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Unit4 写作课课件课件-高中英语人教版(2019)选择性必修第二册

第三步句式升级 1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1 _O_n__J_u_l_y__7_，__m_y__p_a_r_e_n_t_s_a_n_d__I_t_o_o_k__a__b_u_s_t_o__L_e_s_h_a_n_，__S_ic_h_u__a_n_ _P_r_o_v_i_n_c_e，__w__h_i_ch__i_s _f_a_m_o_u_s__fo_r__th_e__G_i_a_n_t_S_t_o_n_e_B__u_d_d_h_a_._______ 2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3 _L_o_o_k_i_n_g__u_p_a_t__th_e__la_r_g_e__h_e_a_d_a_n_d__d_o_w__n_a_t_t_h_e__la_r_g_e_f_e_e_t_，__I_f_el_t_ _I_w__a_s_s_o_s_m__a_ll_. __________________________________________
_G__iv_e_n___a_n_o_t_h_e_r__c_h_a_n_c_e_，___I__a_m___b_o_u_n__d__t_o__p_a_y___a__v_i_si_t__t_o_ _L_e_s_h_a_n__a_g_a_i_n_.__________________________________________
5.在黄昏时刻，我们返程。
_A_t__d_u_s_k_，__w__e_m__a_d_e__o_u_r_w__a_y__b_a_c_k_.__________________________
6.我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。
_W__e__w_e_r_e_a_l_l_t_ir_e_d_，__b__u_t_o_u_r__tr_i_p__to__L_e_s_h_a_n__w_a_s__r_e_a_ll_y_u_n__fo_r_g_e_t_t_able _a_n_d__p_l_e_a_s_a_n_t_. ____________________________________________

公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件

a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless

高中英语记叙文写作教学课件(共40张PPT)

meeting to discuss it.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.

高中英语写作课教学ppt课件

2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.

高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件

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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句：感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语时：要补充主语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4：奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。

人教高中英语必修3Unit5写作课件(共26张PPT)

famous for
population
climate
resources
Located in the North America, Canada is the second largest country in the world，larger than the United States. It covers a total area of 9.98 million square kilometers with a population of about 35 million in 2013. It is mainly a cold country in winter, where temperature falls below freezing point throughout most of the area with only the south western coast having a relatively mild climate. Its capital is Ottawa and Toronto is one of the largest cities. Much of the country is covered by forests, so this country is rich in forestry . Also well known for its fishing and wildlife, Canada attracts the tourists from all over the world to enjoy its charming scenery. 划出介绍地点时常用的词句
高分作文要求：（1）书写美观，卷面整洁；（2）信息内容完整，句子结构; （3）篇章结构连贯。

高中英语作文 PPT课件图文

• Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• Sentence pattern: • They say/believe/hold the opinion… that…. • Eg: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康
英语写作讲解
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）
• 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）
• Sentence pattern:
表示观点对比类写作套语
A.总起: Opinions are divided on this question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes

新教材2023年高中英语Unit2 SectionⅣWriting课件新人教版选择性必修第二册

[常用表达] 1．话题词汇 (1)consider考虑 (2)regret后悔；遗憾 (3)determine决定 (4)intend意图 (5)prepare准备 (6)I am convinc best尽某人最大努力 (8)you are supposed to你应当…… (9)inform sb. of sth.通知某人某事 (10)in my opinion依我看
⑧Why not do...为什么不…… ⑨I'd like to suggest that...我想要建议…… ⑩If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… ⑪As is known to all...众所周知…… ⑫What's more，try to...更重要的是，试一试…… ⑬Last but not least，you should...最后但同样重要的是，你应当……
[佳作展示] Dear Tom，
I'm glad to know you want to study abroad to experience a different
culture. Generally speaking，it is beneficial. On the one hand，you can walk out of the comfort zone，forcing
think is also my advantage.I'll appreciate it if you can consider me.
Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
精品展示假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom计划出国留学，写信询问你的意见，请你给他写封回信。内容包括： ①写信目的； ②分析利弊； ③表达自己的观点。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________

高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料

表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。

高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)

表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系，根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.

高中英语写作课ppt课件

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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
next to our natural resources. 4) I fleofrtgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokste us much money to buy one.
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改错
I∧t built in the 1980s. was
Since the program of reducing learning load was
introduced, my life, however, has become much more
interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop
Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I
attended school and had classes the whole day. In the
evening，I was often forced to do my boring
homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.
besides; However ; because ; Therefore
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Unit3 Writing 课件-2022-2023学年高中英语人教版(2019)选择性必修第二册

第二步遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1.消息传来说 2.在我看来 3.与……有联系 4.在于 5.消费；吃；喝 6.由……组成 7.大量的 8.促成；导致
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02பைடு நூலகம்
写作实践
假如你是李华，你的朋友王力目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已，来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括： 1.很少吃甜食和垃圾食品； 2.饮食中蔬菜、水果居多，有少量肉、蛋和奶制品； 3.一日三餐有规律。注意：
1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.这使你沮丧。 _T_h_i_s__m_a_k_e_s__y_o_u__d_e_p_r_e_s_s_e_d_._______________________________
3.在我看来，你的不健康饮食与你的问题有密切联系。 _F_r_o_m__m_y__p_o_i_n_t__o_f__v_i_e_w__，__y_o_u_r__u_n_h_e_a_l_t_h_y__d_i_e_t__i_s__c_l_o_s_e_l_y__ _a_s_s_o_c_i_a_t_e_d__w_i_t_h__y_o_u_r__p_r_o_b_l_e_m_.___________________________

高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice

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Finally ;
To make matters worse ; In addition
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As far as I’m concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _B_e_s_i_d_e_s, the whole society should put great emphasis on children’s education __b_e_c_a_u_s_e they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.
next to our natural resources. 4) I fleofrtgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokste us much money to buy one.
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I∧t built in the 1980s. was
sentence patterns
(词语的准确运用和句式编the following paragraphs:
I'm very pleased to tell you the changes of my life
since the reduction of learning load was brought in.
children out of school. The reasons can be
listed as follow. T_o__b_e_g_in__w_i_th__, most families are too poor
to send their children to school. _A__s_a__re_s_u_lt_,
In our city ,the public order is better than∧other places.that of
Buy a cellphone is too expensive.
stay up; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 p.m.
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
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使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words
Now in the country areas, there are many
besides; However ; because ; Therefore
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Avoid Chinglish! 1) Traffic in Shanghai is tohoeacvryo.wded. 2) There hisas a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though the transport is good ，but it fades
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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
Since the program of reducing learning load was
introduced, my life, however, has become much more
interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop
* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed
_F_i_n_a_ll_y_, some children are not interested in their studies. _T__o_m__a_k_e_m_a_t_te_r_s_w__o_rs_e___, some wouldn’t like to go to school.
In my opinion;
they have no choice but to stay at home and
make money.
as a result;
In addition ;
To begin with ; However
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_I_n_a_d_d_i_ti_o_n_, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they don’t let them go to school.
in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure
time. After lunch, I watch TV, read stories and look
through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I
Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I
attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening，I was often forced to do my boring
homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.