[高三英语]高三英语写作训练
高三英语写作训练专题感谢信 1
高三英语写作训练专题——感谢信学习目标：1，通过分析高考真题写作部分，熟悉并掌握感谢信的写作特点与要求；2，通过自主限时写作练习，写出符合写作要求的感谢信。
写作案例：假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr.Brown的资助，可以重返校园。
请你给Mr.Brown写一封信，内容如下：1．收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；2．在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；3．决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；4．盼望见到Mr.Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。
注意：1．书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数100左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文[必备知识回顾一．概述1．感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的专业书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。
2．感谢信的写作格式主要分以下三个部分：(1)开头部分要明确对对方提供的帮助或赠送的礼物表示谢意；(2)主体部分则需列举对方提供的帮助，说明该帮助所起的作用，或表达对所收礼物的喜爱以及以后如何使用及收藏等；(3)结尾部分需再次表达诚挚的谢意并问候对方。
二．必备句型1. I’m writing to thank you for…2. I’m writing to express my thanks to you for your great efforts to …3. I’m writing to show my gratitude for your help with my…4. I’m grateful to you for your encouragement…5. Thanks to your help, I overcame the difficulty…6. If it were not for your help, I would not have succeeded in…7. You are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks .8. Thank you very much for…9. I sincerely hope that…10. Please accept my sincere appreciation for…11. I am truly grateful to you for…12. It was really kind of you to…13. I sincerely appreciate…14. I wish to express my appreciation for…15. On behalf of my whole family, I would like to…16. Without your help, I wouldn’t…17. with one’s help / with the help of sb.18. thanks to/due to/because of your encouragement/selflessdedication/devotion/contribution19. be patient with sb. / have much patience with sb.20. tolerant and generous三．常用过渡词表示列举和顺序的：firstly, secondly, thirdly, besides, then, for one thing, for another thing, etc.表示时间过渡的：now, suddenly, later, meanwhile, in the meanwhile, etc.表示概括总结的：in a word, in conclusion, in short, to sum up, etc.四．文章模板1. Dear ______ ,①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感谢的原因）. ②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（对方给予的具体帮助）, I fear that I would have been ______（没有对方帮助时的后果）.③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（给出细节）.④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming2.Dear ,I am now writing these lines to express my sincere thanks for .I,d like you to know how much you meant to me.You have a positive genius for .I not only enjoyed , but also .I shall ever remember as one of the most in my life.I .I repeat my thanks again for your .Please give my kind regards to your .Sincerely Yours,Li Hua实战演练（一）假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。
(高中英语写作)高三生活的英文作文
高三生活的英文作文生活，是一道彩虹，一路缤纷，生活，也是一条小河，等你跨过一端才觉察到了终点，生活中，有欢快，也有哀痛，多彩的生活构成了一幅幅画卷，也勾画出了我们的人生。
下面我给大家共享高三生活的英文作文的内容，盼望能够关心大家，欢迎阅读!高三生活的英文作文1Generally speaking, life in high school is busy and fulfilling, due to the ultimate goal---College Entrance Examination. Many people say that there is no fun left but bored study and endless exercises. However, as a high school student, I can’t agree with them. Personally, I live a fruitful but happy life in high school. It can’t be denied that study is my priority that I must spend most of my time and energy on it. Sometimes, study may make me frustrated or even drive me crazy, but I still