写作技巧教案

写作技巧教案

初中英语写作技巧指导（一）

方法一:善用高级词汇

Which is better?

1 我喜欢轻音乐，它可以使我放松。

A I like quiet music. It can make me relaxed.

B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.

2 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。

A It rained heavily. So he didn ’t catch the school bus.

B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.

3 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。

A She is very young. She can ’t carry the heavy box.

B She is too young to carry the heavy box.

4 我们必须采取措施来拯救地球，这样才能过上更好的生活。

A We must do something to help save the earth. Then we will have a better

life.

B The more we do to help save our planet, the better life we will have.

1. The weather was good, and our journey was comfortable.

Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man.

We all think he is such a great man that…

3.The students there needn’t pay for their books .

Books are free for the students there.

方法二:活用多种句型 健康很重要。在学习和

工作的压力日趋增大的

今天，会休息的人才会

有健康的身体。人们是

如何度过假期的呢？国

际健康组织对此作了一

次调查，右图是他们此

次的调查结果。根据你

所得的信息，请为国际

健康组织写一篇完整的

调查报告,并提倡大家

进行假日休闲。

审(search)travel stay at home visit friends or parents work 牛刀小试

（一）审

（二）列（List ）

根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。

•如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲

• A lot of people travel.

•Some people stay at home.

•Some other people visit friends or parents.

• A few people work.

•Enjoy your vacation.

（三）加(add)

•加首尾，使结构完整。

•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮

•How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）

• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

•Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

（the ending）

（四）连(connect)

•How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.

•According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home.

They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.

•Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

（五）美(beautify)

We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.

According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.

Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work.

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

图表类作文常用语：

1.如图所示或从图表中我们可以清楚的看到……

It can be seen from the table/chart/diagram…that…

As is shown in the chart/table/diagram…

It’s clear from the table/chart/diagram that…

From the above table…, we can see clearly…

2.Many students, about 42%, like to study English in Australia.