写作中常见的错误
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词法错误
1、冠词错误 When passing the door, smell of delicious dishes will come into your nostrils（鼻孔）. (the smell) Composition course, as a creative course, requires us to create rather than to imitate only. (The composition course)
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句法错误
1． 串句 （run-on sentences） 2． 破句 （fragmentary sentences） 3． 赘句 （wordy sentences/ redundancy） 4． 修饰语错位 （modifiers in wrong position） 5． 悬垂修饰语（Dang1ing Modifiers） 6． 结构不平行（Non-parallelism） 7． 主谓不一致 （subject-verb disagreement）
写作中稍不注意就会出现这种现象。避免方法 如下： 1） 避免同义词的重复，应择其一 industrious and hard-working, buy and purchase, unbelievable and incredible; 2） 避免不必要的修饰语 (new) innovations, (very) perfect, kind (in nature) 3） 避免不必要的副词 repeat (again), return (back), continue (on), (still) remain 4） 避免同义连词重复，删去后者 in order that…and (so that)…, since…and (because)…
词法错误
2、名词单复数错误 He got a good mark at school. (good marks) Human being has another instinct. (Human beings have)
词法错误
3、形容词错误 Shanghai is going to be a financial and economical center. (economic) If all ingredients are mixed properly the soup should taste deliciously. (delicious)
改正串句的方法主要有四种： 1） 分成两个句子 English is a required course in most colleges. A student must pass it before he earns his degree. 2) 用并列连词and, but, or 或nor 等连接两个句子. 这时须在并列连 词之前加逗号 English is a required course in most colleges, and a student must pass it before he earns his degree. 3) 用分号连接两个句子 English is a required course in most colleges；a student must pass it before he earns his degree. 4）改成复合句：将其中一个句子变成另一个句子的从句 Since English is a required course in most colleges， a student must pass it before he earns his degree.
词法错误
6、介词错误 The students spend so much time to memorize the new words. (in memorizing) He is independent from his parents. (of )
汉化英语
很多同学受汉语思维影响，写出的虽然是英语句子，但却是汉语的 表达方式，没有考虑到英语的表达习惯，没有使用英语的句型、结 构，这样的错误是大家在学习写作时，一定要注意克服的。 下面是一些汉化英语句子，你能把它们改成符合英语表达方式的 句子吗？ The main reasons for the change have five points. After four years, they graduated from the university. Smoking cigarettes will do harm to our body. If a student only has knowledge of natural science, he will become a one-legged man when he comes out of university doors. Now is an age of information. How do they think of this novel? What is the price of the coat? The problem has two reasons.
常用的改正方法如下: 1) 把破句变成另一个完整句子的一部分。这时，标 点符号要做相应的变化，而破句的第一个字母应该成 小写字母： In ten seconds I made my decision---a decision that changed the next seven years of my life. 2）把破句变成一个完整句子，加进必要的句子成分； 或破句变成原来完整句子的从句： In ten seconds I made my decision. It was a decision that changed the next seven years of my life. If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to college, I don’t think money should stop him, even though in some cases it does.
赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只要一、二个 赘句 词，却用了冗长的词组或者从句。
Let me make one thing perfectly clear and that one thing is that one always want my readers to get the point of what I want to say immediately when they read my paper. 可该为：I always want my readers to get my point.
词法错误
5、代词错误 Anyone who doesn’t understand the lesson should ask their teacher to explain it. (his) People have tried to fight against the influence of TV commercials, it often proves useless. (but this effort) If one wants to excel in mathematics, you should do a lot of exercises. (he)
破句是串句的另一个极端---把句子的一部分当成 破句 一个句子。 In ten seconds I made my decision. A decision that changed the next seven years of my life. If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to college, I don’t think money should stop him. Even though in some cases it does.
词法错误
4、动词错误 He should go to that meeting but he failed to do so. (should have gone ) I have being studying English for five years but still not good at it. (…have been studying) The flood made great damage to the village. (…caused/did) My parents have always hoped me to become a teacher. (…hoped that I would become a teacher)
所谓串句,是指两个或多个句子串在一起,误当成一个句子。串句的表 所谓串句 现形式主要有三种
1） 两个完整句子只用逗号隔开 English is a required course in most colleges， a student must pass it before he earns his degree. 2) 两个完整句子不适当地用连词and连接 I intend to go with your brother and you may do as you please. 3) 两个完整句子串在一起 Students should be careful of punctuation trouble will result if they are careless.
(1) A. It is difficult to make an estimation of how much money it would cost. B. It is difficult to estimate its cost. (2) A. The time for learning is the time of youth. B. Youth is the time for learning. (3) A. He had the entire control of the whole trade. B. He had the control of the whole trade. (4) A. The process was performed in two steps. The first of these consisted of drying the sample, and the second consisted of weighing it. B. The process was performed in two steps: drying the sample and weighing it. (5) A. We find the situation that exists at the moment intolerable. B. We find the existing situation intolerable. (6) A. I think the time has come for us to leave. B. I think it is time to leave.