can adjust my mood to enjoy my life.Besides, I can also get a sense of achievement when I do well in my study or make progress. The most important is that my friends bring much happiness to me and my parents’ care inspires me to go on. I think friends in high school are my best friend forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions. They are the persons who growwith me. In addition, teachers in high school care much about our students both in study and life, and classmates are always friendly to each other. We build deep friendship together. All of these make up my fruitful life in high school, which I will cherish forever.一般来说，高中生活是劳碌而又充实的，由于我们最终的目标都是高考。
高考英语复习应用文写作练习(共11篇,附写作指导和参考范文)
高考英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
1.分享信：交换生选科困惑（2023广东广雅中学期中测试卷）假定你是高一新生李华，你的同校交换生Mike给你写邮件，表达对于选科的困惑，不知道应该选物理还是选历史，想问你的看法，请你给他回复邮件，要点如下：1.表示理解并安慰；2.分析选科应该根据什么；3.分享自己的选科想法以提供参考。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,Yours sincerely,Li Hua写作注意要点2.写作思路：三段论。
第一段表示理解并安慰（要点1），开门见山表明写作目的——分享；第二段分析选科依据及分享自己选科想法（要点2&3）；第三段期待做出合适的选择。
高考英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分2.投稿：改进我们的书写（浙江强基联盟2023学年第一学期9月联考）假定你是李华，你校英语报即将举办题为“Improving Our Handwriting”的征文活动。
请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.好的书写的益处；2.改进书写的技巧。
要求：词数80左右；写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。
高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题(含范文解析)
高三英语作文模拟训练20题(含例文解析)学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、读后续写1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
Any day that I had to go to the airport was the worst day of my life, and as a traveling appliance salesman, I had to fly quite a bit. On this particular day in 2010. 1 was assigned to a middle seat. Back then, I was so fat that I couldn't fit down the aisle (走廊）facing forward,so I was forced to walk sideways like a crab. I weighed between 340 and 360 pounds; the exact figure depended on whether I measured my weight before or after one of my enormous meals. When I finally squeezed into my seat, the seat belt wasn't long enough to fit around my 52-inch waist.They never were.I woke up the next morning knowing that I needed to change. I started looking for signs that might lead me toward a better life and immediately a sign showed up. I turned on the TV and happened to catch an interview with former president Bill Clinton. He said he'd been under the care of a doctor who put him on a whole-food, plant-based diet. He lost weight without feeling hungry, and he was healthier and stronger than he'd been since his twenties. I never imagined my sign would come from Bill Clinton, but there he was.I had no idea what a “whole-food, plant-based diet” was. I went online and searched fora doctor who could help me. That's when I found Preeti. 1 felt hopeful when she agreed to see me the next day. The doctor recommended a low calorie diet and suggested some moderate exercises I could do in my home. She also suggested that I go to a shelter and adopt adog.“Exercise?”I asked, “A dog?" I couldn't believe what I heard.But, she said. “A dog is a good companion. Plus, you live in an apartment. which means the dog has to be walked. So if you walk your dog twice a day,that will be your exercise."Paragraph 1:With doubts and hesitation, I drove up to a dog sheller near where I lived.