英语作文校本教材

英语作文辅导资料

English Writing

一、例题精析

书面表达（满分25分）题目：

假设你叫王平，你了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青少年问题的组织。请用英语给Happy Teens的主席Mr. Holmes 写一封电子邮件，介绍同学李强加入他们的组织。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

要点：

1.李强是九年级二班的尖子生。

2.正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。

3.有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。

4.几天前来向我征求建议。

5.你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。

要求：

1.语句通顺，意思连贯。

2.包含以上所有要点。

3.词数80左右。

Dear Mr. Holmes,

I have a friend named Li Qiang.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ___________________________

I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club.

Yours,

Wang Ping

【题目分析】

（一）审题可得

1.文体：写信的应用文

2.时态：一般现在时为主，还有现在完成时和一般过去时。

3.要点把握：

1)李强是九年级二班的尖子生。

2)正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。

3)有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。

4)几天前来向我征求建议。

5)你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。

6)我了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解

决青少年问题的组织。

7)我想介绍同学李强加入你们的组织。

（二）要点组织

1)李强是九年级二班的尖子生。He is a top student of Class Two Grade

Nine.

2)正直、乐于助人，已帮助两名贫困儿童重返学校。

He is an honest boy and he always helps others. / He is honest and helpful.

He has helped two poor children to returned to school to study.

3)有时因父母要求太严格而感到闷闷不乐。

Sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him.

4)几天前来向我征求建议。He came to ask me for advice a few days ago.

5)你鼓励他加入Happy Teens，这样就可以开心起来。

I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. He can be happy again.

6)我了解到Happy Teens是一个专门通过开展丰富多彩的活动来解决青

少年问题的组织。

I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization to solve the youth problems through all kinds of activities.

I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth

problems through all kinds of activities.

7)我想介绍同学李强加入你们的组织。I want to introduce him to join

our organization.

（三）分析题目，写好开头和结尾，恰当增加连接句子和连接词，使文章一气呵成。

Dear Mr. Holmes,

I have a friend named Li Qiang. He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine. And all of us love him very much. Why? Because he is an honest boy and he always helps others. As we all know, he has helped two poor children to returned to

school to study. However, sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him. We all are unhappy.And he is very worried. So, he came to ask me for advice a few days ago. These days, I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities. So I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. As result, I introduce him to join the organization in order that he can be happy again. I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club.

Yours,

Wang Ping

二、中考考点要求

1.根据中文提示，写一篇70-100字左右的英文表达。(尽量不要超过

150个单词)

2.内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，

书写工整。

三、作文七注意

（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意

1.审清文体

2. 选准人称

3. 用好时态

4. 突出要点

（二）避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。