高三英语学写作训练《介绍类文体》PPT课件
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高三英语一轮复习---writing 应用文写作教学课件 (共16张PPT)
应用文写作
要点一:介绍西方文化
• 词 introduce western culture • 句 You should introduce western culture • 升级1 It pays to….. 做….是值得的
It pays to introduce western culture
• 【2018高三模拟】从身边的小事做起 Starting from the small things in daily life is the best policy
要点二:组织多样的活动
• 词 organize various activities • 句 You can organize various activities • 升级1: Doing….. is the best policy 做….是上上之策
It pays to learn some Chinese greetings , which helps us have a better understanding of …….
• 坚持写英文日记
It pays to keep writing English diary , which helps you have a better understanding of English
It pays to keep writing English diary
要点一:介绍西方文化
• 词 introduce western culture • 句 You should introduce western culture • 升级1 It pays to….. 做….是值得的
It pays to introduce western culture , which helps us have a better understanding of English
要点一:介绍西方文化
• 词 introduce western culture • 句 You should introduce western culture • 升级1 It pays to….. 做….是值得的
It pays to introduce western culture
• 【2018高三模拟】从身边的小事做起 Starting from the small things in daily life is the best policy
要点二:组织多样的活动
• 词 organize various activities • 句 You can organize various activities • 升级1: Doing….. is the best policy 做….是上上之策
It pays to learn some Chinese greetings , which helps us have a better understanding of …….
• 坚持写英文日记
It pays to keep writing English diary , which helps you have a better understanding of English
It pays to keep writing English diary
要点一:介绍西方文化
• 词 introduce western culture • 句 You should introduce western culture • 升级1 It pays to….. 做….是值得的
It pays to introduce western culture , which helps us have a better understanding of English
高中英语高三一轮复习:作文-介绍信总论精讲 课件
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2020年全国2卷
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动,请你为班级英语角写一篇 短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括: 1、农场情Байду номын сангаас 2、采摘过程 3、个人感受
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关键词
介绍
Introduce Introduce sb. sth. Introduce sth. to sb.
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我想给你介绍一下我的 女神-刘亦菲
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介绍文体=介绍+文体
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介绍
文体
全文介绍 局部介绍
信体 非信体
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二、介绍文本的分类
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2020年广州实验中学
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom 正在阅读中国四大名著(China’s four great classical novels),他写信与你交流其中你喜欢的角色。请你 给他回信,介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及 原因
应用文
信体
介绍、邀请、建议、申请、咨询 感谢、道歉、求助
其他
留言条、通知、演讲稿/发言稿
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介绍文本考频分布
2020
2019
全国1卷 参赛作文 申请信
2018 建议信
2017 告知信
2016 求助信
2015 约稿
全国2卷 投稿 告知信 通知 邀请信 约稿 邀请信
全国3卷 求助信 邀请信 介绍信 邀请信 道歉信
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介绍文本考频分布
年次及试卷
2020全国一卷 2020全国二卷 2020全国三卷 2019全国一卷 2019全国二卷 2019全国三卷 2018全国一卷 2018全国二卷 2018全国三卷
文体
参赛作文 投稿 求助信 申请信 告知信 邀请信 建议信 通知 介绍信
2020年全国2卷
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动,请你为班级英语角写一篇 短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括: 1、农场情Байду номын сангаас 2、采摘过程 3、个人感受
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关键词
介绍
Introduce Introduce sb. sth. Introduce sth. to sb.
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我想给你介绍一下我的 女神-刘亦菲
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30
介绍文体=介绍+文体
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介绍
文体
全文介绍 局部介绍
信体 非信体
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二、介绍文本的分类
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2020年广州实验中学
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom 正在阅读中国四大名著(China’s four great classical novels),他写信与你交流其中你喜欢的角色。请你 给他回信,介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及 原因
应用文
信体
介绍、邀请、建议、申请、咨询 感谢、道歉、求助
其他
留言条、通知、演讲稿/发言稿
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介绍文本考频分布
2020
2019
全国1卷 参赛作文 申请信
2018 建议信
2017 告知信
2016 求助信
2015 约稿
全国2卷 投稿 告知信 通知 邀请信 约稿 邀请信
全国3卷 求助信 邀请信 介绍信 邀请信 道歉信
/
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介绍文本考频分布
年次及试卷
2020全国一卷 2020全国二卷 2020全国三卷 2019全国一卷 2019全国二卷 2019全国三卷 2018全国一卷 2018全国二卷 2018全国三卷
文体
参赛作文 投稿 求助信 申请信 告知信 邀请信 建议信 通知 介绍信
高三英语复习 作文案例7:介绍信 课件(共18张PPT)
seal (海豹); dolphin(海豚);
Recommendation A sentence to attract more tourists.
