2017初三二模作文模板汇编

2016-2017学年初三二模写作

重分析静安、虹口、黄浦、浦东、奉贤这5个区的作文范例，并罗列出学生写作可以直接用的开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意。

94.Write at least 60words about the topic “______,a new way of life!”(请以

“______，一种崭新的生活方式”为题，从以下图片中选择其中一张图片，举例表

述你的思考和理由，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）

Weixin Mobike

Points for reference:

1.Which way do you choose to write about

2.Why do you think it a new way of life

3.Could you give some suggestions in order to make better use of it

【参考范文】

As we all know, we are enjoying the convenience of our new ways of life, including mobike. We can easily find a public bike everywhere in Shanghai now and we never worry about where to park it. Riding a bicycle does good to our health and the environment as well. However, We should use a public bike properly. We can't use it if we're younger than 12.We should take good care of it instead of damaging it. We should park it in a parking spot after using it.

Public bikes bring us a lot of advantages, so we should protect them so that they can serve us longer.

94. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My joy of living”（以“我的生活乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

生活有艰辛，也有乐趣，你的生活乐趣是什么？你为何觉得这是你的乐趣所在？你是怎么想的？怎么做的？

【参考范文】

There is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we should develop a way of joy in our daily life. In my opinion, my joy of life is to listen to light music. Whenever I am stuck in trouble or feel depressed, I will spare myself some time to listen to light music because it can help me adjust myself and make me calm down again. I think only in this way can I deal with the problems I’m faced with better or treat other people more properly.

Above all, that’s my joy of living and I think that you can have a try next time. I hope you will get benefit from it.

94. In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “… is a good habit”.（以“……是好习惯”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

一个好的习惯会让我们终身受益。什么是好习惯？请分享你的一个好习惯，说说你是怎么养成的？它给你带来哪些好处。请结合生活实际，谈谈你的体验或想法。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

【参考范文】

Saving Money Is a Good Habit

Speaking of good habits, saving money is undoubtedly one of them. Instead of spending tomorrow’s money, I prefer to save money. In order to learn to cut down unnecessary cost, I will think twice before spending money on those clothes that may not suit myself, which benefits me a lot. First of all, the sense of saving money helps me arrange my daily life properly. What’s more, saving money, to a certain extent, means I can handle emergency quickly.In addition, saving money is not only a traditional virtue but a useful strategy in life. Just as the old saying, a penny saved is a penny earned, so saving money makes me feel safe about tomorrow.

94.Write at least 60 words about the topic “I enjoy (reading, traveling, doing sports...)”

请以“我喜欢做……”为题目，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯。

请在答题纸上补充完整题目

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）Use the following as your reference:

＞What do you enjoy doing

＞Why do you enjoy doing it

＞What can you get/learn from it

【参考范文】