高中英语作文高分秘诀之课堂挖掘文本的实例探究课件共25张.ppt

The New York Times
The first paragraph gives the most important information.
Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night in Rivertown for giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbour after a shocking knife attack.
• ... Sadly ... I am only able to look at nature through dirty curtains hanging before very dusty windows. It’s no pleasure looking through these any longer because nature is one thing that really must be experienced.
• As is shown in the above picture, the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food, it starts to enjoy the crops busily, totally ignoring the potential danger. After it consumes the last grain of crop, to its horror, it suddenly finds itself trapped in the container.
John was presented with his award at a ceremony which recognized the bravery of ten people who had saved the life of another.
Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honoured at the
shocking knife attack.
John was studying in his room when he heard screaming. When he and his father rushed outside, a man ran from the scene. They discovered that Anne Slade, mother of three,
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How is meaning conveyed?
• What did Anne try to tell us in the last paragraph?
• Do you think her wish is strong? • How can Anne convey his
strong wish so successfully?
had been stabbed repeatedly with a knife. She
was lying in her front garden bleeding very heavily. Her hands had almost been cut off. (Para.3)
Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night in Rivertown for giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbour after a
Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night in Rivertown for giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbour after a
Lifesaver Awards last night in
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• As is shown in the above picture, the moment the mouse gets into a container full of food, it starts to enjoy the crops, ignoring its danger. After it consumes the grain of crop, to its horror, it finds itself trapped in the container.
shocking knife attack.
John was studying in his room when he heard screaming. When he and his father rushed outside, a man ran from the scene. They discovered that Anne Slade, mother of three, had been stabbed repeatedly with a knife. She was lying in her front garden bleeding very heavily. Her hands had almost been cut off. (Para.3)
• ... Sadly ... I am only able to look at nature through dirty curtains hanging before very dusty windows. It’s no pleasure looking through these any longer because nature is one thing that really must be experienced.
had been stabbed repeatedly with a knife.
She was lying in her front garden bleeding very
heavily. Her hands had almost been cut off.
(Para.3)
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John was presented with his award at a ceremony which recognized the bravery of ten people who had saved the life of another.
praise / appreciate (sb's ability, service, etc) by giving him an honour or reward
Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honoured at the
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Rivertown for giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbour after a shocking knife attack.
shocking knife attack.
John was studying in his room when he heard screaming. When he and his father rushed outside, a man ran from the scene. They discovered that Anne Slade, mother of three, had been stabbed repeatedly with a knife. She was lying in her front garden bleeding very heavily. Her hands had almost been cut off. (Para.3)
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Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night in Rivertown for giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbour after a shocking knife attack.
Seventeen-year-old teenager, John Janson, was honored at the Lifesaver Awards last night in Rivertown for giving lifesaving first aid on his neighbor after a shocking knife attack.