Polish your composition according to the self evaluation form.
序 自评标准 号 1 是否覆盖了所有内容要点。 2 是否应用了较多的高级词汇。 3 是否使用了较复杂的语法结构。 4 是否使用了语句间的连接成分,使文章结构紧凑。
Although…,the main attraction is…;
You can see…;
Camelot
To enter a world of …,come to…; If you want to experience…,is the place for you; In one place, you can…;
Look forward to your reply!
Ocean Park
Yours truly, Steven
Writing Task: If you were Sam, write an e-mail in reply to Steven.
1.About 80 words in 12 minutes. e the language to introduce and recommend in the text. 3.It should include:
to introduce
to recommend
Tips: Pay more attention to the language.
Theme Language used to express introduction
高三英语作文《介绍信》(精品课件共36页PPT)
I intend to give you a lecture related to/ concerned with Tang Poetry. Tang Poetry, regarded as a national treasure, precisely reflected the social life of the Tang Dynasty, which, I think, will help you improve your language skills and increase your knowledge about Chinese culture. We’ll appreciate some classic Tang poems. To learn them well, you’d better have a brief understanding about the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will certainly contribute to your learning.
If you have any other question, don’t hesitate to tell me and I would like to have a further discussion with you.
活动项目介绍文体概述
定义: 活动项目介绍就是介绍某个项目,可以介绍一个运动项 目、一个组织、一个活动等。
活动项目介绍常用词块
11. 复杂的背景 complex background
12. 详细地描述…… give a detailed description of…
13. 按照时间/空间顺序 in order of time/space
If you have any other question, don’t hesitate to tell me and I would like to have a further discussion with you.
活动项目介绍文体概述
定义: 活动项目介绍就是介绍某个项目,可以介绍一个运动项 目、一个组织、一个活动等。
活动项目介绍常用词块
11. 复杂的背景 complex background
12. 详细地描述…… give a detailed description of…
13. 按照时间/空间顺序 in order of time/space
高考英语应用文书信类作文书面表达的开头和结尾课件(共30张PPT)
情景说明
封邮件,希望得到学生会的支持与帮助,内容包括:
1. 讲座的时间和地点; 2. 讲座的内容; 3. 希望得到的帮助。
要点 1. 文体:
求助信
邀请函 非 建议信
告知信
重新审题
情景说明 要点
2. 作者身份: 来自中国的交换生 3. 对方身份: 学生会主席 4. 写作背景:
假定你是李华,是一名来自中国的交换生,现在正在美国的一所高中交流 学习。为了让更多的学生了解中国文化,你希望在学校举办一次中国茶文 化讲座,请给学生会主席David写封邮件,希望得到学生会的支持与帮助。
Dear David, I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am
writing in the hope of getting your support (and help) for my idea of giving a lecture about Chinese tea culture.
How are you getting along recently? How’s everything going recently?
认识 ——问候
主动去信
小
不认识 ——自我介绍
结
回信 ——问候
关于自我介绍和问候
3 “写信目的”怎么表达?
普通版:I am writing to do sth.
高级版:I am writing in the hope of doing sth.
Learning that ____, I am writing in the hope of doing sth. Learning that ____, I am writing in an effort to do sth. Learning that ____, I am writing with the purpose of doing sth. Learning that ____, I am more than delighted to do sth.
《高三英语书面表达》课件
Correction method
Read your text aloud to check for inappropriate language or expressions. Consider the reader's perspective and adjust your language accordingly.
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Prepare students for advanced English communication in college and beyond.
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Lecture
Provide students with background knowledge and essential concepts for written English expression.
Common errors and correction methods in written English expression in senior high schoolPractice and Improvement of Written English Expression in Senior High SchoolSimulated Test Questions and Analysis of Written English Expression in Senior High School
Reading and Writing
Read English articles and write summaries or reflections to improve comprehension and expression.
Dictation Practice
Listen to English audio materials and rewrite them, focusing on sentence structure and vocabulary usage.
Read your text aloud to check for inappropriate language or expressions. Consider the reader's perspective and adjust your language accordingly.
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Prepare students for advanced English communication in college and beyond.
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Lecture
Provide students with background knowledge and essential concepts for written English expression.
Common errors and correction methods in written English expression in senior high schoolPractice and Improvement of Written English Expression in Senior High SchoolSimulated Test Questions and Analysis of Written English Expression in Senior High School
Reading and Writing
Read English articles and write summaries or reflections to improve comprehension and expression.
