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雅思写作讲义2

雅思写作讲义2

我的授课简要内容:第一节:介绍雅思写作,结合雅思四大评分标准,第六代和剑桥考官范文讲解线图和饼图第二节:结合第六代和剑桥考官范文讲解柱状图和表格第三节:结合剑桥考官范文、第六代及2010年真题介绍流程图、地图等第四节:结合雅思四大评分标准、第六代、剑桥考官的范文及2006-2010年考试真题讲解大作文的四大主要模式及结构、审题、论证方法和结尾段方法第五节:结合雅思2006-2010年考试真题讲解教育和语言核心话题第六节:结合雅思2006-2010年考试真题讲解科技话题和环境话题第七节:结合雅思2006-2010年考试真题讲解国际合作与交流、媒体与广告核心话题第八节:结合雅思2006-2010年考试真题讲解政府职能及其它社会现象与问题第九节:介绍找分论点的15个原则, 词汇及句型NEW CHANNEL INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION GROUP LIMITED第一节介绍和讲解线图和饼图教学目标:了解雅思写作考试的相关细节,掌握雅思四大评分标准,第六代和学写线图和饼图总体安排:课时—小时教学内容:讲解大小作文的细节,结合雅思四大评分标准和剑桥考官范文讲解线图和饼图教学方法:讲解课件,剑桥考官范文与复印材料教学重点:结合雅思四大评分标准掌握线图和饼图的写作方法教学难点:短期掌握线图和饼图的固定句型及写作技巧,并改掉作文中重复的语法与标点错误教学亮点:小作文考试的快速突破技巧及核心固定句型Overall,/In general, /On the whole, it is evident/obvious/clear( to note)/notable (from the fihures/information provided by the graph)that…,while/ whilst/ whereas …;Provided is the line chart revealing ….;The following ten years witnessed a considerable/three-fold rise in…;There was a significant growth in the following…, hitting the highest point at…in…; (Likewise,)A substantial increase was (also) found/ seen in…/ came/ occured to… (over the same period);The number of… suffered a huge decline between…and…, then dipping to…in…; Thereafter, however,…lost the favour of…, dropping from…in…to…in…;Ne xt came …, at…, doubling/tripling…;…—the second favoured…ranked/listed/ involved/in question/in the rankings—constituted…;…enjoined the same popularity as …, equaling…;…, by contrast, is shown to fall steadily in the same period to…from…;When it com es to…, however, the reverse is true等课后作业:熟悉写作考试话题,小作文考试类型与结构,做第六代中的P70,82,83,86练习,阅读及背诵剑桥雅思考试考官的线图(C5T1)和饼图(G7T4)范文各一篇,及摘抄出描述趋势、比较和总结的句型、并各模写(G6T2, 指定)一篇一. 介绍(10mins)1. 进考场应该弄清楚的四个问题1)雅思作文开头段就要表明自己的观点吗?2)被动语态更容易拿高分吗?3)雅思作文可以采用缩写吗?4)雅思作文到底多久会重复一次?2. 评分标准任务的完成;结构的完整性和逻辑的连贯性;语言表达的准确性和流畅性;论证能力(主要是Task2)中国人作文得分很低的原因:不明白英汉两种语言的差别英语的句子是化零为整,中文是化整为零。

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义1. 导言雅思写作作为雅思考试的一部分,在考生中具有重要的地位。