___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________Paragraph 2:I came back home with the large black and-white dog with a big round body.___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________【答案】范文：Para 1:With doubt and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived.Upon opening the door，I was amazed to see various types of dogs: Poodle，Husky，Samoyed .. Though abandoned，they all appeared clean and energetic. Seeing a stranger approaching, they kept barking, alert but curious. I was torn between a Poodle with golden fur and a Husky wagging its tail when a large black-and-white dog dozing in the corner caught my attention. His round body immediately reminded me of my size and what Preeti said-A dog is a good companion. I knew he was perfect for me.Para 2:I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body.I named him David, who often lay motionless on the floor and yawned with eyes half-closed. Though a bit discouraged, I was determined to change both of us. Soon, I found a ball, dragged David to the park and threw it at him. Driven by natural instinct, David dashed forward to chase the ball. Gradually, I could walk David twice a day. One month later, I suddenly realized that there was no need for me to walk like a crab on the plane. Meanwhile, David became lean and healthy.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者体重在340到360磅之间，作者决定改变自己，作者在网上找到了能帮助自己的医生，医生建议作者吃低热量的食物，并建议作者在家里做一些适度的运动。
高三英语写作范文5篇
高三英语写作范文5篇高三英语写作范文1Every child needs to receive education and they spend so much time to learnknowledge, whether they are like or not. The adults always tell their childrenthat as they are young and full of energy, so they should learn knowledge andskills, but most kids don't know the necessity of study. The most importantreason to study is to keep pace with the time. We live in the society that weneed to make connections with others. If we don't get the newest information, wewill be kicked out and have no idea what they are talking about, then isolationhappens. What's more, when we are equipped with skills, we can make our choicesand take charge of our life. In order to live the fortable life, we muststudy hard and fight for our future.高三英语写作范文2Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important festivals for Chinesepeople, which even occupies the same position with Spring Festival. It is saidthat the festival originated from a love story. A man with great strength shotnine suns and left only one, while his wife ate the pills by curious heart. Atlast, she flied to the moon and had to be separated with her lover. Nowadays,the meaning of Mid-autumn festival is to let the families get together and enjoythe time to appreciate the full moon. My families always prepare for somesnacks. When we finish the dinner, all the members will e to the balcony andsit down, appreciating the full moon. We talk and enjoy the chatting hour. Ihave a good time with my families.