Guided Writing导学案
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Guided Writing
Step1: Lead-in
Step2: Writing
假设你是王林,你的好友李明想加入学校足球队,但是他的父亲不同意,认为踢足球会影响学习。请你根据以下提示给李明的父亲写一封信,帮助李明说服他的父亲。
理由:
1. 踢足球可以增强体质,使精力充沛。
2. 踢足球能增强自信心。
3. 踢足球能培养团队精神,有助于结交更多的朋友。Step3: Writing process
Review:How to write a letter of advice?
________ parts
2.词句推敲
(1)____________________
(2)__________________
(3)培养团队精神____________________
(4)结交朋友___________________
(5)踢足球能培养团队精神,有助于结交更多的朋友。
一般表达:
高级表达:
3.妙笔成篇
Dear Uncle Li,
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_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________附:建议信写作常用表达
A.建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. I am very glad to hear that you want to…
2. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter.
3.I am writing to you for the purpose of (为了)...
4. I am writing to share some advice with you on...
5. It’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on...
6. I’m writing to offer you some advice about...
B. 建议信第二段常用句式(提出建议,阐述理由)
1. Firstly, why not…? If you do this…
Secondly, you should /can … Then/ That way , …
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if … By doing this , …
Last but not least, …
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
3. I would like to suggest/recommend that...
4.When it comes to(提到)such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should ...
5.As to(关于)..., I suggest that you should....
C. 建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful.
3. I believe if you follow my advice, you’ ll ......
4. I believe, with your determination(决心), you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
5. Please let me know without hesitation(毫不犹豫)if you need any help.
6. In my personal opinion, it would be helpful/ useful for you to take the following advice.
4.写作评价
(1)自我评价
学生自我评价表