良好的写作能力不仅可以帮助考生在雅思考试中取得好成绩,也对考生今后的学习和工作具有重要意义。

因此,在雅思写作课程中,我们将会对雅思写作的基本技巧、常见题型和考试策略进行详细讲解,帮助考生提升写作水平。

2. 雅思写作的基本技巧2.1. 语法和词汇雅思写作中,语法和词汇是考生最基础的要求。

在写作过程中,考生需要注意自己的句子结构是否清晰,用词是否准确。

为了提升语法和词汇水平,考生可以多读写英语文章,积累一些常用的词汇和固定搭配。

2.2. 句子的连贯性在雅思写作中,句子的连贯性对于提升写作分数至关重要。

考生需要合理使用过渡词、连接词以及代词等,使句子之间有逻辑关系,并且流畅地表达自己的观点。

2.3. 长短句结合在文章中,考生可以使用长句和短句结合的方式,以增加文章的变化性和层次感。

适当使用长句可以展示考生较高的语言水平,而短句则可以突出主题,增强表达的力度。

3. 雅思写作常见题型3.1. 图表题雅思写作中,经常会出现关于图表的题目,例如柱状图、饼图、表格等。

对于这类题型,考生需要学会正确解读图表,并且能够准确描述图表中的数据变化和趋势。

3.2. 讨论题雅思写作中的讨论题要求考生就某个观点或者议题进行阐述,提出自己的观点并给出支持理由。

在这类题型中,考生需要灵活运用各种句型,展示自己的观点和论证能力。

3.3. 任务型题任务型题是雅思写作中的一种常见题型。

在这类题型中,考生需要完成一系列写作任务,例如描述过程、解决问题等。

考生需要根据题目要求,合理组织文章结构,并进行清晰的逻辑分析。

4. 雅思写作的考试策略4.1. 时间管理在雅思写作考试中,时间管理是非常重要的。

考生需要在规定的时间内完成写作任务,因此,合理安排写作时间,控制好每个部分的时间分配是必要的。

4.2. 注意字数雅思写作要求考生在规定的字数范围内完成写作任务。

因此,考生需要在考试前熟悉每个部分的字数要求,并在写作过程中限制自己的篇幅,确保不超出或者不达到字数要求。

雅思写作7.0课程讲义全

雅思写作7.0课程讲义全

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文G:书信评分:以T ask 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous(灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe (严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

新东方雅思写作讲义

新东方雅思写作讲义

雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国-2009-雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排:Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One-Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Part One-Introduction-闪亮开篇--Version -Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1.主体背景(Background Information)(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一-具体化(笼统概念-缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:Paraphrase 方法之二-单词转换(优先考虑三大词类:)Paraphrase方法之三-句型转换(方法1 )(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects;Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________While some argue that ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to support your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序:单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法-Factor(s) [因]-Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished. Decent Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic-Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic-Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report-Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic-Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic-欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two-Body-中流砥柱--Version -分论点的要求:1.字数要求:One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则:(1). 内容原则:分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。

[实用参考]雅思写作经典讲义

[实用参考]雅思写作经典讲义

我的授课简要内容:第一节:介绍雅思写作,结合雅思四大评分标准,第六代和剑桥考官范文讲解线图和饼图第二节:结合第六代和剑桥考官范文讲解柱状图和表格第三节:结合剑桥考官范文、第六代及20GG年真题介绍流程图、地图等第四节:结合雅思四大评分标准、第六代、剑桥考官的范文及20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解大作文的四大主要模式及结构、审题、论证方法和结尾段方法第五节:结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解教育和语言核心话题第六节:结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解科技话题和环境话题第七节:结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解国际合作与交流、媒体与广告核心话题第八节:结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解政府职能及其它社会现象与问题第九节:介绍找分论点的15个原则,词汇及句型NEWCHANNELINTERNATIONALEDUCATIONGROUPLIMITED第一节介绍和讲解线图和饼图教学目标:了解雅思写作考试的相关细节,掌握雅思四大评分标准,第六代和学写线图和饼图总体安排:课时—2.5小时教学内容:讲解大小作文的细节,结合雅思四大评分标准和剑桥考官范文讲解线图和饼图教学方法:讲解课件,剑桥考官范文与复印材料教学重点:结合雅思四大评分标准掌握线图和饼图的写作方法教学难点:短期掌握线图和饼图的固定句型及写作技巧,并改掉作文中重复的语法与标点错误教学亮点:小作文考试的快速突破技巧及核心固定句型Overall,/Ingeneral,/Onthewhole,itisevident/obvious/clear(tonote)/notable(f romthefihures/informationprovidedbPthegraph)that…,while/whilst/whereas…;Providedisthelinechartrevealing….; ThefollowingtenPearswitnessedaconsiderable/three-foldrisein…;Therewasasignificantgrowthinthefollowing…,hittingthehighestpoint at…in…;(Likewise,)Asubstantialincreasewas(also)found/seenin…/came/occur edto…(overthesameper iod); Thenumberof…sufferedahugedeclinebetween…and…,thendippingto …in…;Thereafter,however,…lostthefavourof…,droppingfrom…in…to …in…;NeG tcame…,at…,doubling/tripling…;…—thesecondfavoured…ranked/listed/involved/inquestion/inthera nkings—constituted…;…enjoinedt hesamepopularitP as…,equaling…;…,b Pcontrast,isshowntofallsteadilP inthesameperiodto…from…; Whenitcomesto…,however,thereverseis true等课后作业:熟悉写作考试话题,小作文考试类型与结构,做第六代中的P70,82,83,86练习,阅读及背诵剑桥雅思考试考官的线图(C5T1)和饼图(G7T4)范文各一篇,及摘抄出描述趋势、比较和总结的句型、并各模写(G6T2,指定)一篇一.介绍(10mins)1.进考场应该弄清楚的四个问题1)雅思作文开头段就要表明自己的观点吗?2)被动语态更容易拿高分吗?3)雅思作文可以采用缩写吗?4)雅思作文到底多久会重复一次?2.评分标准任务的完成;结构的完整性和逻辑的连贯性;语言表达的准确性和流畅性;论证能力(主要是Task2)中国人作文得分很低的原因:不明白英汉两种语言的差别英语的句子是化零为整,中文是化整为零。

雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义

雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义

雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义Unit 1 雅思IELTS 考试写作简介雅思考试写作部分在听力和阅读后进行,由两部分组成,TASK1和TASK2。

要求考生在60分钟内完成两篇文章的写作。

普通培训类和学术类考生在写作的考试内容上有一些区别。

两类写作TASK2题目类型基本相同,考试的结构和要求也大体相同,要求在40分钟完成250字左右的议论文。

类似英美国家学校里任课教师布置的课堂讨论作文。

一般要求考生根据自己的知识和经验就一个现象阐明自己的态度和见解,或就一个观点发表自己赞同或反对的观点。

学术类写作TASK 1(ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE)要求考生对题目中给出的各类图表加以观察和分析,并根据已知的图表和资料写一篇不少于150字的小短文。

考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、饼图等。

也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。

另外,流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。

时间20分钟。

普通培训类写作TASK1(GENERAL TRAINING MODULE)则要求考生就某个假设的场景写一封信. 到目前为止,出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。

20分钟内完成150个字的文章。

总之,就题目的难度而言,GENERAL TRAINING MODULE 普通类写作比ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE学术类写作稍微简单一些。

评分标准The examiner reads your answer and awards band score of between 1(did not answer the question) and 9 (native speaker-like ) according to these criteria: ? 1.T ask Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position isclear and effective)2.Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organized and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ?3.Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)4.Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)The band scores are then added together divided by 3 and rounded to determine your band score for this task.Writing Overall Band = 1 / 3* Task1 + 2 / 3*Task2For example: Task1 =6Task2 =7Overall Band = 1 / 3* 6 + 2 / 3*7= 6.5Unit 2 曲线图1.描述上升的单词increase rise grow go up词汇升级:creep up ≤10edge up 10 ease up 20boom 30 surge 45 soar 60 swell 70 escalate 80 rocket 902.描述下降的单词decrease drop decline fall go down词汇升级:creep down ≤10edge down 10 ease down 20ebb 30 subside 45 slump 60 collapse 70 plunge 80 plummet 903.描述波动的单词fluctuate --- fluctuation go up and down rise and fall例:Sales of Computers 1995There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from Jan to Feb. However, they increased dramatically to a peak in the next month. After that, there was a downward trend in sales between Mar and Aug, which leveled off by the end of Dec.Task 1每部分的结构:例题分析example 1WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the number of passengers in a London underground station at different times of the day.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Number of passengers at a London underground stationThe line graph illustrates the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.开头段三种万能方法:①改单词②换句型③加信息The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6 pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning (around 08:00) and early evening (around 18:00) periods.例题分析2:Sample 2WRITING TASK 1---“例2”You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the annual amount of fish caught in North America from 1972 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.line graph with two linesThe graph reveals changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years.Between 1975 and 1981, US fish catches averaged between 2.5 and 2.75 million tons per year, while Canadian landings fluctuated between 600,000 and 900,000 tons. …In 1981, however, there was a significant increase in fish caught in the US, and this rise continued and peaked at 5.6 million tons in 1991. During the same period, Canada's catch went up from 1 million tons to 1.6 million tons, a growth of over 50%.From 1991 onwards, a sudden decline in fish catching was reported in both countries. US figures plummeted to 4 million tons in 2001, a drop of 28%, and Canadian catches plunged to 0.5 million tons, a decrease of 66%. In the following four years, US catches remained stable at 4 million tons, while Canadian catches rose and fell around the 0.5 million tons mark.In general, fish catches have declined drastically in both the US and Canada since the early 1990s. Although Canadian production was much lower, it echoed US figures, declining or increasing at thesame rate.习题③You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.The line chart illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb andchicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams) However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreasedover the period.★考试高分必备表 3——Phrase。

【免费下载】雅思大作文写作讲义

【免费下载】雅思大作文写作讲义

below. The first reason that can be seen by every person is that advertisements provide us with much useful information. Advertisements keep us well-informed about products. As a result, we can compare them and choose the best and cheapest one. In addition, we can also find a job or rent a house with the help of advertisements Another factor that we must consider is that advertisements bring us a lot of entertainment. Just imagine what a bus station or a newspaper would be like without advertisements. Would you enjoy watching a blank wall or reading traffic regulations while waiting for a bus? An interesting advertisement makes your waiting less dull and monotonous. The third and very important reason is that advertisements also provide money for newspapers, magazines, radios and TV stations. Many kinds of media could not survive without advertisements. Because of advertising, we can enjoy so many TV programs with so little money. A newspaper would cost much more if we had to pay its full price. From what has been discussed above, we many safely draw the conclusion that the government should not impose restrictions on advertisements. They provide much useful information for consumers. They make our life colorful with artistic pictures and words. What is more, they play an indispensable role in the survival and development of media.

