宁 2009 宁· 海 2008 宁· 海 2007 宁· 海
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Practice makes perfect. [谚] 熟能生巧
In a small town where there lived two brothers whom were very lazy. One day, before the mother went out to an evening party, she asked about her two sons give the house a good cleaning. But before the mother left the room, the elder brother said to his younger brother, “Tom, when mother came back, you will say I have been ill and I can get out of bed.” the younger brothers agreed. “OK,and when mother turns back you will say I have gone to call for a doctor for me.”
9
总
二、缺词
结
1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。 2.不及物动词是否缺介词。 3.不定式是否漏了to. 4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be. 5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。
10
Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.
5、He married with a beautiful girl.
7
一、多词
总 结
1、时间状语前是否多了介词。 2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。 3、固定搭配中是否多了词。 4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。 5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。
8
Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.
1
1 1
1
0 0
0
0 0
1
1 1
1
1 1
0
2
1
1
2
1
1
1
0
1
2
1
1
2
1
0
2
1
6
Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.
1、We are going to have a meeting on next week. 2、He is more taller than me. 3、He is fond of like English. 4、The boss made workers to work 10 hours a day.
The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, gratefully thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the
road.This man might need the umbrella himself, and he
1. It is time of me to walk my dog. for 2.She liked it very much and reads it to the class. read 3. Passed the book store, he stopped to buy a book. Passing 4. He as well as his sister are a League member. is 5.My pronunciation was terribly. terrible 6.I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. why 7.Some students may also save up for our college or future use . their 8. She is smiling at me but nodding at me . 11 and
总
三、错词
1.介词是否误用。
结
2. 动词的时态、语态是否误用。 3.非谓语动词是否误用。 4.主谓是否一致。 5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。 6.从句中关联词是否误用。
7.代词是否误用。 8.连词是否误用。
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做题要求
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你 修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下 面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修 改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限 一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计 13 分。
us a umbrella because he found we were wet an through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in
that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. was
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Passage 1：
18
Passage
known
2
As is well know, when senior students graduate from school,
most of their textbooks are throwing away, which are still in good thrown
condition. What a waste of it! I quite agree to the suggestion we ^
德才高Baidu Nhomakorabea中学 王 刚
1
How to do Proof-reading
2
Our tasks:
Task 1 : the information and demand in outline
Task 2 : the skills of doing proof- reading
Task 3 : the exercise and secrete
20
短文改错应注意的问题
㈠.四不改。即： ①标点符号不改。 ②大小写不改。 ③词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来 改)。 ④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在 句中不可能用错。
㈡.规范做题方法。
①要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。不要 用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。 ②换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。
but preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us someone\somebody that it was possible give without expect anything in return ^ to expecting
3
高考短文改错专题
一.<考纲>对短文改错的要求
高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发 现,纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力,以及考 察考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力.
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二. 近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计
设题方式
多一词 (\)
试卷 2009年浙江卷 1
缺一词(∧) 错一词(__)
1 8
2009年辽宁卷
Passage 1：2009年浙江卷
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
14
Passage 1：
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides
friends beside us. The driver put the window down and offered
短文改错口诀
动词形，名词数， 注意是形和副． 非谓动词细辨别， 习惯用法要记住。
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误需关注。 删加各次心有数， 改完一定要读读。
17
Passage 2 2009 海南卷
As is well know, when senior students graduate from school, most of their textbooks are throwing away, which are still in good condition. What a waste of it! I quite agree to the suggestion we should recycle these textbooks. For one thing, recycling textbooks can save a lot of nature materials, which are used to making textbooks. For another, senior students may have plenty of useful notes in the pages.They are very much helpful to those textbooks users.what’s most, the cost of the books will unload some burden of the families of the students.Actually in Australia and any other countries, recycling textbooks are popular and it gives us a good example.
