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How To Organize A Paragraph
End with a concluding sentence The concluding sentence tells what the paragraph was about The concluding sentences closes the paragraph and makes it complete Gets the reader ready for the next paragraph
How To Organize A Paragraph
Original paragraph Piranhas(水虎鱼) rarely feed on large
animals; they eat smaller fish and aquatic (水生的) plants. When confronted with humans, piranhas' first instinct is to flee, not attack. Their fear of humans makes sense. Far more piranhas are eaten by people than people are eaten by piranhas. If the fish are well-fed, they won't bite humans.
Writing
How To Organize A Paragraph
Begin with a topic sentence A topic sentence lets the reader know what the paragraph will be about Topic sentence should have a subject, verb, and a controlling idea (clear idea) Topic sentence is the most broad sentence because details will come later
How To Organize A Paragraph
Imagine each paragraph as a sandwich. The real content of the sandwich—the meat or other filling—is in the middle. It includes all the evidence you need to make the point. But it gets kind of messy to eat a sandwich without any bread. Your readers don't know what to do with all the evidence you've given them.
Sample paragraph 1
A university professor has many duties. In the classroom, he or she lectures to the students and answers questions. If the professor is a science instructor, he or she also conducts laboratory experiments. During office hours, students are free to visit the professor to get help on difficult material or problems. In addition, a professor may often work for many hours in laboratory doing a research project. Another professor might spend his or her time writing a scholarly paper for a professional journal. Still another one might spend time writing a book. In conclusion, a professor is always a very busy person.
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How To Organize A Paragraph
✔ Revision:
Although most people consider piranhas to be quite dangerous, they are, for the most part, entirely harmless. Piranhas rarely feed on large animals; they eat smaller fish and aquatic plants. When confronted with humans, piranhas' first instinct is to flee, not attack. Their fear of humans makes sense. Far more piranhas are eaten by people than people are eaten by piranhas. If the fish are well-fed, they won't bite humans.
How To Organize A Paragraph
Add supporting sentences (body) Supporting sentences provide more information for the reader – the more details, the better the paragraph Imagine your topic as a question that the reader will ask
How To Organize A Paragraph
End with a concluding sentence The concluding sentence tells what the paragraph was about The concluding sentences closes the paragraph and makes it complete Gets the reader ready for the next paragraph
How To Organize A Paragraph
Original paragraph Piranhas(水虎鱼) rarely feed on large
animals; they eat smaller fish and aquatic (水生的) plants. When confronted with humans, piranhas' first instinct is to flee, not attack. Their fear of humans makes sense. Far more piranhas are eaten by people than people are eaten by piranhas. If the fish are well-fed, they won't bite humans.
Writing
How To Organize A Paragraph
Begin with a topic sentence A topic sentence lets the reader know what the paragraph will be about Topic sentence should have a subject, verb, and a controlling idea (clear idea) Topic sentence is the most broad sentence because details will come later
How To Organize A Paragraph
Imagine each paragraph as a sandwich. The real content of the sandwich—the meat or other filling—is in the middle. It includes all the evidence you need to make the point. But it gets kind of messy to eat a sandwich without any bread. Your readers don't know what to do with all the evidence you've given them.
Sample paragraph 1
A university professor has many duties. In the classroom, he or she lectures to the students and answers questions. If the professor is a science instructor, he or she also conducts laboratory experiments. During office hours, students are free to visit the professor to get help on difficult material or problems. In addition, a professor may often work for many hours in laboratory doing a research project. Another professor might spend his or her time writing a scholarly paper for a professional journal. Still another one might spend time writing a book. In conclusion, a professor is always a very busy person.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
How To Organize A Paragraph
✔ Revision:
Although most people consider piranhas to be quite dangerous, they are, for the most part, entirely harmless. Piranhas rarely feed on large animals; they eat smaller fish and aquatic plants. When confronted with humans, piranhas' first instinct is to flee, not attack. Their fear of humans makes sense. Far more piranhas are eaten by people than people are eaten by piranhas. If the fish are well-fed, they won't bite humans.
How To Organize A Paragraph
Add supporting sentences (body) Supporting sentences provide more information for the reader – the more details, the better the paragraph Imagine your topic as a question that the reader will ask