雅思写作课件 ppt

雅思写作课件 ppt
总结词
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文,介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况,并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息,要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点,并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一:议论文
总结词
逻辑严密,观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型,要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点,使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二:图表作文
总结词
内容问题
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总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
02 03
详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述,或者逻辑结构不清晰,导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构,掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中,考生需要明确自己的观点和论据, 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外,考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构,如简单句、复 合句和复杂句,使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确,没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用

雅思写作高分讲义

雅思写作高分讲义

第一章雅思写作话题范围分析——写作话题范围的固定性•老百姓话题•政府话题•人与周围世界的关系雅思写作要求考生在限定时间内就给定的话题以英文表达自己的想法,目的是考察考生的英文写作能力和分析问题、逻辑思维能力及论证能力。

因此所给的写作话题不带任何专业色彩,是为广大考生所熟悉的话题。

雅思作文G类题目都很简单,就是大家日常生活中经常接触的话题;A类作文80-90%的话题与G类相同,只是问题方式难度增加,另外还有一些话题,如国家之间的关系问题,只出现在A类题目中。

实际上A类话题更广泛、更学术一些。

尽管雅思作文题层出不穷,纵观数学考题,我们可以把所有题目归纳为以下三大类话题;•老百姓话题•政府话题•人与周围世界的关系考生一旦了解这些常考话题,平时就可以随时有针对性地积累写作素材,为考场的写作做充分的准备。

下面我们就具体地分析一下各大类话题所覆盖的题目,使考生全面了解范围。

一、老百姓话题上述三大话题中出题数量最多,考题最贴近考生生活的是关于老百姓的话题。

仔细分析,这部分话题又可以做出如下的划分:1.个人一生中各个年龄段遇到的需求权衡利弊、全面考虑之后做出抉择的问题。

我们一生当中,在各个阶段会遇到不同的棘手问题需要我们费心思考、花时间和精力解决。

这些问题和我们的生活密切相关,因此完全是大家熟悉的话题,当然也是雅思写作常考话题。

备考的学员可以按照人从小到老的顺序,想一想哪些问题需要我们个人解决,哪些大事需要我们决定。

如此一想,雅思作文2/3的题目已经在大家的准备之中了。

从成年人的视角来看,在孩子上学之前,最大的麻烦事找人看孩子、送孩子入托的问题。

这个问题在现实生活中是如何解决的?在我们国家,很多家庭是有爷爷、奶奶、姥姥、姥爷们帮忙把孩子带到上幼儿园的年龄。

但这种做法的利与弊雅思作文并不考,原因很简单:西方国家不存在这种现象。

不能依赖老人帮忙,还能怎么解决呢?于是不少母亲放弃职业在家带孩子(考题),也有越来越多的家庭把很小的孩子就送去上幼儿园(考题)。

《雅思写作讲义》课件

《雅思写作讲义》课件

2 辩论类
详细讲解辩论类题目的 写作方法,包括分析正 反观点、选择立场和提 供支持证据。
3 议论文类
介绍如何写议论文类题 目,包括提出观点、给 出论据和结论,并给出 高分范文分析。
写作流程
1
构思
2
组织自己的思路,找出合适的论点和
支持证据,确立文章结构。
3
修改、 语法正确,提高内容的质量。
《雅思写作讲义》PPT课 件
本PPT课件旨在帮助学生们提高雅思写作能力,介绍写作任务类型、写作流 程、语言表达技巧和参考范文分析,以及备考建议。
课程目的与重要性
本节课程将介绍《雅思写作讲义》PPT课件的内容和目标,以及为什么学习 和掌握雅思写作对考试备考的重要性。
写作任务类型
1 图表类
介绍写作任务中的图表 类题型,如图表描述、 图表比较等,并提供解 题方法和技巧。
参考范文分析
经典参考范文
分析一些经典的参考范文,解读优秀的写作思路 和技巧。
避免失分点
提供一些常见的失分点,并给出避免失分的技巧 和策略。
总结
通过本次课程,学生们将掌握雅思写作任务类型和流程,提升语言表达技巧,并通过参考范文分析了解 高分写作思路。最后,给出备考建议。
思考
认真思考写作题目,理解要求和重点, 制定写作计划。
写作
按照构思的思路开始写作,注重逻辑 清晰、表达准确。
语言表达技巧
词汇选择
介绍如何选择恰当的词汇 表达自己的观点和论据, 提高写作的表达力。
句型构造
强调一些常用的句型和表 达方式,帮助学生在写作 中运用多样化的语言结构。
注意重点
指导学生在语言表达中注 重重点内容,突出关键信 息,使文章更有说服力。

