专题4.7.2 概要写作题型解读和技巧点拨(解析版)_1

4.7.2 概要写作跟踪练习

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2019年6月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that's insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.

Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.

So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward." We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."

Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.

第一段提到了一种现象：现在的家长对孩子表扬太多，但太多不真诚的表扬会导致孩子产生惧怕心理；

第二段讲到表扬太少也不好，表扬太少会让孩子觉得不够被重视，成功没意义；

第三段解释了何谓正确的表扬方式：那就是高质而真诚的表扬；

第四段讲到了最重要的是表扬过程而不是结果，它可以让家长更好地认识自己的孩子。还有表扬要基于事实以及孩子为之付出的努力。

从结构上看这四段文字就是：表扬很多不好——表扬很少也不好——要有质量的表扬——表扬过程和努力。

【参考范文】1：

Research found parents should neither praise kids too much nor give them inadequate praise. The former can make kids afraid to try new things, while the latter can make kids not work hard enough.（要点1和2）

While praising kids, parents should pay attention to the quality of it . All in all, when praising kids, be sincere, and focus on the amount of efforts kids are committed to.（要点3和4）【78字】

【参考范文2】Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerate praise to their children, hoping to boost their confidence, but it may produce the opposite effect. However, no praise from parents also does harm to their self-confidence. Therefore, experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for the result. Meanwhile, kids do deserve praise if they strive to do their duty. Anyway, the amount of praise you have depends on how hard they work.【74字】

【参考范文3】：

While social media, like Twitter, has gained in popularity, teachers are wondering whether they can apply it to the classroom. Some claim that it's convenient to extend learning after class and students need to know how to use it appropriately and responsibly. Others, however, fear that using it in class makes it easier for students to get distracted. Additionally, some students hold that they prefer not to mix study with personal life. 【72字】

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In schools and at home, most of US have been scolded(责备) or even got punished for daydreaming. The majority of people say that by daydreaming we waste our time and energy on something unproductive. But many medical studies have shown something different. They’ve stressed the fact that daydreaming works wonders on our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques. In fact, many problems can be easily solved if we daydream.

The top most benefit of daydreaming is that your mood gets the right improvement. By separating