make
Passage 2
For another, senior students may have plenty of useful
notes in the pages.They are very much helpful to those on textbooks users.What’s most, the cost of the books more will unload some burden of the families of the students. Actually in Australia and any other countries, recycling some textbooks are popular and it gives us a good example. is
that
should recycle these textbooks. For one thing, recycling textbooks can save a lot of nature materials, which are used to making textbooks.
natural
19
1.I met student yesterday. ^ a 2.He is looking^ a missing book. for 3.He wants have a rest. ^ to 4. He praised by the teacher several times. ^ was 5.I’m looking forward your letter. ^ to
2009年宁· 海 卷 2008年宁· 海 卷 2007年宁· 海
2
1
1
1
7
8
1
1
1
1
8
5
8
三.近三年高考短文改错考点分布表
考查点 时态 非谓 一 语态 语动 致 试卷 词
副词 名 形容 词 词
代 词 1
2 2
介 词 3
2 3
冠 词 1
1 1
连 词 1
2 1
2009 年浙江 2009 年辽宁 2009 宁· 海 2008 宁· 海 2007 宁· 海
21
Practice makes perfect. [谚] 熟能生巧
In a small town where there lived two brothers whom were very lazy. One day, before the mother went out to an evening party, she asked about her two sons give the house a good cleaning. But before the mother left the room, the elder brother said to his younger brother, “Tom, when mother came back, you will say I have been ill and I can get out of bed.” the younger brothers agreed. “OK,and when mother turns back you will say I have gone to call for a doctor for me.”
9
总
二、缺词
结
1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。 2.不及物动词是否缺介词。 3.不定式是否漏了to. 4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be. 5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。
10
Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.
5、He married with a beautiful girl.
7
一、多词
总 结
1、时间状语前是否多了介词。 2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。 3、固定搭配中是否多了词。 4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。 5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。
8
Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.
1
1 1
1
0 0
0
0 0
1
1 1
1
1 1
0
2
1
1
2
1
1
1
0
1
2
1
1
2
1
0
2
1
6
Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.
1、We are going to have a meeting on next week. 2、He is more taller than me. 3、He is fond of like English. 4、The boss made workers to work 10 hours a day.
The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, gratefully thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the
road.This man might need the umbrella himself, and he
1. It is time of me to walk my dog. for 2.She liked it very much and reads it to the class. read 3. Passed the book store, he stopped to buy a book. Passing 4. He as well as his sister are a League member. is 5.My pronunciation was terribly. terrible 6.I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. why 7.Some students may also save up for our college or future use . their 8. She is smiling at me but nodding at me . 11 and
总
三、错词
1.介词是否误用。
结
2. 动词的时态、语态是否误用。 3.非谓语动词是否误用。 4.主谓是否一致。 5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。 6.从句中关联词是否误用。
7.代词是否误用。 8.连词是否误用。
12
做题要求
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你 修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下 面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修 改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限 一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计 13 分。
us a umbrella because he found we were wet an through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in
that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. was
15
Passage 1：
18
Passage
known
2
As is well know, when senior students graduate from school,
most of their textbooks are throwing away, which are still in good thrown
condition. What a waste of it! I quite agree to the suggestion we ^
德才高Baidu Nhomakorabea中学 王 刚
1
How to do Proof-reading
2
Our tasks:
Task 1 : the information and demand in outline
Task 2 : the skills of doing proof- reading
Task 3 : the exercise and secrete
20
短文改错应注意的问题
㈠.四不改。即： ①标点符号不改。 ②大小写不改。 ③词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来 改)。 ④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在 句中不可能用错。
㈡.规范做题方法。
①要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。不要 用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。 ②换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。
but preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us someone\somebody that it was possible give without expect anything in return ^ to expecting
3
高考短文改错专题
一.<考纲>对短文改错的要求
高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发 现,纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力,以及考 察考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力.
4
二. 近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计
设题方式
多一词 (\)
试卷 2009年浙江卷 1
缺一词(∧) 错一词(__)
1 8
2009年辽宁卷
Passage 1：2009年浙江卷
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
14
Passage 1：
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides
friends beside us. The driver put the window down and offered