雅思写作小作文上课课件

雅思写作小作文上课课件
e.g. 从2008年到2010年专职教师的人数在增 加。
The number of full-time teachers was on the increase form 2008 to 2010.
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文:变化趋势常用结构
2) 表示下降
动词+副词结构 e.g. 当地学校的失学人数在去年略有下降。 The number of drop-outs in the local
开始动笔写图表作文:基本内容
文章内容
与任务2写作一样,图表写作也要紧紧围绕任 务去完成。也要依据题目提供的已知信息 进行写作。与任务2不同的是图表作文的信 息载体不是文字而是图表,考生将图表承 载的信息用文字表达出来。在转化的过程 中很容易遗漏信息。所以写完后的审查就 显得更加重要。
雅思写作小作文上课课件
that ...
The figures /statistics show that
more other verbs: describe, illustrate, display, exhibit,
indicate, reflect, represent, reveal, unfold, summarize etc.
IELTS WRITING
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文:基本情况
任务1:图表写作 要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的短文。
以考核图表为主。主要有: 曲线图 line chart, graph 柱状图 bar chart 饼状图 pie chart 表格等 table 偶尔也会有流程图flow chart、地图geography和示 意图diagram/figure

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文G:书信评分:以Task 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous(灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked byadvertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

雅思写作冲刺讲义

雅思写作冲刺讲义

雅思写作冲刺时间:一个小时,无法超时上午九点考试,写作往往是11点开始考;一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了;雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个,比托福等都长;图表作文只占了1/3的分数,那议论文就占了2/3;G类也要按A类要求去做;Academic writing 的特殊要求1.Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写,凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手,专业选手必须要用,do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的,特别提醒大家,cannot 中间没有空格;如果你不相信我说的话,我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6,一个缩写你都找不到;2.Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇;其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇,可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词;A great deal of 不可数;3.The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语,-se 结尾的都是英式英语,而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语,而neighborhood是美式英语,有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢不是这样的,在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式,但两者不能混合使用;我建议大家-our -se 是英式的,-or -ze 是美式的,这两者的区别是最常见的,其他的我们就没有必要掌握了;4.Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢;More and more ,给大家推荐一个词,increasingly.5.Serious crimes harm people's lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人,大家看考官的作文也不是很难;但这里serious 高中词汇,crime harm 初中词汇,people 和life 就是小学词汇了,给大家推荐一个severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair people's health, human being 这个词太大,不建议使用,individual6.The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成outweigh7.Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用,中间加个连词即可;8.The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系,加because 就很一般了哈,加个therefore.9.So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem So 换成therefore,大家在写作中,千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈,好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的,所以,感叹号去掉,还有,must 换成should.10.We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, "treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated." 不能出现宗教语言;大作文,40分钟,最低要求240字,要求考高分的同学,建议270-280, 7分以上的同学,我建议300字以上;大家刚看了雅思真题库,不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分;但是如果没有素材的话,你再好的基础都无法体现出来;TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the mediaDevelopment and globalizationCrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problems雅思不会出时事类的话题,只出争议比较大的话题;常见的词汇,常见的句式都可以通用;推荐大家掌握思考方法A.分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree老房子可以分成要拆的,和不要拆的;这样子就有四段;这样子词汇可以成倍增加;开头用模板主题两段不要写一样长,一段可以多写一个理由,这样子你的倾向比较明显;Some high school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage分成文科类,理科类的B. 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree形容词最高级/ only / stopban存在漏洞替代法飞机很伟大,但存在争议,主体第一段先让步,写两个理由,好处飞机的;主体第二段可以举电脑,手机,举三个反例Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree主体第一段可以先让步,效率很高,政府的投入很少第二段可以举三个反例,行人,警察,设施,只管司机是不够的,还要管其他的;Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree主体第一段,残忍,传播疾病第二段,医学,制药工业,航天技术,心理学的研究;不用动物用人的话更残忍;现阶段无法禁止,只能尽量少用;C.裸奔法TM STREEC 真正的裸奔是streaker 音译啊$Technology & efficiencyMind soulSociety crimeTime spaceRights responsibilitiesEnvironment healthEmployment competitionCulture populationMoney fun任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题1 “A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2 "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire." -- W. B. Yeats3 “Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them, The teacher is the most important." --- Bill Gates. Technology“ The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think likepeople, but that people will begin to think like machines.”―― Albert Einstein 5“As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6“He who controls the media, controls the mind. “---Rupert Murdock Government7“Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will alwaysallocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald Reagan Tourism8“The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.”Saint AugustineWomen and Families9“The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy ineach other’s life.” Richard BachLanguage10“To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.”–Charlemagne Culture11“Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.”– Ruth Benedict Globalization12“ Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is the economic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.”---Bill ClintonCrime13“He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. “---Roman philosopher SenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animalsare treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15“Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.” --- quoted in Newsweek16“Don’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find.” quoted in Time magazine 第三讲雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from tele commuting远距离 than employer.可数名词是不可以单独使用的前后各加一个-s2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.动词原形不能做主语2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.一定不要忘记被动要加-ed2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination污染,可以代替pollution is very hard to resolve.主谓不一致,主语很长的时候一定不要忘了看下谓语动词是单数还是复数2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.like 在这里是动词,什么时候是介词2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.谓语动词的时态,3 Intelligent students should not be treated different ly by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.that 在这里省略to reasons for / important to sb. / it's important for sb. To do / solution to a problem4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.replace5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.themselves6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.插入and7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and Enjoyment.afford sb. Sth. Thinking高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is主语是one the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not onlynot,only 没有放句首不用倒装 a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, 状语提前a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage s due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax incomes. Actually,状语提前 this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seemsnot to work very well. The government can no longer afford to support all the old peopl es错了.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the livelife after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fairmodel because there will certainly be people who can't学术类不能用缩写形式 afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish producedIt is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their Waste.Cultivate the awarenessHow should i address you 称呼Strictly ban雅思强化写作精讲班第7讲讲义Since / As …, … 因为……instead of … 而是…中量级连接词As a matter of fact, … 事实上Indeed, … 确实Obviously, … 显而易见,…Even though…, … 尽管It seems that… 看起来…重量级连接词Otherwise, … 否则……rather than… 而是…In general=By and large… 一般来说…Apparently, …很明显,…More precisely,…更准确地说…骨灰级连接词… , thereby + verb + ing 句中连词,“以此达到…的目的”I would be hard-pressed to imagine that 我很难想象…More specifically, … 更具体的说…In terms of … , … 在…方面,…Overall ,总体上看雅思强化写作精讲班第13讲讲义图表作文一The bar chart below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 andThe table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998.Write a report describing the sales figures of various types of publications, based on the information shown in the table.The diagram shows in four stages how the Australian Bureau of Meterlogy gets its weather information.In the first stage there is the “incoming information”. Raw data is collected from outer space, on land, or at sea, using satellite, radar, and drifting buoy respectively. Next, this data is analyzed and forecasted by experts. At this stage experts study satellite photos, radar screens, and synoptic charts to determine weather conditions. Stage three of the process is when the information is prepared for broadcast. This is done through computer which sends all necessary data to the fourth stage. At this point the weather data is broadcasted to the general public via TV, radio and telephone recorded announcement.Thus, the process diagram shows how weather data is collected, studied,。

