基础写作大讲堂之中式英语(一)

英语基础写作之中式英语之鉴（一）

一、例句分析

1. So, I’m very love my mother and admire mother.

Therefore, I love my mother and admire her very much.

2. Up to now, she has been person who I respected.

Up to now, she has been a person who I respect most.

3. My father is a engineer, he works hard everyday.

My father is an engineer. He works hard every day.

4. She have big eye. Her dream is become a scientist.

She has big eyes. Her dream is to become a scientist./Becoming a scientist is her dream.

5. In general, she is a small girl. Now, she has five years ago. She like watch TV <<喜洋洋与灰太狼>>, sing and dance. I think she’s sang is very good.

In general, she is a little girl. Now, she is five years old. She likes watching children TV play series Xi Yangyang and Hui Tailang, singing and dancing. I think her singing is very good./ I think she can sing very well.

6. I love her ever much. Because she is unique.

I love her very much because she is unique./ Because she is unique, I love her very much.

7. I friend name is Xiaoyu. She is a beautiful girl. I missed she in a sumer.

My friend’s name is Xiao Yu. She is a beautiful girl. I met her in a summer./ I got to know her in a summer.

8. In my eyes My mother have a around face, big eyes, wide mouth.

In my eyes, my mother has a round face, big eyes and a wide mouth.

9. She always talking me “The ealy bird catch the worm.”she make money very diffculite, I much listen to my mother read. So, I very like my mother.

She always talks/says to me, “The early bird catches the worm.”My mother makes money very hard. I must listen to her and study hard. In short, I love mother very much.

10. When I in trouble. she always help me and inspire me. she not only my mother but also my good friend.

When I am in trouble/ When I have trouble, she always inspire and help me. She is not only my mother but also my good friend.

11. My father is worker, his worker is very busy. He like listens music. I like he.

My father is a worker. He is very busy every day. He likes listening to music. I like him.

12. My father is very kindness. He always than mother get up early. He do everything for our

family. I love he very much.

My father is very kind. He always gets up earlier than my mother. He does everything for our family. I love him very much.

二、从英语阅读中解密英语语言

Our next topic would be a great scientist in the 20th century, Albert Einstein. You know, Einstein was born in Germany in 1879. As a small boy, he was fond of asking questions and showed great interested in nature. From the age of 17, he studied in Switzerland. During that time, he did several jobs in order to continue his study. He first taught in a school, and then worked in a government office. In 1905, he began his physics research which finally let him to win the Noble Prize. In 1933, Einstein left Europe for the United States, and lived the rest of his life there. Besides physics, Einstein loved music very much. He often made music at home with his friends. He died in 1955, at the age of 76.

Welcome to our National Park, my name is Linda, your tour guide today. You have made a right choice to be here in spring, the best time of the year, because summer is a bit hot, and winter too cold. Our park is famous for its 20-kilometer long valley, a home to thousands of plants and animals. For today’s tour, we have arranged a 50-minute valley walk in the morning. You will see beautiful flowers, strange rocks, and natural waterfalls. Animal lovers can also have a closer view of different wild life. In the afternoon, you’ll have a chance to experience some enjoyable activities, such as boating and fishing. If you like, you may have a picnic by the lake, the best-loved activity in our park. Now, let’s get on the bus and start our tour.

三、仿写

以welcome to my school 或者 a brief introduction (简介) of a person为题写100词左右的短文。