Dictation Practice
Listen to English audio materials and rewrite them, focusing on sentence structure and vocabulary usage.
高考英语应用文写作ppt课件
从结构、内容、语言的视角 02
应对应用文写作
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如何改进你的应用文写作
课件部分内容来源于网络,如有异议侵 权省高考应用文
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英 国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括: 1. 参加者; 2. 时间、地点; 3. 活动:登山、野餐等。 注意:1.词数80字左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
发言稿(演讲稿\致辞) Ladies and gentlemen,/ Fellow students/Boys and girls/…… Thanks for your listening. 报道 征文 (标题) (标题)Contribution Wanted
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课件部分内容来源于网络,如有异议侵 权的话可以联系删除,可编辑版!
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一.应用文的总评分原则与细节
(一)总评分原则 应用文的总分为15分, 这一次的均分去零分卷后为9.1。
• 严谨的行文结构: 第一部分应为问候语和写信目的 第二部分main body 活动内容 第三部分表达对方应邀的愿望 • 完整的内容、丰富的语言和句式
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1. 培养应用文写作逻辑思维。 2. 熟悉应用文篇章结构特点。
3. 牢记应用文语言表达特点。
4. 精选写作题材与范文分析。
课件部分内容来源于网络,如有异议侵 权的话可以联系删除,可编辑版!
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应用文的评分原则、细节和样文赏析
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1. 卷面不洁,字迹不 清
高中英语作文常见4大体裁ppt课件
outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. What’s more, everyone will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
To begin with, a new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, a large number of sports events are able to be held, including PingPong, football as well as basketball. As for me, I like basketball best since it can give me strength to face the difficulties in my life.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. What’s more, everyone will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
To begin with, a new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, a large number of sports events are able to be held, including PingPong, football as well as basketball. As for me, I like basketball best since it can give me strength to face the difficulties in my life.
高三英语一轮复习应用文写作讲解专项课件
2、语言水平欠缺导致语言本身的语用失误 This way have a big problem. I’m honored to write this letter.
3、模板套句影响,不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响,无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
(2023.6全国卷英语)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 说明问题; 2. 提出建议。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文:书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
(2023.11温州一模)假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果,请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助, 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力: lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步:prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
3、模板套句影响,不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响,无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
(2023.6全国卷英语)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 说明问题; 2. 提出建议。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文:书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
(2023.11温州一模)假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果,请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助, 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力: lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步:prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
高考英语作文书信类模板ppt课件
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely Li Ming
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英语书信的常见写作模板: 开头部分:
1. How nice to hear from you again. 2. Let me tell you something about the activity. 3. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.
about___________.(要询问的内容)
First of all, what are ______________?(第一个问
题) Secondly, when will__________________?(第二个
问题) Thirdly, is _________________?(第三个问题)
to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely
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Li Ming
4:请求信Leabharlann Dear___________, I am writing to formally request to___(请求的内容) The reason for __________is that__________(给 出原因).I________, so I ________________(给出细节) I would also like to request _____________(提出 进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I
Yours sincerely Li Ming
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英语书信的常见写作模板: 开头部分:
1. How nice to hear from you again. 2. Let me tell you something about the activity. 3. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.
about___________.(要询问的内容)
First of all, what are ______________?(第一个问
题) Secondly, when will__________________?(第二个
问题) Thirdly, is _________________?(第三个问题)
to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely
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Li Ming
4:请求信Leabharlann Dear___________, I am writing to formally request to___(请求的内容) The reason for __________is that__________(给 出原因).I________, so I ________________(给出细节) I would also like to request _____________(提出 进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I
人教版新高考英语一轮复习写作 说明文 课件(11张ppt)
★指出某事物的消极后果 1.There is no doubt that unless we take effective steps, it is very likely that... 毫无疑问, 除非我们采取有效的措施, 否则很可能会…… 2.Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, chances are that...will put us in danger. 显然, 如果我们不控制这一问题, 很有可能……会导致我们陷入危险的境 地。
3.It is very harmful to us. /It does us much harm. 它对我们很有害。
4.It has more advantages than disadvantages. 它的利大于弊。
5.While this is apparently convenient to...some problems may appear/occur. 虽然这对……来说显然很便利, 但可能会出现一些问题。 6....will have a negative effect on... ……会对……产生负面影响。 7....is a short-sighted solution, which would cause... ……是一个目光短浅的解决方法, 它会导致…… 8.If...take no measures to improve the situation...will be too difficult to deal/cope with. 如果……不采取措施改善这种状况, ……将会变得很难处理。 9.None of these can be achieved if... 如果……这些都是实现不了的。
高三英语作文《介绍信》(课件共36页PPT)
介绍信文体概述
定义: 介绍信包括人物、地点、物品、活动项目、节日、传统文化、图书
影视等方面的介绍。 要求:
根据不同的介绍类型,有不同的文体要求。 通常包括三部分内容:
1. 题干背景 2. 介绍主体 3. 结尾
介绍信写作模板:
Knowing that you show great interest in ________ (题目背景), I
活动项目介绍套用句式
1. 我写信给你是要告诉你这次活动的有关情况。
I am writing to share with you some relevant information concerning/ regarding/ in regard to/ about the activity.