雅思A类写作讲义

雅思A类写作讲义

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雅思写作讲义汇总

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新航道雅思作文课件

新航道雅思作文课件As an AI language model, I am not able to provide a response in Word format. However, I can certainly help you with generating a response that meets the other criteria you have outlined. Here is a sample response that you can use as a reference: In today's globalized world, the importance of English language proficiency, particularly in the context of the IELTS exam, cannot be overstated. As such, the demand for high-quality IELTS preparation courses, such as those offered by 新航道 (New Channel), has been on the rise. These courses aim to equip students with the necessary skills and strategies to excel in the IELTS exam, which is often a prerequisite for admission to universities and for immigration purposes in English-speaking countries. From the perspective of 新航道, their IELTS preparation courses are designed to cater to the diverse needs of students. The courses cover all four components of the IELTS exam – listening, reading, writing, and speaking – and are structured to provide comprehensive and intensive training. The curriculum is carefully crafted to not only enhance students' language abilities but also familiarize them with the format and requirements of the IELTS exam. Additionally, the courses often include practice tests and mock exams to gauge students' progress and readiness for the actual exam. On the other hand, from the students' perspective, enrolling in an IELTS preparation course at 新航道 offers numerous benefits. Firstly, the courses are typically taught by experienced instructors who are well-versed in the IELTS exam and its nuances. This allows students to receive expert guidance and feedback on their performance, thereby enabling them to identify their strengths and weaknesses. Moreover, the interactive nature of the classes fosters a conducive learning environment, where students can engage in discussions, ask questions, and receive personalized attention. Furthermore, from a societal standpoint, the impact of English language proficiency, as assessed through the IELTS exam, extends beyondindividual aspirations. Proficiency in English is often associated with greater opportunities for employment, education, and mobility. Therefore, by equipping individuals with the necessary language skills to excel in the IELTS exam, 新航道is contributing to the overall enhancement of human capital and the global competitiveness of individuals from non-English speaking backgrounds. However, itis important to acknowledge that the effectiveness of IELTS preparation courses, including those offered by 新航道, is contingent upon various factors. For instance, the motivation and dedication of students play a crucial role in their success. Additionally, the quality of instruction, the relevance of course materials, and the extent of individualized support are all factors that can influence the overall impact of the courses on students' performance in the IELTS exam. In conclusion, 新航道's IELTS preparation courses play a pivotal role in equipping students with the necessary language skills and strategies to excel in the IELTS exam. From the perspectives of the institution, students, and society at large, these courses offer a range of benefits that contribute to individual growth and societal advancement. Nonetheless, it is important to recognize the multifaceted nature of language proficiency and the various factors that influence the effectiveness of IELTS preparation courses.。