1) 2) 3) 4)
5) 6) 7) 8)
逻辑错误
1) While it cannot be denied that there are problems that need to be overcome, the project is expected to be a failure. (success) 2) Nothing of value was found; furthermore, the numerous items which were brought to the surface proved to be of great interest. (however) 3) Thanks to his hard work, he was rejected from that university. (In spite of ) 4) Recognizing who the customer was, the manager was most apologetic and praised the shop-assistant. (criticized)
1、冠词错误 When passing the door, smell of delicious dishes will come into your nostrils（鼻孔）. (the smell) Composition course, as a creative course, requires us to create rather than to imitate only. (The composition course)
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句法错误
1． 串句 （run-on sentences） 2． 破句 （fragmentary sentences） 3． 赘句 （wordy sentences/ redundancy） 4． 修饰语错位 （modifiers in wrong position） 5． 悬垂修饰语（Dang1ing Modifiers） 6． 结构不平行（Non-parallelism） 7． 主谓不一致 （subject-verb disagreement）
写作中稍不注意就会出现这种现象。避免方法 如下： 1） 避免同义词的重复，应择其一 industrious and hard-working, buy and purchase, unbelievable and incredible; 2） 避免不必要的修饰语 (new) innovations, (very) perfect, kind (in nature) 3） 避免不必要的副词 repeat (again), return (back), continue (on), (still) remain 4） 避免同义连词重复，删去后者 in order that…and (so that)…, since…and (because)…
词法错误
2、名词单复数错误 He got a good mark at school. (good marks) Human being has another instinct. (Human beings have)
词法错误
3、形容词错误 Shanghai is going to be a financial and economical center. (economic) If all ingredients are mixed properly the soup should taste deliciously. (delicious)
改正串句的方法主要有四种： 1） 分成两个句子 English is a required course in most colleges. A student must pass it before he earns his degree. 2) 用并列连词and, but, or 或nor 等连接两个句子. 这时须在并列连 词之前加逗号 English is a required course in most colleges, and a student must pass it before he earns his degree. 3) 用分号连接两个句子 English is a required course in most colleges；a student must pass it before he earns his degree. 4）改成复合句：将其中一个句子变成另一个句子的从句 Since English is a required course in most colleges， a student must pass it before he earns his degree.
词法错误
6、介词错误 The students spend so much time to memorize the new words. (in memorizing) He is independent from his parents. (of )
汉化英语
很多同学受汉语思维影响，写出的虽然是英语句子，但却是汉语的 表达方式，没有考虑到英语的表达习惯，没有使用英语的句型、结 构，这样的错误是大家在学习写作时，一定要注意克服的。 下面是一些汉化英语句子，你能把它们改成符合英语表达方式的 句子吗？ The main reasons for the change have five points. After four years, they graduated from the university. Smoking cigarettes will do harm to our body. If a student only has knowledge of natural science, he will become a one-legged man when he comes out of university doors. Now is an age of information. How do they think of this novel? What is the price of the coat? The problem has two reasons.
常用的改正方法如下: 1) 把破句变成另一个完整句子的一部分。这时，标 点符号要做相应的变化，而破句的第一个字母应该成 小写字母： In ten seconds I made my decision---a decision that changed the next seven years of my life. 2）把破句变成一个完整句子，加进必要的句子成分； 或破句变成原来完整句子的从句： In ten seconds I made my decision. It was a decision that changed the next seven years of my life. If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to college, I don’t think money should stop him, even though in some cases it does.
赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只要一、二个 赘句 词，却用了冗长的词组或者从句。
Let me make one thing perfectly clear and that one thing is that one always want my readers to get the point of what I want to say immediately when they read my paper. 可该为：I always want my readers to get my point.
词法错误
5、代词错误 Anyone who doesn’t understand the lesson should ask their teacher to explain it. (his) People have tried to fight against the influence of TV commercials, it often proves useless. (but this effort) If one wants to excel in mathematics, you should do a lot of exercises. (he)
破句是串句的另一个极端---把句子的一部分当成 破句 一个句子。 In ten seconds I made my decision. A decision that changed the next seven years of my life. If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to college, I don’t think money should stop him. Even though in some cases it does.
词法错误
4、动词错误 He should go to that meeting but he failed to do so. (should have gone ) I have being studying English for five years but still not good at it. (…have been studying) The flood made great damage to the village. (…caused/did) My parents have always hoped me to become a teacher. (…hoped that I would become a teacher)
所谓串句,是指两个或多个句子串在一起,误当成一个句子。串句的表 所谓串句 现形式主要有三种
1） 两个完整句子只用逗号隔开 English is a required course in most colleges， a student must pass it before he earns his degree. 2) 两个完整句子不适当地用连词and连接 I intend to go with your brother and you may do as you please. 3) 两个完整句子串在一起 Students should be careful of punctuation trouble will result if they are careless.
(1) A. It is difficult to make an estimation of how much money it would cost. B. It is difficult to estimate its cost. (2) A. The time for learning is the time of youth. B. Youth is the time for learning. (3) A. He had the entire control of the whole trade. B. He had the control of the whole trade. (4) A. The process was performed in two steps. The first of these consisted of drying the sample, and the second consisted of weighing it. B. The process was performed in two steps: drying the sample and weighing it. (5) A. We find the situation that exists at the moment intolerable. B. We find the existing situation intolerable. (6) A. I think the time has come for us to leave. B. I think it is time to leave.
1) 2) 3) 4)
5) 6) 7) 8)
逻辑错误
1) While it cannot be denied that there are problems that need to be overcome, the project is expected to be a failure. (success) 2) Nothing of value was found; furthermore, the numerous items which were brought to the surface proved to be of great interest. (however) 3) Thanks to his hard work, he was rejected from that university. (In spite of ) 4) Recognizing who the customer was, the manager was most apologetic and praised the shop-assistant. (criticized)