2. 第22届北京国际图书博览会于8月26日至30日在中国国际展览中心举行。
least, ________(介绍的第四方面). 他不仅献身于志愿者工作,而且还全心全意为人民服务。
参考词汇: 阴历the lunar calendar
(注:本段是介绍信的得分要点,
在某人十几/二十几/三十几岁的时候
即介绍主体。也可以不用衔接结构词,直接进行叙述。)
If you have any other question, don’t hesitate to tell me and I
I hope you will enjoy the lesson. Yours, Li Hua
节日介绍文体概述
一、基本内容
Last but not least, _因_____不__(介同绍的第的四方节面). 日具有不同的风俗及特点,介绍节日时一般应包括
要求:此话题属于说明文,通常采用一般现在时来介绍,也可以采用过去时或一般将来时。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
Voice
Language use
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Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
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Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
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Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
Language use
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Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
高考英语一轮复习写作专题讲座课件第15讲说明文.ppt
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注意:词数120左右。 参考词汇:标志 symbol; 鸟巢 Bird's Nest ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
meters, is able to hold more than 90,000 audience members.
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2.从外观看,它犹如树枝搭建的鸟巢,这就解释了这 个名字的由来。 ►Seen from the outside, it resembles a real bird nest made of branches, which explains where its name came from. ►When it is seen from the outside, it resembles a real bird nest made of branches, which explains where its name came from.
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Step 2作文评分标准
• 准确性: 句子的表达要符合语法规范. • 完整性: 题目所列举的信息要表达完整 • 连贯性: 整段话是一个篇章,句子之间要衔
接自然, 能恰当地使用连词, 不是单纯的翻 译句子
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Step 3 展示
第二节 书面表达
假如你是中学生李华,你们班计划组织 一次春游活动并计划邀请外国留学生 Jack参加,请用英语给Jack写一封电子 邮件,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.介绍春游的基本情况(时间,目的地, 交通方式等)
3.提醒需要带的物品
春游:a spring outing
连词成句
With spring coming, the weather is growing warmer and warmer.
Para 1 Our class are planning to have a spring outing and we’d like to invite you to take part in the activity.
As is known, the Lantern Festival is one of Chinese traditional festivals, which falls on February 11th. On that day, there will be many traditional Chinese performances. For one thing, there will be many lanterns of different sizes and kinds on show, which will surely give you a glimpse at Chinese culture. Meanwhile, there are
连词成句
Para 2 Here is what we arranged.(主题句) First,we’ll get together at the gate of school at 8:00. Then we’re going to take a bus to the east lake. Arriving there, we’re going to have various activities, all of which you can join in. Besides, you’d better wear a pair of comfortable shoes and bring a bottle of water and some snacks since we are doing some hiking.
I hope you can come and join us. Look forward to your early reply.
Conclusion基础写作关注要点
5分钟思考 审题-----介绍信 人称:一,二人称
时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
列提纲
Para 1 写信的目的----打算去春游;发出邀请。 Para 2 介绍春游概况
1)时间,目的地,交通方式 2)活动 3)注意事项 Para 3 希望和祝愿。
写出相关的关键词或短语
Para 1 Plan to do invite to do … Para 2 get together at … take a bus to have various activities had better do sth Para 3 hope look forward to
时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
列提纲
Para 1 写信的目的----社区将举行元宵节庆祝 活动,发出邀请。
Para 2 介绍活动内容 1)时间 2)活动 3)见面时间
Para 3 希望和祝愿。
限时训练 部分学生习作面批
范文欣赏
With the approach of the Lantern Festival, there will be a grand celebration at my community, and I hope that you can join me to have a good time.