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于是,看见的,看不见的;记住的,遗忘了。

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于是,看不见的,看见了;遗忘的,记住了。

然而,看不见的,是不是就等于不存在?记住的,是不是永远不会消失?♦Task 1: content✦All the significantinformation should beincluded;✦Structure✦Grammar✦Vocabulary✦Avoid:♦Personal experience♦Laymen words toexperienced audienceA类小作文♦不要混淆名称!♦趋势:混合图表✦Pie chart 饼图:比例的表达,‘占’的表达✦Bar chart 柱状图:比较和对比✦Line chart/graph 曲线图:整体和分类趋势trend tendency✦Table 表格:✦Process/flow chart 流程:理解,如水循环,森林的生长A类小作文三原则:▪Objectivity 客观性:–No ‘I’ or ‘We’–语态:主动/被动–Use things/time assubjects–Avoid therefore, thus,hence etc.▪Carefulness 观察细致:–HiddencharacteristicsAccuracy 精确性:–Tense–Time point/marker时间描述:1.I n + 月份/年/年代2.F or/during + 时间段–During thefirst/second half ofthe year–During the remainderof the year3.F rom…to…/ between…and…4.U ntil…5.A t the end of the year/century6.B efore/after/around/about–In 1980s–In the period between … and …–Over the period …to … / over a ten-yearperiod/ over the pasttwo decades–Throughout the 19thcentury整体格式:▪Beginning: 1段—1/2句▪Body: 1-2段—6-8句▪Conclusion: 1段—1/2句▪Approximately 8-12 sentences with each no less than 15 words.写作步骤:▪看题——1分钟▪分析图表——2分钟▪开头——2分钟▪中间——12分钟▪结尾——2分钟▪检查——1分钟▪总共:20分钟开头:▪2 patterns1.Paraphrase the rubric:1 sentence▪subjects, fields,location, date2.Define what the graphis about + overall trend:2 sentences–Do not copy therubric!–Do not list specificfigures!The graph(s) and chart(s) and table(s) , based on …(调查研究),illustrate/display/unfol d a clear picture of …(主要内容)in …(地方/方面)+时间As is reflected/revealed/show n/illustrated in the graphs, the number/percentages of …surged/subsided/▪fluctuated/differed dramatically/gently + 时间Avoid ‘According to the diagram …’Examples:▪The charts unfold a clear picture of seven major reasons for adults totake up study and how the costs should be distributed among individuals, employers and taxpayers in people’s minds.As is displayed in the charts below, adults took up study for a variety of reasons and the costs were expected to beshared by individuals, employers and taxpayers. ▪The graph illustrates Harry’s sales of hamburgers throughout the year of 1998. It can be clearly seen that the consumption of hamburgers experienced a series of changes.▪As is revealed in thefollowing graph, Harry’s sales of hamburgers fluctuated throughout the year of 1998.▪Range from...ToRadar radio detecting and ranging▪The tables, based on a survey of 100,000interviewees, display a clear picture of UK residents’ purposes to go abroad and their destinations between 1994 and 1998.A glance at the charts below reflects that UK residents went abroad to different destinations for a variety of reasonsfrom 1994 to 1998.结论:▪2 patterns1.Highlight the mostoutstanding feature (1is enough!)2.Point out the hiddencharacteristics▪From the diagram it can be safely concludedthat…▪As a whole/on the whole, the data suggest that…medium▪What is worth mentioning is that…Examples:▪Though adults decided to study for a variety of reasons, the major one was their interest in thesubject. What is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentages exceeded 100%, it can be indicated that some adults chose study for several reasons.As a whole, the data indicate that school summer holidays had a big impact on Harry’s salesof hamburgers.It can be safely concluded that an overwhelming majority of people in UK went abroad for holidays and Western Europe was the most frequently visited destination during these years.中间:1.整体趋势2.个别趋势+数据中段——曲线图趋势分段机械列举数字In 1960 there were about nine thousand marriages in Scotland, in 1970 there were about three thousand marriages, and in 1980 there were two thousandfive hundred marriages.整体趋势:分阶段描述The number of marriages in Scotland fell very sharply between 1960 and 1970, and continued to decline until around 1985 though at a slower rate. From 1985 onwards there was a gradual increase in the number ofmarriage which leveled off in 1984.