高三英语写作范文3I am in high school now and soon I will graduate. High school is theimportant stage of my life. I have learned a lot of things and to be a stronggirl. I met many difficulties in my study. I always wanted to give up, butthinking about the future life, I told myself not to give up. So I becamestronger and had strong will. But I am very naughty to my parents. When they tryto educate me, I always act like I don't care, because I hate to be treated likea small child. As I grow up, I try to change my attitude, but I am not perfect,so I needed to be given more time. This is me, a girl who tries to be stronger.I know nobody is perfect, but I can be a better one.高三英语写作范文4When I was very small, I always wanted to grow up soon, so that I can makemoney and make my own decision. My parents were in charge of my everything, so Ithought the only way to get out of their supervision is to bee an adult soon.But I was wrong. The sign of growing up is to take the responsibility of whatyou do instead of aging. Nowadays, many adults have been called Big Baby, whichmeans they are old enough as an adult, but they can’t take charge of their life.Especially for the person who counts on parents so much. So I need to learn tobe independent and solve the problem by myself. When my parents see my ability,they will be happy to let me go. I believe that every parent wants their kids tobe strong.高三英语写作范文5Recently, I was moved by a warming news. A boy from America was loved by alot of soldiers. The boy's father was a policeman and he was sent to a foreigncountry to carry the mission. Unluckily, he got shot and died. The world was sadfor him. This man left his wife and a small boy forever. The lucky thing for thelittle boy was that his father's colleagues decided to protect and love this boyuntil he grew up. Love has been continued from this story. For most people, theyare lucky to be loved by parents and friends. While for few people, who havegone through some disasters, they got care from the public. So no matter whatkind of difficulty we will face, we can't give up hope, because there is alwayssomeone love us.。
高三英语写作训练策略
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Ｌ 璺 Ｊ“ 捅 冰冻三尺，非一日 之寒” 英语写 力不可能一蹴 作能 而就， 俗语和 谚语 的识记是通过背诵来完 成。 背诵是语言学 习的重要手段， 也是语 言学习的必经之路 。学生不会写作文 的主要原 因是对 英语的・ 只有坚持不懈，持之 以恒，才能写出准确、地道、规范的英语文章。 输入不够 ，所 以无法输 出。正所谓没有量 的积 累，就不可 能达 到质 Ｌ 键 子 Ｊ 励： 天 鼓 化难为 背 规范书 易； 诵： 写；自 写作 由 的飞跃，而背诵就是一个量积累的过程。这一环节老师有一项艰巨 整个高中阶段，英语教学的四种技能是相辅相成，相互促进。 的任务— — 搜集、整编简单易懂句型。为了让学生写出好的句子， 而英语写作的训练贯穿于教学全过程，即运用学过的英语知识进行 我搜集了一系列可以应用于不同题材的作文句型及模板。例如对比 思 想交流 。现在 的书面表达 ，实质 上是一种控制 性或指导性 写作， 型议论文 的常 见结构 ：正反观点式 议论文 模板。 它 不能离开要求去 自 立意 、随意 发挥 ；它与 “ 译 ”相似 ，但 又 行 翻 第 １ Ｒ ｃｎｌ ’ｅ ａ ｉ ｕｓ ｎａ ｏ ｔ ｅ ｅ ｈ ｕｄ 段： ｅｅ ｔ ｗｅｖ ｄａｄｓ ｓｉ ｂ ｕ ｔ ｒ ｓｏ ｌ… ｙ ｈ ｃ ｏ ｗｈ ｈ ｗｅ 比 “ 译 ”灵活 。它 是在指定范 围内比较灵活 的写作。常常会 要求 （ 翻 导入话题 ）Ｏ ｒ ｐ ｉ ｓ ｌ ｄ ｉ ｄ ｎｈｓｏｉ （ 点有 分歧 ） ｕ ｉｏ ｅ ｉｄ ｉｔ ｃ 观 ｏ ｎ ｎ ａ ｖ ｅ ｏ ｔ ｐ ． 学生根据所给的情景和要求写出一篇文理通顺、语言准确、连贯流 第 ２ ： ｓｏｔｅ ｔ ｅｔａ ｉ ａｏｏ ｉ（ 段 Ｍｏｔ ｆｈ ｕ ｎ ｌ ｎｆ ｒ ｆ ． ｓｄ ｓ ｅ ｖ ｔ 正方观 点） ｅ ｅ Ｈ ｒａ ｅ ｌ 畅、地道的英语短文。高考英语对考生写作能力的要求是：能根据 ｔｅｅｓｎ．ｉｔ Ｓｃｎ … ｉ ｌ… （ ｈ ａ ｓＦ ｓ ｅｏｄ Ｆｎ ｌ ｒ ｏ ｒ… ａｙ 列出 ２３ 赞成的理 由） —个 所读文章进行 转述或写摘 要；能根据用文 字及 图表提 供的信息写短 第３ 段：Ｈ ｗ ｖｒ ｈ ｈｒａ ｒｎｌ ａａ ｓｉ （ ｏ ｅｅ，ｔｅ ｔｅ ｅ ｔ ｇ ｉ ｔｔ 反方观 点） ｏ ｓ ｒｓｏ ｙ ｇ ｎ ． 文或报告 ；能写 出语意连 贯且结构完整 的短文，叙述 事情或表达观 Ｔｈ ｉ ｒａ ｏ ｓ ｌｅ ｓ ｆ ｌ ｗｓ ｎ ｔｅ ｉｒｔ ｌｃ ．Ｗｈａ’ ｅｒ ｅ ｎ ａ ａ ｏ ｌ ．Ｉ ｈ ｆ ｓ ｓ ｏ ｐａ ｅ ｔ ｍｏ … ｎ ｓ ｅ ｒ Ｉ 点和态度 ；能在 写作 中做到文体规 范、语 句通顺 。 ａｄｉ … （ 出 ２３ ｄｉ ｎ 列 ｔ ｏ — 个反对 的理 由） 高考英语 的写作所 占的分值是 ３ Ｏ分， 是整个卷面 分数的五分之 第 ４ 段 ：Ｐｒ ｎ ｌ ｓｅｋｎ ，ｔ ｄ ａｔ ｅ ｏｅｗ ｉｈｔ ｅ ｏａｙ ｐａｉ ｓｌ ｇ ｈ ａｖｎ ｇｓ ｖｒｅ ｈ ｅ ａ ｇ ｅ 不会写作文 的学生或不擅 长写作文 的学生在这一部 分只能得三 ｄｓ ｄ ａ ｔｇ ｓ ｏ ｔ ｌ ｄ ｓｍｏｅ ｈ ｒ ｔａ ｏ ｄ ｓ ｕ ｐ ｒ ． ｉ ｖ ｎａ ｅ ，ｆ ｒｉｗｉ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ａ ｌ ｍ ｎ ｇ ｏ ， ｏＩｓ ｐ ｏ ｔｔ ｈ ｉ 到十分 ，还有 一部分的学 生甚至不写作文 ，作文失分 率很高 。