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How necessary it is to help others. =endless/oceans of seem, appear 等表示“似乎〞、“好似〞等意思的动词；
• 能到达上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的 They started learning English three years ago.
如何逐步培养和 提升英语写作能力？
写作能力的引导
词汇短语 句子
篇章
词汇短语
词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时也是写作的根 底和源泉。
词汇短语“攻关秘笈 〞
children; believe…)〕 词汇的巧妙记忆。 .1
• 其次就是卷面分。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这 个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
• 据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个局部逐项打分的， 而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分〞，然后 再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分局部。因此，这个“印 象分〞就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了 自己的分数。所以如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要 写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改 较少。
We are planning an outing.
高分。 Thank you for listening .
语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.
四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分)：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言根本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分)：表达根本清楚，行文根本连贯，语言有
少量错误。 • 第三档(9—12分)：语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 • 第二档(5—8分)：能写明根本要点；语言错误多，影响意思
表达。 • 第一档(0—4分)：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，不知所云
• 能到达上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的 They started learning English three years ago.
如何逐步培养和 提升英语写作能力？
写作能力的引导
词汇短语 句子
篇章
词汇短语
词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时也是写作的根 底和源泉。
词汇短语“攻关秘笈 〞
children; believe…)〕 词汇的巧妙记忆。 .1
• 其次就是卷面分。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这 个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
• 据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个局部逐项打分的， 而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分〞，然后 再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分局部。因此，这个“印 象分〞就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了 自己的分数。所以如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要 写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改 较少。
We are planning an outing.
高分。 Thank you for listening .
语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.
四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分)：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言根本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分)：表达根本清楚，行文根本连贯，语言有
少量错误。 • 第三档(9—12分)：语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 • 第二档(5—8分)：能写明根本要点；语言错误多，影响意思
表达。 • 第一档(0—4分)：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，不知所云
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语写作指导I love…… 指导PPT课件(30PPT)
always ready to help me . I love my best friend because she is very considerate and always ready to help me. I love my best friend who is very considerate and always ready to help me.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
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2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8
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4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ，掌握 一定的 技巧， 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来， 出语不 俗的效 果，感 动自己 ，征服 读者。
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5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目，源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料，加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解，充 满了理 性的光 辉，于 平凡中 见奇倔 ，也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ，很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
6
2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8
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4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ，掌握 一定的 技巧， 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来， 出语不 俗的效 果，感 动自己 ，征服 读者。
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5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目，源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料，加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解，充 满了理 性的光 辉，于 平凡中 见奇倔 ，也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ，很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
中考英语作文指导ppt课件
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
完整版ppt课件
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根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
完整版ppt课件
7
根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章，规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项： 1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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2. List some keywords about opinions.
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2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
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correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
中考写作指导课公开课课件
How to write a good composition? 中考英语写作指导课学习目标：1、审准主题，把握要点，确定时态、人称2、充实细节，step1：Lead－in(2minutes)T：Do you find it difficult to write a good article in English in the test?What problems do you have when you write an article?SS:T: Well, through this class, I hope you can take an active part in it and try your best to learn how to write a good article.Step2: Before-writingTask 1 Think about what makes a good article （2分钟）T: When we talk about a good article, what do you think makes a good article?Ss: ...T: Well, in general, a good article should at least have good language, good organization and good content. And of the three, which do you think is the most important?SS:…T: Yes, that is its content.Task 2 T:So, when we start to write, the first step and the most important step is to read the requirements carefully and decide what we should write about. Now, let’s look at the two exercises. You see, they are of similar topic, but not the same theme. Let’s compare them and find out the key points of each article and decide on the topic sentence for each one.Activity 2提供写作支架Mind-map思维导图，搭建写作内容支架（5分钟）T: From this ad, we know that food waste has become a serious problem and it is necessary for us to save things to protect the environment. So when we talk about saving things at school, what aspects can we include?Ss：some facts about wasting things at schoolthe importance of saving thingshow to save things/ things we can do to save things/ the purpose of doing certain things Activity 3Play a game: Which team is the best greener?环保先锋（5分钟）T: Yes, that’s right. With these aspects, the article is half done. And how good this article is depends on the details. So let’s work together and think of as many things we can do to save things as possible. And see which team is the best greener.Ss: remember to turn off the light/ computer when we leave the room; write our exercises on both sides of the paper; not to ask for more food than we need; don’t throw away any food after meals…[设计意图]先让学生观看一则央视关于食品浪费的公益广告，引出话题, 通过问题的引导学生讨论话题的相关内容，旨在让学生从宏观上思考该话题所包含的主要内容，搭建写作语言支架。
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!
六、誊写
（2004年陕西省中考试题） VII. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
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Steps of writing necessary
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一篇优秀的书面表达应该是：
语意要合情合理 过渡要自然顺畅 段落要清晰明了 语句要有简有繁 语法要恰当正确 语言要地道顺畅 书法要规范整洁
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Homework
Title:__M_y__h_o_bb_i_e_s__
Beginning: I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing
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relax
study better
get some knowledge
keep healthy
have a rest
have fun
get good grades
…
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仿写练习：
It is __n_e_c_e_s__s_a_r_y__for_h_i_m_ to ____r_e_a_d_b__o_o_k_s___________.
study English
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扩写练习：
He is a boy. He is a __h__e_a_l_th__y___ boy.
He is a _h_e_a_l_th_y____ boy who_l_ik_e_s__p_l_a_y_in_g__s_p_o_r_ts__.
I like music. I like__d_a_n_c_e__ music. I like__d_a_n_c_e__ music that__c_a_n__m_a_k_e__m_e__e_x_c_it_e_d_.
晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻 辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了 beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了 attractive，charming，catching（迷人的） 等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些 高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得
到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写 英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯
healthy he is! I hope to be him one day!
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Sentence connection
• Sentence
passage
• (根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤写出每一部 分的具体内容，用关联词把各部分连起来 成文）
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层次
过渡
• 逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。
转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验
的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因
为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
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文采
• 亮点：当我们将前面都做得很完美的时候 也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一 等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。
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• 大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写 人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清
• 第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃4顿 饭，He has four meals everyday! 详举吃的是 什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
• 第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但 请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可 以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and
最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结
的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second,
third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，
如first of all(首先)，in addition,
what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)
，in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。
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中考英语写作指导课
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中考英语的写作
教学目标：
A 组学生了解公式法作文的框架，并 能学写简单的句子，逐渐连句成文
B 组学生要求掌握公式法作文的框 架。，并能按规定要求结合公式法写作
文。
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优秀的 文章
布局
层次 过渡
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• cross-questions(审题） Person (人称） Style(体裁） Tense (时态）
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• 加谚语
文采
加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法
Joining the English club is a good way to study English
As the saying goes :Practice
makes perfect. So Joining the
English club is a good way to
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仿写练习：
She always_l_is_t_e_n_s_t_o__s_o_m_e__m_u__s_ic___ to _re_l_a_x___目_的_______ because___m_u__s_ic__is__fa_n_t_a_s_ti_c__. 原因
Miss Cool Mr. Ball
It is __d_a_n_g_e_r_o_u_s_ for children to play in the street.
difficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strange dangerous/difficult/wonderful/possible impossible/unbelievable/unexpected…
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布局
中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地中 考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。因为这种结构 十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人 一目了然。
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• 三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山.不超过2 句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接 说 XQ is really strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。