整体趋势+数字:▪非谓语形式–reaching a peak at…and bottoming out at …/followed by…▪数字–People spent themajority on livingnecessities, 18% onfood and 16% on housing. ▪两者以上单列–The remainingexpenditure was paidfor luxury goods such aswines and tobacco,which accounted for 4%and 2% respectively. ▪比较–The individualsshould be responsiblefor the majority of theeducation costscompared with onequarter share taken upby taxpayers.介宾结构–Trinidad['trinidæd], with the majority of thecountry’s 900,000inhabitants, is arectangle of roughlyfifty by forty miles;Tobago[tə'beigəʊ],nineteen miles to thenorth, is smaller andhas a population ofabout 35,000.–The increase was verysignificant, at 50%. 饼图:百分比表达法:▪数字表达法–百分比: 10%–分数:▪A quarter▪One third▪Half▪three quarters▪Nine out of ten–概括:▪Themajority/minority of▪A large number of▪Most▪Only a few▪Very few = hardly any▪Quite a few占的表达法:▪Be–The number of theunemployed was 10% ofthe population.▪Make up/Constitute–Women made up/constituted a significant percentageof the workforce.▪Comprise–Food and gardenmaterials comprisenearly half of all household waste.▪Amount to–Paper and cardboard amounted to 21% of the total household waste. ▪Account for–Fossil fuel emissions accounted for the majority of the greenhouse gases.▪Represent–Those under the age of25 represent 14% of thewhole population.▪Stand at–The population of Asia stood at 3.7billion at the turn ofthe century.▪Something be shared by/be in the charge of/bedue to▪Because of/owingto/thanks to▪IOU note▪Somebody cover/take up/occupy/be responsible for …排名:▪A ranked first, followedby B and C…–Interest in subjectsranked first amongdiversified reasons foradult education,immediately followed bytheir desire to gainqualifications. ▪…dominated …▪…occupied the majority of …▪最高级–Record▪The highest level offossil fuelconsumption wasrecorded in recentyears.–Reach▪The consumption offossil fuel emissionsreached the highestlevel in recentyears.不同类别之间衔接:▪分号▪As to / as for/ with regard to/with respect to…▪Turning to/regarding…▪In the field/aspect/area of…▪When we consider/concernabout/come to…表格:列举数字的方式:极端数字–The general trendof …surgeddramatically, reachinga peak at … in 1990 andbottoming out at … in1995.▪范围–Visits abroad by UK residents for business surged gently within arange of approximately800.▪平均值–Visits abroad by UK residents for otherreasons surged andsubsided evenly,averaging out at nearly1000.相似–This is the case withthe statistics ofTOTAL.–This is the similarcase with the country asa whole.Fluctuate的用法:▪It fluctuated +1.From …to …/between … and …柱状图:▪Compare and contrast–Summary (共同点综述)–Analysis (不同点比较)▪By contrast▪On the contrary▪On the other hand▪Compared with A, B …▪Despite A, B…▪比较级▪Similarity:–Graduates earned more than non-graduates▪Differences/discrepancy /disparity:–Men earned more thanwomen–Men earned more withage–Women’s earningfluctuated with age线图:1.趋势描写的精确性2.整体特征+个别显著特征: 转折点3.分类方式–物理:上升/下降/波动(教材11/18)–水平–情况:类似的/相反的合并在一起(教材12)–对比:2条曲线以上▪两点的数据▪分别描述上升:▪Increase v.–Vt. + 数字–Vi. + by 数字+ to 数字In the past ten years, the cars rose.Increase n.–There was a (表程度形容词) increaseof 东西 from 数字1 to 数字2 + 时间–时间saw/witnessed a(表程度形容词)increase of 东西 from数字1 to 数字2–Somethingsaw/witnessed a (表程度形容词) increase of数字 + 时间–The number of …increased in 1990s.下降:Decrease–Vt. + 数字–Vi. + by 数字+ to 数字Decrease n.–There was a (表程度形容词)decrease/reductionof 东西 from 数字1+过去时间 to 数字2 + 后来时间–时间saw/witnessed a(表程度形容词)decrease of 东西 from数字1 to 数字2–Somethingsaw/witnessed a (表程度形容词) decrease of数字 + 时间–The number of …decreased during 1990s.持平:–R emain/stay–Stable/steady/constant–The same/unvarying–Plane–T he figure stabilized/maintained at (数字) between …and…(时间)–R each a plateau–E ven out + ( at 数字)+ (时间)–L evel off/out + ( at 数字)+ (时间)超过:▪Exceed:数字/东西▪Surpass(抽象)优于、大于▪Outnumber: 数目超过▪Outweigh:重量/价值上超过▪比较级成倍增长:▪The number of … doubledwhen it entered 2000.▪A was twice/3 times as much as B between 1990 and 1996▪The number of users increased fivefold.▪The number of …multiplied (several times) over the past 5 years.▪A shrank by 3 times at theturn of the century.▪The time spent with family almost halved compared with 10 years ago.▪The amount of …declined to the original one tenth in 2000.分别的:▪Respectively–位置:句末。

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