几 次 （ 个人 观点 ） 。 考试下来班级 的作文 平均分只有 ９分左右 ，学生在 写作方面存在着 我 先让学生对着 作文 模板仿 写，然后给范文进行 背诵 ，再让学 比较多的 问题 。经过我们高三 英语组的共 同分析讨论之 后，各班都 生 以考 试形式独立写一篇 议论性文章 。学生通过应用模板 ，不仅提 一 制定出了符合本班学生实际的写作训练计划。根据我所带班级的具 高了写作能力而且在此基础上学会 Ｔ＠新。 Ｊ 体情况我制定 了以下作文 训练策略 ： ３ 每周至少写两篇作文 ． １鼓励学生写作文，让学生克服写作 的畏难情绪 ． 临渊羡鱼，不如退而结网。如果仅仅背了大量文章、佳句，不 学生不写作文或 者是写不好 作文主要是害 怕写作文 ，从心理上 亲 自动手 写还 是不行 ，世上 没有一成不变 的文章让你照搬 。每周写 选择了退缩。治愈这种畏惧心理，老师在批改作文时一定要给每个 同一题材的作文两次。第一次让学生独立的完成作文，老师不给任 学 生的习作给 出一些鼓 励性 的评语 ，同时给 出一 些建议 。给每 个学 何的指 导。在批 改作文时老 师要有意识 的记录学生在作文 中出现 的 生 设立阶段性的 目 ，老师逐渐 引导学生实现阶段 性 目标 。在 班里 问题，讲评作文时集体更正。同时指导学生如何写此类作文，总结 标 表扬一直在进步的学生，向全班展示这些学生的作文，全体同学共 出此类作文用到的句型，可以通过口头作文的形式进行操练，再写 同见证这些学生 的进 步。从一句变 两句；两句变 三句 ；三句 到五句 篇同题材的作文检测学生对句型的掌握情况。反复多次的将所学 的文章， 从满篇红色墨迹到星星点点的墨迹， 从而坚定学生的信念： 的句型贯 穿在 日常教学 中。每周通过一次 综合的模拟考试 让学生把 我会 写作文，只要多多练 习就会 进步 。 握写作 的时间，这样能促使 学生瞬间接受信 息，快速理解信 息，迅 ２ 充分利用早读、午读的时间检查、 ． 监督学生背诵常 速表达信息，提高实际应用和应试能力。这一步是关键，也是学生 用句型 ，经典范文 的难关 ，经过循序渐进 的训练能够提 高学 生的临场发挥 的能力 。 俗话 说 “ 熟读唐诗 三百首 ，不会 写诗也会吟 ”，英语文章 也是 ４教会学生化难为易的技巧 ． 如此 。要 想写好一篇文 章，没有充足 的词 汇量是不行 的 。课文 中的 通过几次月考、模拟考试，我们高三的英语老师通过认真总结，
高三英语微写作作文训练
高三英语微写作作文训练对于高三同学来说英语写作技巧很重要，而素材的积累也不容忽视。
平常的练习也是特别重要的，下面是我给大家带来的高三英语微写作作文训练，欢迎大家阅读参考，我们一起来看看吧!高三英语微写作作文训练1When you hear this topic, you may wonder how dare I can say this! As we all live in 21th century, the information age, we need advertisement as a tool to delivery information from one to another. Undoubtedly, it is more convenient for us to know more about information through advertisements. However, everything has two sides, including advertisements, after you hear what I will say next you will touch the feeling “advertisement is a curse” the same as me.当你听到这个题目的时候，你可能很奇怪我怎么敢这样说!由于我们都生活在二十一世纪，这个信息时代，所以我们需要广告作为传递信息的工具。
毫无疑问，通过广告我们可以更便利了解到的信息。
然而，任何事物都有两面性，这也包括广告，听完我接下来要说的你就会像我一样感受到“广告是诅咒”的感觉。
Please image that you live in a small house where there are fulfilled with various advertisements tapped around the wall, how do you feel in this situation? Of course, it is terrible, isn’t it? Actually, it is a common phenomenon existing around us. As you see, there are some advertisement tapped on our desks and the wall of the teaching building, you can even find them in the toilet. Although it can give us some information, it is true that it leads to low level of beauty of our environment. These advertisements are also called “psoriasis”, which becomes a hot potato in the aspect of environmental governance.想象一下，你住在一个墙上贴满广告的小房子里，在这种状况下，你感觉如何?当然，很可怕的，是不是?实际上，在我们四周这是很普遍的现象。
高三英语作文范文10篇
高三英语作文范文10篇【写作题目】假设你是李华。
你的美国笔友Susan最近收到了某所大学的录取通知书,但由于经济原因准备放弃入学资格。
请根据以下要点给她写一封信,劝说她不要放弃：1.上大学的重要性;2.如何解决所面临的困难。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.信的开头已给出,但不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan,I am sorry to hear that you have decided not to go to college.____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【参考作文】Dear Susan,I am sorry to hear that you have decided not to go to college. I am writing to trying to persuade you not to do that. The reasons are as follows.In short, I hope you can accept the offer from that college.【写作题目】假设你是学生会主席李华，打算邀请交换生 Peter参加你校在本月举行的"创建文明校园"( Build a Civilized Campus)活动。
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连词成句
many tourists, traffic jam There are many tourists and it causes traffic jams.
