基础写作-人物介绍

•1． Birthday and birth place
•2． Family background
•3． Education background
•4． Big events in his or her life
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(in order of time)
•5． EvaluatiΒιβλιοθήκη Baidun
二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：
competition. ⑤ When I am free, I enjoy listening to
popular music and collecting stamps, and my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
特长
英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一 名）
业余爱好
游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐
【实例剖析：】
【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙 文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定 本文人称为第一人称
要点：李华的出生年月 及地点；学历；所学主 要课程；特长；获奖情 况；业余爱好。
• Born of a poor clerk’s family, Charles Dickens had little schooling.
3. Education background
be admitted to …college graduate from…department of …university when at college, he majored in… receive a doctor’s degree go abroad for further studies
1. Birthday and birth place: ……was/ were born in …on…
她与1867年12月7日出生与波兰。 eg. She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.
2. Family background ……was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that… his/ her father was very strict with him… the son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 during his/ her childhood spend his childhood in… live a happy/ hard life
【基础写作实例剖析：】
你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英 语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍 自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
姓名
李华
出生年月
1977年2月
出生地
辽宁大连
学历
1984——1990 光明小学 1990——1996 大连市第六中学
所学主要课程 语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑
6. 描写人物外貌和性格特征
good-looking funny-looking ugly-looking
ordinary-looking white-haired
warm-hearted kind-hearted absent-minded
bad-tempered near-sighted far-sighted
4. Big events in one’s life
be interested in… /be fond of… work hard at… serve as… devote his lifetime/himself to… concentrate himself to… do research about/ into… make up one’s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance be strict in sth.
sponsor education, culture, sports, and public
welfare in Mainland. ⑤ He has made great contributions to
make rapid progress in … set a new world record of … equal the world record win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal be selected to/ become a member of… study hard train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etc
• 请根据表格中所提供的信息， 写一篇介 绍中国第一位航天英雄杨利伟的短文。
姓名
飞行 情况
杨利 出生 1965 出生 辽宁省 伟 时间 年 地
1. 1987年加入中国空军
2. 经过5年时间的训练，他于2003年10月 15日9时乘坐神州5号飞船进入太空， 环绕地球飞行14圈，在太空中度过了 约21小时，于次日成功返回地面。
【实例剖析：】
短语及句型： be born in, after that, be good at/ do well in, graduate, the main subjects, win first prize, enjoy doing
【One possible version:】
① My name is Li Hua. ② I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in February 1977. ③ I started
5.Evaluation
one of the best/ most important … set a good example for… a model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of… be honored as (an excellent athlete) His hard work brought him great success. He is the pride of China. His heroic story spread all over the city.
have a …way of doing sth try one’s best to do sth. encourage sb to do fight for, give up one’s life for sb/sth win a prize/the first prize in …competition receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for… be good at… do well in… be crazy about… enjoy …
1). 属于记叙文体裁
2). 基本类型：记人，叙事，写景
3). 常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友， 老师，父母，名人等等
4). 记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙
5). 注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人， 不拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态。 6). 常见段落结构：主题句－发展句－结论句
•一、人物简介的写作步骤：
architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a
famous person at home and abroad. ④ Since the beginning of the reform and open
policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to
• 亚伯拉罕.林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子， 与1809年2月12日出生与Kentucky。
• eg. Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.
• 查理.狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育。
范例：请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。
出生
个人经 历
1923年5月，香港。
1、7岁丧父，家境贫困; 2、1955年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等， 成为国内外知名人士; 3、改革开放 (the reform and open policy) 以来，先后捐资支持教育、文化、体育、 和福利事业款项达100多亿港元。
studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer, in which English and computer are my favourite, furthermore, last year I won first prize in the school computer
影 响 成为“感动中国”的人物。
［写作要求］ 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
要点分析：
1.名人介绍， 2.采用第三人称
将提供的信息整合 3.以一般过去时态为主。
One possible version: ① In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong. ② At the age of ten, his father died. ③ After 1955, he was engaged in
a strong will tall
short pretty
naughty smart wise bright diligent
lazy healthy humorous charming
（迷人的） attractive talkative
confidence independent patience
5.Evaluation
make great contributions to… Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at …Championships （锦标赛） remember sb forever A new chapter of history has been turned Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader
3. 在太空中他记录下了他看到的一切， 并向电视机前的观众展示了中国国旗 和联合国的旗帜。
【实例剖析：】
【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写 人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文
人称: 根据内容可确定本文人称为第 人称 要点： 时态：
【实例剖析：】
短语及句型： be born in, Join the Chinese Air Force be sent into space Shenzhou V spacecraft Land safely China’s national flag United Nations’ flag
school in 1984 when I was seven and I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990, after that I went to No. 6 Middle School of Dalian and
graduated this summer. ④ The main subjects I