高三英语写作训练
本节课的教学内容
1.教学重点 ---审题---列提纲---定要点---实训
2.教学难点 表达准确性 表达优美性
3. 活动----现场作文评分
Step1 优美表达背诵
1.三大从句 2. 非谓语 3.常用经典句型 4.常短句结合
Step 2作文评分标准
• 5个档次要求 • 覆盖所有内容要点 • 运用较多的语法结构和词汇 • 具备较强的语言运用能力, • 有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使文章结构
范文欣赏
the lion dances, which highlight the festival, followed by a range of Chinese typical performances. Are you interested?
If so, let meet at the gate of school at 6:00 pm.
Para 3 I hope that you would accept my invitation. looking forward to receiving your reply.
I would be pleased if you can come to take part in our activity.
Step 4 实战演练
第二节 书面表达
假设你是李华,请你给教Cathy写一封 邮件邀请她一起参观你所在社区将在元 宵节举办的庆祝活动,内容包括:
1.时间:2017年2月11日; 2.活动内容:看花灯,舞狮子,民俗表演 3. 约定时间 元宵节:Lantern Festival
5分钟思考 审题-----介绍信 人称:一,二人称
Step 2作文评分标准
• 准确性: 句子的表达要符合语法规范. • 完整性: 题目所列举的信息要表达完整 • 连贯性: 整段话是一个篇章,句子之间要衔
接自然, 能恰当地使用连词, 不是单纯的翻 译句子
衡水中学印刷体
8
10
13
Chinglish1518 Nhomakorabea20
要点全;但句子质量平平,错误 相对少。
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Step 3 展示
第二节 书面表达
假如你是中学生李华,你们班计划组织 一次春游活动并计划邀请外国留学生 Jack参加,请用英语给Jack写一封电子 邮件,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.介绍春游的基本情况(时间,目的地, 交通方式等)
3.提醒需要带的物品
春游:a spring outing
连词成句
With spring coming, the weather is growing warmer and warmer.
Para 1 Our class are planning to have a spring outing and we’d like to invite you to take part in the activity.
As is known, the Lantern Festival is one of Chinese traditional festivals, which falls on February 11th. On that day, there will be many traditional Chinese performances. For one thing, there will be many lanterns of different sizes and kinds on show, which will surely give you a glimpse at Chinese culture. Meanwhile, there are
连词成句
Para 2 Here is what we arranged.(主题句) First,we’ll get together at the gate of school at 8:00. Then we’re going to take a bus to the east lake. Arriving there, we’re going to have various activities, all of which you can join in. Besides, you’d better wear a pair of comfortable shoes and bring a bottle of water and some snacks since we are doing some hiking.
I hope you can come and join us. Look forward to your early reply.
Conclusion基础写作关注要点
5分钟思考 审题-----介绍信 人称:一,二人称
时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
列提纲
Para 1 写信的目的----打算去春游;发出邀请。 Para 2 介绍春游概况
1)时间,目的地,交通方式 2)活动 3)注意事项 Para 3 希望和祝愿。
写出相关的关键词或短语
Para 1 Plan to do invite to do … Para 2 get together at … take a bus to have various activities had better do sth Para 3 hope look forward to
时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
列提纲
Para 1 写信的目的----社区将举行元宵节庆祝 活动,发出邀请。
Para 2 介绍活动内容 1)时间 2)活动 3)见面时间
Para 3 希望和祝愿。
限时训练 部分学生习作面批
范文欣赏
With the approach of the Lantern Festival, there will be a grand celebration at my community, and I hope that you can join me to have a good time.
高三英语写作训练
本节课的教学内容
1.教学重点 ---审题---列提纲---定要点---实训
2.教学难点 表达准确性 表达优美性
3. 活动----现场作文评分
Step1 优美表达背诵
1.三大从句 2. 非谓语 3.常用经典句型 4.常短句结合
Step 2作文评分标准
• 5个档次要求 • 覆盖所有内容要点 • 运用较多的语法结构和词汇 • 具备较强的语言运用能力, • 有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使文章结构
范文欣赏
the lion dances, which highlight the festival, followed by a range of Chinese typical performances. Are you interested?
If so, let meet at the gate of school at 6:00 pm.
Para 3 I hope that you would accept my invitation. looking forward to receiving your reply.
I would be pleased if you can come to take part in our activity.
Step 4 实战演练
第二节 书面表达
假设你是李华,请你给教Cathy写一封 邮件邀请她一起参观你所在社区将在元 宵节举办的庆祝活动,内容包括:
1.时间:2017年2月11日; 2.活动内容:看花灯,舞狮子,民俗表演 3. 约定时间 元宵节:Lantern Festival
5分钟思考 审题-----介绍信 人称:一,二人称