连词成句
good environment in the suburbs The environment in the suburbs is good.
过渡词语
递进关系 what’s more, besides; in fact; … I don’t want to go skating; besides, the ice is too thin.
过渡词语
因果关系 because, since, as, for… so, therefore, thus, as a result…
过渡词语
概括性词语 in short, in a word; generally speaking; … In a word, it is important for us to learn English.
连句成篇
Dear Editor , Recently ,our class had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. My classmates had different ideas. Some agreed to the idea of moving out. Because they thought there are many tourists and it causes traffic jams. What’s more, the environment in the suburbs is good. But some disagreed. First, it was built in 1906 and is well-known. Moving may cause the death of some animals as well. Yours truly, Li Hua
高三英语
写作训练
二中徐华娣
Main contents
写作指导 实际操练 注意事项
写作指导
Writing suggestions
审题：文体，主体时态和人称； 考虑篇章结构; 确定要点，写出相关英语词语； 根据所列词语，写出句子； 连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和适 当增加细节。
2.赞成/反对迁 agree/disagree to move out 出 3.游客多， 交通堵塞 many tourists, traffic jam
英语词语
4.郊区环境好
good environment in the suburbs
5.建于1906年， built in 1906,well-known 中外闻名
过渡词语
时间顺序 first, second, next, then, finally; at first, in the beginning; after that, afterwards; at last, in the end; … At first, I had a running nose. Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever.
连词成句
建于1906年，中外闻名. It was built in 1906 and is wellknown.
连词成句
Байду номын сангаас
搬迁易造成动物死亡. Moving may cause the death of some animals.
连句成篇
Dear Editor , Recently ,our class had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. My classmates had different ideas. Some agreed to the idea of moving out. There are many tourists and it causes traffic jams. The environment in the suburbs is good. Some disagreed. It was built in 1906 and is well-known. Moving may cause the death of some animals. Yours truly, Li Hua
假设你是李华，最近国内一 家英文报纸正在讨论北京 动物园是否应迁出市区。以 下是你所在班级讨论的情况。 请你给该报写一封信，反映 讨论结果。
赞成迁出：
反对迁出：
1．游客多， 1．建于1906年， 交通堵塞 中外闻名 2．郊区环 2．搬迁易造成动 境好 物死亡
英语词语
1.不同观点 different ideas
6.搬迁易造成动 cause death of the animals 物死亡
连词成句
different ideas They/My classmates have different ideas.
连词成句
agree/disagree to move out They agreed/disagreed to the idea of moving out.
假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京 动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。 请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。 赞成迁出： 反对迁出： 1．游客多，交 1．建于1906年， 通堵塞 中外闻名 2．郊区环境好 2．搬迁易造成动物 死亡
认真审题
文体: 书信 主体时态: 一般过去/现在时 主体人称: 第三人称
篇章结构
Dear Editor , Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about… Yours truly, Li Hua
确定要点
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
不同观点 赞成/反对迁出 游客多，交通堵 塞 郊区环境好 建于1906年，中 外闻名 搬迁易造成动物 死亡