话题7 人际沟通

话题7 人际沟通

例：生活是如此的美好，人生有无尽的欢乐，但也有诸多的烦恼。作为中学生的你，最大的烦恼是什么？你打算如何去解决？请你以“My Biggest Problem”为题目，写一篇英语短文。

[写作要求]

1．文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名；

2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

[参考词汇]pressure压力；argue争吵；fight打架；compare...with...与……比较；communicate...with...与……交流；can’t stop talking唠叨；get on with和睦相处；understand 理解；computer games电脑游戏；take after-school classes上课外辅导班

【写作指导】

细读所给提示，提取以下信息：

1．作为中学生的你，最大的烦恼是什么？你打算如何去解决？不能遗漏任何一点。

2．写的是关于烦恼及其解决办法，话题比较贴近实际，考生按照自己实际情况，以第一人称来写。写最大的烦恼是什么用一般现在时；写打算如何去解决用一般将来时。

【拟定提纲】

My Biggest Problem

As middle school students，we have a lot of happiness，❸but we also have many problems.For me，I have too much homework.I’m not allowed to use mobile phone or play computer games.My parents often compare me with other children and so on.But my biggest problem is from my parents’argument.These days，my parents argue and fight a lot because of doing chores.❸When they argue，it’s like a big，black cloud hanging over our home.I’m worried about them and afraid of losing my family very much.❶What_should_I_do?

❸After thinking twice，I decide to help my parents.❷Firstly，I’ll tell them my feelings and communicate with them.❷Secondly，I’ll try my best to do more housework ❸so_that they can have more time to relax and sit down to have a good communication.

❹I’m_sure my parents will get on with each other soon.I_believe we’ll have a happy family.，

❶What should I do？“我应该怎么办？”此问句的运用使文章第一段和第二段衔接自然，语意通顺，并起到承上启下的作用。

❷Firstly“第一”，Secondly“第二”的使用，使文章条理清晰。

❸but“但是”，when“当……时候”，after“在……之后”，so that“以至于”，这些连

词展示了作者较强的语言功底，也增加了文章句式的多样化。

❹I’m sure...，I believe...这两个主从复合句，表明作者对未来幸福的期待。